"So you like BDSM torture?" Yes, yes I do. On another note, what is with the random HORRIBLE spelling and grammar sentences in the middle of otherwise perfect paragraphs? Like this one: ""Well, it's hard to explane\ but in short i comprestd my snake part into myself with her in it shes in my stomic right now"
As much as I enjoyed this, I couldn't hep but cringe at the spelling mistakes. I feel slightly messed up since it was only the spelling that made me cringe
"So you like BDSM torture?"
Yes, yes I do.
On another note, what is with the random HORRIBLE spelling and grammar sentences in the middle of otherwise perfect paragraphs? Like this one: ""Well, it's hard to explane\ but in short i comprestd my snake part into myself with her in it shes in my stomic right now"
WARNING!!! MINOR SEX SCENE TOWARDS THE END!!! IT IS HIDDEN BY DEFAULT!!! IN ORDER TO VIEW IT, SET THE PAGE BACKGROUND FROM "LIGHT" TO "DARK"!!!
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you need to take this out:
"Stuff it in her mouth."
The filly tied her mouth open with the rag, making it so Fyre wouldn't be able to close her mouth. "There."
As much as I enjoyed this, I couldn't hep but cringe at the spelling mistakes. I feel slightly messed up since it was only the spelling that made me cringe
Damn it..... I cant read any sex scenes on my kindlefire...... screw u.....
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It's now been fixed. Sex scene uncensored in this chapter. I shall now work on the rest.
Clever, flame pony afraid of drowning
Woah! Seriously thought Ruby was gonna get it!
I thought she already put the cloth in fryes mouth