A Night at Fluttershy's

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rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #1 · Aug 10th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Bloody brilliant.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #2 · Aug 10th, 2021 · 4 · ·

I'm more into fatal stuff, and the "sucked in by the cum itself" thing isn't to my taste either. But Gods-damnit the rest of this, from the amusing scenario, (Fluttershy being upset at being woken up, and notably having bedhead, the mental image is hilarious) to the setup of it (Pinkie's term for masturbation is "playing solitaire", and just the thought of Fluttershy staring at Rarity's lady-bits...), and the perspective of Rarity in Fluttershy's balls, is so good I don't care at all.

This is exceptional, and once again draygan, you've proven that you are an increasingly good writer, which makes me happy to see, since there are those who have great ideas, but suck at making them land (and don't try to change or examine why some don't like their work). You can bring your ideas, simple or not, to a home-run pretty much without fail in my eyes!

ChronoTheChangeling

ChronoTheChangeling #3 · Aug 17th, 2021 · · ·

Awesome job. You always leave me hanging wanting more or bringing up ideas like big Mac? That would be a good alternative end imo but still awesome as always

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