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draygan


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I bet Fluttershy's death screams were the most arousing.
Excellent work, too.

Could've used a little more of an intro and more interaction with Applejack. The premise Discord set up was too straightforward.
Also, the ending was a bit dark in a way that really felt like the story was toying with the reader, especially with Discord's slight changes to the darkness of it.

Knowing Discord, He likely has the other 5 already reformed and with him by the time Twilight gets back to him. If those weren't just clones that is.

Goddamn fucking cliffhanger!

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