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mechafone


Hi, my name is Chris. I love the MLP universe, and I just wanted to share my ideas and read some new ones. Thanks!

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One early fall morning, just a few months after the Nightmare Moon
incident, Rarity spots a mysterious creature running through town. She goes to
Twilight for help in identifying it, but there's something that Twilight isn't
telling her. Rarity/Twilight Mystery one-shot, takes place in my Spark Storm
universe.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

I found this to be short, but pleasant to read. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Well I'm happy you enjoyed it, thank you for reading! :twilightsmile:

But... she knows Spark? If Twi is in Ponyville it must be set long after he became a "relatively" common sight to his old friends in Ponyville, including Rarity. Maybe it is in a slightly alternate universe or something IDK.

Also, I rather like the heroic side to Rarity you give her, she gets a lot of hate but she is actually pretty cool in my opinion.

hmmmmm, must be way after Raisin (for the life of me I can't remember how that was spelled, all I know is my brain saw raisin every time) I haven't read the next one after that yet, it must take a completely different turn from the other two if he is so estranged from everypony... now I'm very interested

I feel really bad for Emerald, he kind of gets the short end of the stick more often than he deserves.

I liked it, I wonder how Tia feels about Spark after the birthday party though. This was a nice little not-so-one-shot, a nice glimpse of some of the other characters in your universe.

1301212 :D Thank you very much for the views. It really does mean a lot to me. This story was written before I had all the details of Raison Detre figured out, so if you want to call it an alt version of the future, that's all right. Not everything from the one-shots will make it through to be in the final version of LOP, like how things are now, most of the ponies there accept him and probably wouldn't mind if he came back. It's mostly his own misguided guilt that keeps him from making himself public.

1301246 Ahh, that makes sense, I should have realized that was probably the case. But, it doesn't need to be canon to be a good read, ya know?

1301264 :D Indeed. I'm glad you see it that way :)

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