Twilight X Derpy, Im calling it

Quite the exhibitionist today Pinkie.
Derpy housebroken, Twilight effectivley contained
Now only Sweetie Belle remains.

laughed at Derpy's Wingboner moment.

ooo can't wait,Bet twilight's gonna be down there for a long time and.....Nightsould played as derpy and scootaloo and twilight when scootaloo wasen't around and you played as twilight pinkamena and scootaloo when scootaloo was around,Im so confused

For the love of Celestia please stop making this disgusting series. Cupcakes was bad enough and you continue its fucking awful story.

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NightSoul played as Twilight and Derpy when Scootaloo wasn't around. The cast could've also been written like:

Derpy + Twilight (when Scootaloo's not around) / Scootaloo --- NightSoul

Except Scootaloo's more important so I had to put her before Derpy and Twilight. Notice how Derp and Twi is separated by a "+" and not a "/"? That means they're grouped together.

Away Mr. Negativity, for we are not amused.

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Is it any consolation to say that Derpy will not die or become seriously inured in any way?

1296489 i really dont care as long as you keep a interesting story

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ye of little fath this is only the start! mwhahahahahahahaha!

dude you still put derpys name where pinkamenas shud have ben: [Derpy placed a hoof on the mare's cheek.] you did that not me.

1296481.....wow you guys are so confusing

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At least it works.

1299326....ok then........

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I read it and loved i. Awesome work there Pinkamena666 and Nightsoul. you two have inspired me to write my own story.

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Thanks and good luck on your fic. Just as a side note, NightSoul and I role-play the roles out. Hence the Cast section at the beginning of each chapter. Not sure if this helps. Maybe you can try your hoof at role-playing with others or perhaps somepony you know.

Unfortunately i don´t know anypony who could proof read or roleplay with me, but thank you very much for your advice.
Before I could upload the story I had to translate it either way. 1317988

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Translate?

1318102 I am from Germany so my usual Language is German.
By the way I planned to write something about Pinkie Pie too, i hope that doesn´t bother you?

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Oh, no. It don't bother me. After all I have Sgt. Sprinkles (the writer of "Cupcakes") for the inspiration. He invented the character of psycho murderer Pinkamena. I just took it to the extreme in "The X Series".

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Says you.

twilight X???? BRB going to get a mountain of powdered donuts and a gallon of chocolate milk

Any one else thirsty for blood? or more like LUSTING for blood.

For, like, the last seven chapters, I made and thought about an OC being "the-one-who-got-away".

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Actually... I won't take this into consideration because there IS character development and I, as well as NightSoul and 42+ other people like it the way it is. Sure, I'll work harder at grammar, but that's it.

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And, yes. The X Series is an RP.

awesome! now, on to the paranoid Twilight!

2624779 True, I once tied my 'friend' to a tree with her small intestines. Then I popped one lung and used the tissue to gag her. She wasn't very happy, but I was.
But the most FUN part was to cut a kidney out ( not to blow my own trumpet, but I have a rather large collection of kidneys, surprisingly they make a good wall insulation ) and shoved it down her throat, it was marvellous because she could not cough it back up for the lung tissue was preventing it from doing so. Her gagging reflex went wild.
It was truly amazing, I was at a loss for words, the amount of pain she was in was... Inadequate. Unfortunately, she had to 'leave the party' (euphemism) a bit to soon

What can I say, bloodlust is a useful trait to possess...

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That is all

2095126. Ooooooo me me me me
I love drinking mine or others
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

ONTO TWIIGHT X FORWARD HO!

Hmm...is it bad that I find this a funny as hell? ........I think I should invest in some therapy.........hehehe....................

Hmm...this is like the third or fourth time I've read this...and I STILL can't decide which one I like better this or Twilight X? Still awesome either way!

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Mind if I quote you for the cover art?

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Yeah I'll fix that tonight

You know, when I first started reading this, I kinda got a bit wigged out, but now, It's getting quite interesting. Keep up the good work.

This is what I hear at the end:

fast forward to 2:08 for what I'm talking about. I'm serious when I say that's what I heard and for it to REALLY make sense sinc up pinkamena slaming the door with the last 10 seconds.

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That was my intention

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But she still murders. In my opinion, Serial Killer is a more specific branch of Murderer. Like how we are all MANkind but Women is more specific.

Pinkamena is so awesome...you inspire my rps

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Hold on, lemme count... 1, 2, 10! YOU'RE RIGHT!!!

1318138 You do realize that the Cupcakes fanfic was written before Party of One even aired.

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But Mr. Sprinkles did start the murderous side of Pinkie in Cupcakes from what I hear. The look with the long mane started in the episode but not the character.

5406703 But the story was written RIGHT in the middle of season 1 of MLP, sometime between Call of the Cutie and Winter Wrap Up and we first saw straight-haired Pinkamena in The Cutie Mark Chronicles and Party of One. That's about 14 eps apart from each other Call of the Cutie and Party of One are. I clearly don't know how the straight-haired Pinkamena and the poofy haired Pinkie Pie from that fanfic(Cupcakes) got merged together. Also while I HATE Cupcakes I love your The Pinkamena Series.

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Well, if there's any artists out there willing to illustrate scenes from any of my fics I'd be deeply honored, that's for sure. :)

I'm flummoxed, I'm looking at this and thinking that it isn't my cup of tea, but it actually has surprisingly good ratings for what it is.

Is this worth reading? It certainly seems like... something?

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This turned into an RP with a friend so a little ways in the writing may suffer but the character interactions become stronger. So, if non-professional writing and short chapters are okay for you, and you're okay with clop and violence, then you may enjoy it ^_^

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Have you read "The Secret Life of Rarity"? If it's anything like that, I'd be more than happy to read it.

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I have not even heard of that

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"The Secret Life of Rarity" is a gory horror/thriller trilogy by The Brony Writer. It is very good,