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  • E Hooves, Plush, and Magic: The Untold Tales

    This is the place for side stories, origin tales and plot bunnies for my fic: "The Wizard and the Lonely Princess". So come on in,
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  • T Widening the Lens

    When the Elements of Harmony defeated Discord, they did their job too well, and completely undid all
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  • T The Wizard and the Lonely Princess: Hallowe'en Special

    [i]When I was younger, Luna, and later Nightmare, told me that there things that lurked...[/i]
    16,651 words · 3,672 views  ·  375  ·  12
  • E The Bonds of Friendship

    For the first time in a long time, Princess Twilight Sparkle and the rest of the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony are having a nice get together...
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  • T Shinji's Nightmare

    Having returned from being absorbed into Unit-01, Shinji finds himself in a decidingly odd situation
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  • T How I learned to stop worrying and love the Changeling

    Having been summoned back after being sucked into a portal, Twilight and Chrysalis are... making out
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  • T Harry Lefert's Drabble Bin

    This is a place where I store tribbles, drabbles and ideas.
    10,639 words · 1,387 views  ·  69  ·  4

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  • 49w, 5d
    Heading to Hal-Con

    So, I'll be heading to Hal-Con this weekend and I am pretty excited as I finally managed to get this weekend off. I want to see the FiM panel especially. I would like to know what other events for FiM might be happening around the Con though. Hopefully I'll be grabbing some nice swag there.

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  • 60w, 6d
    Widening the Lens

    Now, people have been asking me about when I am going to post a new chapter of Widening the Lens. Now I am happy to report that I am putting together the new chapter and it should be up in the next two weeks if everything works out as I am hoping. On that bit, we'll be seeing things get a bit closer to the events at Hippocampus being resolved.

    10 comments · 682 views
  • 77w, 4d
    Shinji's Nightmare: Preview of the future

    Yes, I am still working on it. And for those of you interested, here's a preview, great thanks to Madfish for the modified song:

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    Alicorn fly, discover hope's reality

    Soar now Moon Child find a brand new family

    Moonbeams, starlight and space

    Give chances of joy if you'll just make a start

    But can you be free of the pasts that you flee?

    Share your choice and you may just see

    Just once you knew innocence

    Stolen by the loss that birthed this darkest mass

    Would guarding those who still have that lie

    Make your joined hearts heal up or die?

    Now you find there that there's choice must be taken

    Those doubters will understand thee

    Take flight on this new path, the Elements guide you

    What you were is not what you must be!

    Born, betrayed, cast out, find a change that calls for ye

    Remade by the will to stop another yesterday

    Emotion flow now, reconsecrated harmonies

    Learn now, be strong, beyond dissonent history

    Stand firm! Wings flare! Horn against all difficulty!

    Soar now Moon Child together you are family!

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    Ritsuko whipped her head around and looked at the Bridge Bunnies as alarms blared around them. "Well? Any comfirmation on what it is yet?"

    Makoto rapidly typed at his keyboard until he got his answer before he looked up. "Grey Waveform Pattern confirmed!"

    Misato gritted her teeth as she slammed her fist down, it's impact having dented the metal on of her desk. "WHAT THE HELL?! Another Deva?!" She growled deep in her throat. "That's the fifth now..."

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    The four Evangelions stood on the seaside while the T-RIDEN-T took position among the JSSDF armor units in the hills. All of them keeping an eye on the naval group floating a few kilometers off shore. Inside Unit-02's cockpit, Asuka gripped her control sticks tightly as she looked around. "COME ON YOU BASTARD! SHOW YOURSELF!"

    Inside her own plug, Rei just blinked as she opened a com window to Asuka, two more showing Shinji in Unit-01 and a female pilot in Unit-06. "Pilot Soryu, in do believe that what you are doing is called 'Taunting Murphy'." She then noticed something on a monitor and raised an eyebrow. "And I do believe that you are about to-" She was cut off as many miles out the naval group opened fire on something in the water, N2 depth charges being deployed as well as shells and N2 torpedoes causing massive water domes to rise and fall as they hit something. "Get you wish..." Rei narrowed her eyes as she prepared herself. "It seemed to have survived."

    This was puncturated as a moment later the entire naval group slowly rose on top of a dome of water like some child surfacing below his toy boats in a bathtub. Back on shore, as a massive shadow fell over the Evangelions, Asuka looked at her pallet rifle and then back up. "Scheist... I think that we're going to need bigger guns..."

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    The reporter held his hat on his head against the hot wind as he brought the mic to his throat. "Justin O'Neill, BBC, reporting from the Italian island of Scilly on the lower slopes of Mt. Etna. As you can see behind me, the volcano is going through the sixth consecurative day of erupting in what may be it's most active eruption since the geological upheavels follwing Second Impact." Him and the camera shook as a rumble filled the air and the ground trembled. "Volcanologists are stumped as to the cause of the recent activity-"

    They're all knocked off their feet as an explosion blew out a portion of the mountainside within view. Someone then screamed. "OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?"

    The cameraman and reporter stumbled to their feet and looked toward the site of the explosion in time to see several massive draconic heads emerge from the boiling ash cloud, each one having a facemask like that of Sacheil. The reporter paled as he made the sign of the cross. "Mary, Mother of God..."

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    The Russian General leaned back in his chair and chuckled as he watched the battle in the viewscreens that dotted the walls of his office. "I wonder Third Child... Will you live up to expectations and possible potential before you find Salvation..." He sipped at his drink and laughed. "Or will you find only Damnation?"

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    The US Marine felt sweat bead on his forehead as him and his Squad slowly moved through the alleyway silently, fully alert as they searched for their query. "Sarge? You hear anything?"

     

    The Sergeant shook his head. "Not a peep, Son. The other Squads haven't found the bastard yet either, so don't let it up. That thing is somewhere nearby so-" He was cut off as the wall next to him exploded outward, sending him flying into a wall as a roar was drowned out by a hail of gunfire and screams...

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    From where he stood behind Gendo, Fuyutsuki frowned as as he watched the screen. "The Deva's crossed the boarder into Turkey, Ikari. Won't be long now until they call us in."

    Gendo barely nodded. "Yes, as is expected."

    The Sub-Commander shivered some. "We were lucky with Leviathan, Ikari." he glanced at him. "I'm not liking our chances with this one." As all he got was silence, he sighed. "So, what are they naming this one?"

    Hidden behind his hands, the Commander's lips turned upward as he answered. "He whose footsteps cause the very Earth to quake... Behemoth..."

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    Misato slowly stepped up behind the bandaged Shinji as he stared out across the cityscape of Tokyo-3 as night fell. "Shin-chan?"

    He just sighed. "First Angels and now Devas..." Shinji turned to look at her as his mane fluttered in the evening breeze. "This war has just gotten much more complicated..."

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  • 87w, 1d
    Thoughts on "Magical Mystery Cure"

    This has been a very polarizing episode. To be frank, to me it was heavily rushed and had a lot of what might have been happening cut out. This is likely due to the Execs wanting to finish up the season quickly and turning what should have been a two parter into a single episode and thus it suffered from it.

    If I use this in my fics, it is very likely going to be expanded upon in the background. For example, Twilight is very likely going to do research into what exactly the spell might do before she even thinks of casting it like we've seen her before. In other instances, she studied first before performing a powerful spell after all. Twilight is also likely to layer protection over protection in the room where she performs it for the simple reason to be sure, and then she males sure that no one else is there that could be effected by the spell (like what happened in the episode when she cast it with no one around). Is she going to not worry about the EoH? Not really, but she'll dismiss her thoughts since not even Discord was able to do anything to them.

    On Celestia, she might well have an idea as to what the spell is supposed to do, but can't figure out how to fix it. She's been around for so long that she's set in her ways and recognizes this. But she still worked at it for a simple reason...

    She's lonely.

    She has lived for centuries and seen many, many friends pass away due to old age while she hasn't aged at all. The only Alicorns in existence is her and Luna with later Cadence. And Cadence she worries about because one day, Shining will die from old age if nothing else and she fears for what that might do.

    So, she turns to the one unicorn whose knowledgeable and powerful enough to fix the spell and whom she can trust fully.

    Twilight Sparkle.

    After all, Twilight approaches every new bit of magic with fresh eyes and excitement. She's still brimming with imagination, a strong will to succeed, and most importantly, able to see things and consider ones that Celestia herself might have missed or dismissed out of hoof. If anypony could do it, it would have to be Twilight Sparkle. And if it does turn ponies into Alicorns, then Celestia, Luna, and Cadence would never have to be lonely again and, in time, perhaps their subjects as a whole might join them if they wish.

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  • 104w, 56m
    Real Life Can Be Stranger Then Fiction

    No, really it can be. I was looking through the Megathread over on SpaceBattles when I came across something that shocked me. Now, there are very few NGE/MLP crossovers out there.

    And then I find that GAINAX might have a few fans for MLP...

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Harry Potter was a lonely boy who one day wished for a friend. Luna, trapped on the moon, wished for the same. And so their wishes are granted. How will the two deal with each other? And what about Nightmare Moon? Needless to say, their lives are going to change in both expected and unexpected ways...

Other stories in the Lonelyverse:

Hooves, Plush, and Magic: The Untold Tales

The Wizard and the Lonely Princess: Hallowe'en Special

Chapters 9-11 now re-written.

First Published
5th Dec 2011
Last Modified
11th Sep 2014
#1 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

keep it up:pinkiehappy:

#2 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I like this story.

#3 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Not bad, can't wait to see more:twilightsmile:

#4 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Love it, very well written.

Must have more!    

#5 · 150w, 1d ago · 3 · · Chapter 5 ·

And now we get to the good parts!

#6 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I was so prepared to not like this.  I mean, really.  I didn't want to.  But now I've looked at it, and it's utterly charming, and I want more.  I'll be tracking.

#7 · 150w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I am Loving this Story, this story is getting tracked.

#8 · 150w, 17h ago · 2 · · Chapter 5 ·

When I started reading I had a few mixed feelings about this, but I'm glad to say that this was acctually pretty good.  If you keep writing, I will keep reading.

*SPOILERS*

Please keep writing, I really want to see peoples reaction when they find out he can already do magic without a wand, and I REALLY want to see Draco scared s**tless by little Nightmare.

#9 · 150w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Oh my goodness. All of my money.

I loved the original series, but this... THIS! This is fantastic! The characterization, the dialogue... and that one thing they never touched upon in the actual books: how Harry managed to do all those things in the first book before he got his wand. They always say that the wand is what makes the wizard/witch able to preform magic, yet Harry could do that without one. WHY DID THEY NOT NOTICE THIS. THIS COULD HAVE BEEN A PLOT POINT, but now... Now it shall be EXPLORED!!

With 20% more pony, of course.

-=SPOILER=-

Do I see a hint that this young human boy is influencing Nightmare in a positive way? That perhaps now that she has someone she cares about, selfishly or not, she might be "redeemed?" Perhaps leading to an alternate ponyverse where the elements were not needed on that night? Where twilight never went on her adventure and became good friends with the others? Where she stayed secluded and anti-social?

... this leaves me conflicted. on one ho-HAND I wish to see Nightmare redeemed, on the other, I want Twilight to have friends... There can be only one, and it saddens me.

-=END SPOILER=-

NONE THE LESS! Carry on, good sir or madam. I TRACK AND 5-STAR THIS WITH ALL MY BEING!

:rainbowdetermined2:

#10 · 150w, 11h ago · 1 · · Chapter 5 ·

Nightmare Plushie!

You have yourself a reader!

#11 · 149w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I wonder how Harry, Luna, and Nightmare will react when they find out that unicorns do exist in his world, I'm not sure how they'll react to them giving hairs for wand cores but oh ho ho will they have a FIT when they find out what's going on in the forbiddon forest.

#13 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

>>53292

not a huge harry potter fan ...read all the books saw the first and second movie when I was a child... though as i grew older I kinda grew out of it....

since u gave it a shot i think i also will...

#14 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

My body is ready for the next chapter.....:moustache:

#15 · 147w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

moarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoarmoar please:pinkiehappy:

#16 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

>>86323 I concur

#17 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

Moar. My hunger for a new chapter needs to b sated :flutterrage:

#18 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

GREATEST CROSSOVER EVAH

Great story man, I absolutely love it, I never thought I'd fall in love with a Harry Potter/Friendship is Magi crossover but this story proves anything is possible.

Love Nightmare Moon in the doll, reminds me of some of my fave anime's right there :pinkiehappy: I am really looking forward to chapter 7 and beyond.:heart:

#19 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

This is so awesome i'm you combined  my two favrioute things. thank you so much:rainbowkiss:

#20 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

This chapter is consider one of my X mas gifts, it would be awesome if Nightmare Moon became his Anti Dementor charm cause of all the happy thoughts She gave Harry.

#21 · 147w, 2d ago · 2 · · Chapter 6 ·

he knows...

well of course he knows. he's Albus-freaking-Dumbledore. He knows everything there is to know about everything.

A wonderful Christmas present this be. Looking forward to more.

#22 · 147w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

This is so much better then the original harry potter. love the work.

#23 · 147w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 6 ·

Also I hope this isn't just a complete copy of the original series. I'm kinda hoping things to change a little, ya know. OMG im secretly hoping harry visits Equestria... THAT WOULD BE SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

More Cannon firing in 3 seconds.

3...

2...

1...

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRR!

#24 · 147w, 1d ago · 1 · · Chapter 6 ·

>>86861

I was thinking the same thing,

Dumbledore knows of nightmare moon and maybe even her history...

But YAY! New chapter! :yay:

#25 · 147w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 6 ·

I wonder why the connection with his wand feels distant? Could it have something to do with his exposure to Luna and her teaching him magic?

#26 · 147w, 13h ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Woah.. Luna and Harry have more in common than I thought o_o;;

#27 · 146w, 5d ago · 3 · · Chapter 6 ·

Lol, I can see some foalish Sytherin, Namely Draco disarm Harry in a wizard duel only to see Harry using his hands for magic :rainbowlaugh:. Can't wait for that :pinkiehappy:

#28 · 146w, 5h ago · 4 · · Chapter 7 ·

is it just me or is harry starting to act more like a ravenclaw then a gryffindor:moustache: oh but i luv how this is going keep up the good work.

ps. nightmare moon is starting to become good that's just adorable

#29 · 146w, 4h ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

To be frank Harry should count himself lucky that none of the wisarding world are too observent. If the Gobblins can pick up on his inneractions with Luna others can aswell yet noone else seems to yet by all rights Bill should have. Nightmare can hide in plain sight given her form of inneracting with the world, though granted she should be more carefull given that even the toyshop owner said that living toys with her level of inteligence are quite the rarity.

That all said I like where this fic is heading though I have to wonder just how big the ripple effects will be here. Dung is for the time being out of commision for Dumbledore, Harry knows a deal more about magic in geniral, and may be less easily swayed to the wisarding worlds ways given that Luna and Nightmare came to him befor hand. Also something tells me that whatever plans Nightmare has for that crystal can't be enitirly benighne.

#30 · 146w, 3h ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

An interesting read to be sure, not too many spelling errors, tracking for now :twilightsmile:

#31 · 146w, 2h ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

I was so thrilled when I found out there was a new chapter for this fic. This is my all time favorite fanfic for MLP FIM! Keep up the great work!:pinkiehappy:

#32 · 145w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Loved this Chapter.

I want to compliment on your amazing character portrayal, it feels like I'm reading about people and not fictional characters. The interactions, emotional and character development and the new way of viewing the Magical World are what sets this story apart from so many other crossover stories.

This chapter was just pitch perfect and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter, I really hope this fic goes on for a long time. It's something I really enjoy reading and re-reading.:heart:

#33 · 145w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Socks! I love you..

#34 · 145w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

excellent i will watch for updates in extreme anticipation

#35 · 143w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

love this story, found it funny how you used Lunas love of socks here.

Also, why is the last part underlined?

#36 · 142w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

>>151145 Ah, sorry about that. For got to put the / in the last [ U] there.:facehoof:

#37 · 142w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

been waiting forever for this! THANKS!

#38 · 142w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Excellent chapter! And now we're heading for Hogwarts!:yay:

#39 · 142w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Man I loved this chapter. There are a few times when you put her when it should be she but other than that this chapter was perfect. Like this story is perfect :heart:.

If there is one thing I enjoy it's the sensibility you have given Luna. She is reasonable, diplomatic about meat eating, a good teacher and actually teaches things Harry Potter will need to know, like Mundane/Muggle studies. I always did wonder how Wizards filled out their Tax forms/tax returns.

Nightmare although not featuring as prominently as Luna is still full of personality and amusing little quirks you are adding over time. I enjoy reading every chapter of this story and when you put something into your story, you don't let it fall by the wayside. Like the Magical Trunk, I was a teensy bit worried you'd go and forget to mention it again. But I am happy to see I was wrong and pleasantly surprised by it.

Harry continues to evolve, moulded by Luna and Nightmare's friendship, I can easily imagine how very different the events of book one might play out. I hope this story goes on through all the books. Granted this story would probably be well over a 100 chapters long. But at the current pace of updates and new chapters, and the level of detail and story put into each new chapter. I am very happy to wait for new chapters since they're a joy to read. This crossover is just so well executed I want to rant and rave about it's awesomeness into the night.

Keep up the good work leferts :heart:

#40 · 142w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

I'm looking forward to seeing how this different Harry interacts (or doesn't) with the Hogwarts crowd.

#41 · 142w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

I don't usually read Harry Potter fanfiction. But when I do, it's this story.

#42 · 142w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

>>53953 "on one ho-HAND I wish to see Nightmare redeemed, on the other, I want Twilight to have friends... There can be only one, and it saddens me."

Why should it be only one there?

Celestia doesn't know she's being redeemed now.

So she'll send Twilight to Ponyville anyway.

#43 · 142w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

All i could do from reading this is...D'aaawwwwww!Have some stars!:rainbowkiss:

#44 · 142w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This story is good.After all your choice of ponys is amazing!I do after all think that Luna is best pony!:yay:

#45 · 142w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Luna and Harry are a match made in FIMFiction........Still great story so I THINK I can give you more stars and if not then have atleast a nice comment :pinkiehappy:

#46 · 142w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

Luna is best pony.......Harry Potter is best wizard......This story is...........AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR

#47 · 142w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

#48 · 140w, 1d ago · 4 · · Chapter 9 ·

The term GENIUS doesn't describe how smartly this is written. A very, very enjoyable story. I'm loving every single update. A pleasure to read, and an enjoyable story overall. :twilightsmile:

#49 · 140w, 1d ago · 3 · · Chapter 9 ·

A Harry Potter fic focusing on Tonks while in school? As a possible Harry mentor? And semipowerful!Harry?

Heck, this story would be great even without the ponies.

Nox
#50 · 140w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 9 ·

I'm liking this so far, but...I just have to address my few small fears here.

This isn't going to be another Harry Potter fic where Dumbledore is seen as a manipulative controlling jerk and gets his plans shoved in his face because of it, or Ron a dumb, narrow-minded kid who never makes friends with Harry, is it?

I know you haven't really indicated these things YET, but...with Nightmares response to  Dumbledore's machinations in Harries life, and how Ron has been shoved to the side a little bit, I feel I must ask these things NOW before they actually would show up if they ever did, to potentially nip this in the bud. I've enjoyed the whole story so far, please don't ruin it with those overdone bits of character bashing.

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