Hi, my name is Chris. I love the MLP universe, and I just wanted to share my ideas and read some new ones. Thanks!
Note: Read this first!
Spark Storm is a pegasus that can't fly. During the first ten years of his life, he will discover things about himself, some things he desperately wants to know, and some things he wished he hadn't found out. Along the way, he meets five of the mane 6 in their school days, makes many friends, and makes some lifelong enemies.
Dark rating for death in final chapter.
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First!
And btw I like the intro...
MOAR
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Plenty more, thanks for reading :)
So I'm still in the process of reading, and the story is great up til Chapter 11, where it seems like time jumps to when Nightmare Moon appears, then....Chapter 12 is right back to where 10 leaves off. Was this purposeful?
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lol I apologize for not really making this clear, but the special preview chapters are from Spark's future.
This story will be done in five arcs, and I'm in the middle of writing the second, which is Raison D'être.
The special preview chapters take place during FIM Season 1 and 2, respectively, they're just stuff that I have planned that I decided to share.
Edit on the 18th of August: I have since decided that this will be a -six- arc story.
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Ooh, ok. Was just a bit jarring and confusing is all XD Thanks for replying ^.^
Ok, wow. I've read it all, amazing story. I will suggest the 'Sad' 'Dark' and 'Tragedy' tags for the last chapter, that was unexpected.
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I totally agree, but I don't know to tag individual chapters :(
I'd probably tag the full story and make a note that it's for a specific chapter. ^.^ Those are some horrific bullies o_o;
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^ Yeah, that's what I had to do, just mark it dark and mention that it's in the final chapter. Don't worry, River got his. It won't be mentioned until the final arc comes around, but River got his.
what the fuck
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lol sorry for the confusion. I've gone ahead and posted in this chapter what the special previews are for.
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OK if u say so
Sooo cute!! /)
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poor sparky...
Awww Sparky!! He's so cute!
you're doing a wonderful job with this story
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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
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Just how it worked out. I hope you keep reading
Good though
Yay big mac!
Ooooo neat!
Hahaha Anorax
It's 12 in the morning, but this is too good to leave it alone! I love your story!
SPARK STOOOORRRMMMMM!!!!
i love this story
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:D I'm very happy you approve!
swag
Gah. I can't believe I did't mention this earlier, but Sapphire Snow is not my own creation. She belongs to a fellow fanfiction writer on fanfiction.net, named firewolf27. Much love and props to this up and coming writer :D
Also from fanfiction.net, Slidz - Flash Fire, baritonegirl - Lemon Pop,
We haven't seen Flash Fire yet, but she'll have joined the 'Fighters' by the time Spark Storm gets home from this mission.
I dont know if I'm crying tears of sadness or joy!
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Dun dun dun!
I feel da emotions commen on
He got da swag
Great story. Can't wait to read more!
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I'm happy you've been enjoying it!
So it begims
I must say that I am surprised by your choice to have Trixie be a Ponyvillian, much less a student in the same class as Rarity
I'm interested to see where this goes
That was a short chapter
Was there a mention of the color of the white pegasus' mane? I don't think I saw one...
Haha cute
Spark seems to have quite the life ahead of him.
Things are getting seeious! *grabs popcorn*
I must say though that the Looney Tunes reference was a little jarring. I just wonder how Spark would know who Pepe is?
And River doesn't exactly think things through, does he?
Wow these chapters are short, haha! Really good light reading
And Spark's only 4?? Wow I thought he was like 6! Pretty mature for his age
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Stole my comment!
Haha, I think it should read: "The stare his mother was giving him was terrifying, and he wondered for a moment if all mothers were capable of such terrifying stares."
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Well this is a little embarrassing. Trixie just kinda fell out of existence here, but no one's mentioned it yet. I'll have to take her out of it whenever I get around to rewriting this. Don't worry though, Trixie has a brief but interesting role in Raison Detre.
1096052 My favorite chapter of this story, and the last scene is what inspired my first fanart
1096104 He usually does, it's just that he doesn't care.
1096134 He abruptly left the house, screaming something about mare cooties.
1096204 That would make more sense, but I wanted readers to compare that to Fluttershy, and Fluttershy isn't a mom :P