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This is some damn good work draygan! I am glad to see your work has improved so much, I am glad I checked out your recent stories
and this was the 'BAD' ending? X3
You keep mixing things up!
You say the alternate ending is bad in the description, but then the alternate ending is the good one where Rainbow is happy that she rid the world of Scootaloo. I swear, you get confused easily.
Good fic though. If anyone complains, tell them to go suck it and then go write more delightfully weird shit.
Also I want liquefied foal corpse came all over me.
That went... really fast. I mean it was still hot, but the raunchy scenes were like, 2 paragraphs,
Die
Delete this fanfic and go to the inferno
Draygon needs his innards removed and go rot in hell!
GO TO HELL AND BURN THERE draygan 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
No it’s not, draygan needs to get his heart ripped out of his chest and needs his body cremated 🔪💔🗡🔥
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YOU TELL ME TO SUCK IT, YOU SUCK IT HEADLESS RAINBOW, YOU WANT TO GO TO HELL TOO? 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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You mean the Hell where people who want random strangers to die for liking things they don't like go to? Sure, I'll have a look.
Edit: They got banned, so I guess the mods disagreed with them on who should go to Hell.
"Apllebloom"
Typos aside, hot as this was, it could've used some more detail on the sex and maybe more thinking on what happens to Scoots, plus some actual answers (is Scoots' soul or something inside them? Will the foals basically be reincarnations? Could the cum be taken out of both to reconstitute Scoots as well as have them become pregnant with Scootababies?)
My big issue with this alt is that the other two fillies don't even come in and chat with Rainbow about what happened. I also would've liked it if Scootaloo was somehow still aware and alive as cum (and able to communicate with Dash), but that there was still no chance of saving her once she was in the stomach.
Whoo my first hater! I've made it as a fimfic writer!
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Why? Troll or do you actually care? I know the clop isn’t great, but you don’t have to be so harsh do you?
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you could always just not read the story and get a life
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I posted those comments a year ago. I won't read the fanfic again, but it's weird coming back to see these messages.