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Chrysalis has attacked Equestria, and the Mane Six prepare to fire the Elements at her. Except this time, the Elements don't fire. The Elements have left the Mane Six, leaving them wondering why, and more importantly, what no longer bearing the Elements means for the future their friendship.
Takes place some time after the end of the season 2.
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This one has piqued my interest. I'm looking forward to future chapters now.
Oooo this is gonna be a run rabbit hole to dive down!
So wait is this like all the mane six or is this more of a accusation fic on what happened to twilight?
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It's on all the mane six.
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K
Very little I could say except that, thus far, it looks like a fairly intriguing story. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups look quite well done.
I'm guessing this pretty much ignores almost everything that takes place after the first two seasons (hence the alternate universe tag); meaning no Crystal Empire, Twilight is still a unicorn, no Castle of Friendship, none of the villains that debuted AFTER Season 2, etc. (though some of the species that debuted after Season 2)
Anyway, I wonder what Twilight and Spike are trying to hide from the others. Oh well, stuff for later chapters I suppose.
At any rate, I'll very certainly be looking forward to more of this, but will also respect if real world concerns get in the way and patience becomes required.
Okay, I'm officially intrigued.
I'm going to guess both A Canterlot Wedding and The Mysterious Mare Do Well have something to do with this, am I right, or am I right?
More. Please. Now.
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You're right on one of them
What are you hiding Twilight?
Once again good work.
Why is there no Chrysalis or changeling tag?
Hey there. And yeah, this IS a good interpretation of what might have happened if Twi's "Canterlot Wedding issues" were NOT addressed off-screen (which I'm going to assume they WERE in canon simply because the writers were running short on time) . And, to be fair, Twilight DID have a bad history of believing things to be a lot worse than they actually were ("Lesson Zero" and "It's About Time" being excellent examples of that) and WAS making pretty extreme accusations without hard evidence, so one could hardly fault her friends for not believing her right away, even if she WAS right this time (well, mostly; she did NOT think Cadance was an impostor; she just thought she was EVIL) . So, it's a "looking at it from BOTH sides" type deal.
And, yeah, I will definitely be curious as to who Twilight and the others find to replace them, but I will very certainly be willing to be patient.
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Because they are only passingly mentioned here.
I hope dragons will be the next bearers, This way they could finally show ponies that dragons are not always who they assume to believe.
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It takes place "sometime" after season 2, meaning you can place this story whenever you want to.
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You may just get your wish
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Thanks.
I'm assuming in the sequel, there will be new bearers, but honestly, I hope Twilight will just learn to believe in her friends again.
So Twilight blames herself for the breaking of the elements.
Ok nopony was innocent during the wedding.
Twilight-Freaked out and got no proof
Shining Armor-decided his baby sister was less important then a pony he just met (and dont even try and say he was mind-controlled)
Twilights friends-decided to be arrogant and not give her the benefit of doubt
Celestia-Being stupid and lazy as always.
Why end the story
Great story! Really intrigued by the notion of a sequel—assuming that is still in the cards, of course.
:)