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Um. Wow.
I don't think I can finish my lasagna now.
Why I was eating while reading this, I don't know but yea. I'm officially not hungry anymore.
oh god its so horrible make the blood stop!
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Wow... so all three of the CMCs got eaten. Interesting, I wonder who they ticked off to cause that.
Ooh, hard vore. Mmph!
I know where to put this..
Aw.
It lost me a bit from the start there, but good show? anyways. The ending there was...a bit too far, as well. it leaves so much unresolved, and i know its horrific smut, but it's just going too far on a lot of it, for what you set for par
I sorta wish Sweetie had been absorbed into Rarity, as Rarity fully digests her down to nutrients in her flanks, forever a part of her sister.
oh, this must be based on that one pic by shdingo, right?
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no, hard vore is only when there's chewing/biting/cooking/cutting involved. Basically, if the prey is not still alive by the time they enter the stomach.
digestion afterwards has no bearing on if it's hard or soft vore.
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You would be absolutely correct. That's precisely the inspiration for the fic.
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Hmmm... check the third chapter again, close to the end. You MAY notice something... off about something.
...slice of life? You just depicted horrific child death of three innocent kids at the hands of-I mean...the situation was contrived enough with Rarity doing it to her sister. But the others? That's not just unbelievable, it's kind of insulting to the characters. This comes off like a snuff fic. It's not satirical or funny, it's just cruel. Theres voraphile work I can recommend. This isn't one such instance.
And NOW I give it my like for trolling with Chapter 3 being the end. X3 Normally not a fan of graphic fatal (or after vore) but good job with this one.
This is quite well done, I especially like how it was All Just A Dream at the end, I found the Shining Armor story (as stated there) wanting, but this is pretty good, my only bit is that I personally found the digestion went a bit deeper than it needed to but that may just be me, regardless good work
. Not enough soft vore and/or scat on this site. Adding a like for this interesting interpretation of shdingo's work. I must say that adding Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo and Applejack/Applebloom was sorta unnecessary though.
I know this comment's late, but do you think you can do this same thing but with the other two? A sort of "change in perspective"; Hard, fatal vore is extremely rare around here; being you did mention them, going by Chekhovs's Gun, a writing principle saying that if something is mentioned, it has to make an appearance; so knowing that they have to make an appearance.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" said sweetie belle, crying and running away as fast as she could
Now the only question is : Nightmare or premonition ?
Also i do love references so here it is (WARNING CONTEINT SPOILERS OF THE MOVIE 'SCARY MOVIE')
RUN BI*CH RUUUUUUUUUUN
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fjHGTeTtaac]
No no don't go into her bed I would looking my door after that kind of dream
Whelp, that was utterly fucked up. Happy it was all a dream and hope it doesn't become some horrific prophecy!
Most Excellent.
a magic toilet.
Umm if your describing what she saw how are her e yes being descibed???
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Umm no toilet can flush a FUCKING SKULL 💀!!
sweetie belle fucking dies nooooooooo
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dreams don't follow logic. hence the episode 'for whom the sweetie belle toils' reality is always first-person, dreams however can occur second and even third person in sweetie's dream, luna is believed to have merged both sweetie's and rarity's memories of that night then recreated it from two perspectives...
Very nice
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Wha? Hard vore is if you're biting down, crunching. This was soft vore