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Theponywriter22
Hello, im going to be honest with you stright from the bat, I do have Dyslexia. But I always try my best. I won't write horror just beacuse im not good at it, other then that I will write anything.
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I like how it is so far. Keep it up.
Where can I find Ninja-8004?
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On deviant art
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Thank you
A new story?
When the hell did this happen?
Ok
So far, so good
I like these characters and the insert into the first movie is pretty clever
I look forward to see where this going (which guessing by the tags isn't as calm as this chapter)
This was pretty good
The romantic tension between fluttershy & Anon is charming and the way he's inserted into the movie I think is pretty clever
I'm curious to know if the rest of the story will follow this similar tone or if it will take an unexpected twist
Looking forward to more
Your doing great guy. Keep it up.
once again, a sweet and fun chapter. as always I enjoy the interaction, the way he ties into the first movie and it's calm and charming tone (which may not last longer going by the tags) I'm also curious if sunset will still be reformed in the end or if this story will take it a different direction
And I'm proud of you too man. I think the whole jealousy bit on our shy is incredibly cute. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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...Where on deviantart?
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I'm not sure to be honest just type his name and look up his art you should find it
huh, didn't see that ending coming
looking forward to where it goes next
This story is cool so far, but in the scene where they all transform, it says "honesty" where it should say "kindness".
I say go all the way. Keep doing chapters and all the movies. Maybe some chapters of anon and shy in him getting used to his new obtained power leading up to the movies.
Considering flashes band goes nowhere anon lucks out joining a band that becomes popular. Flash haters of the world unite..lol. Turning this into a supernatural story I'll admit is a little disappointing but that's just me. Some might like it. Was looking forward to regular school slice of life kinda stuff. But still willing to see where you take this story.
I'd love to see where this is going. So the answer is : Pls do more chapters. Maybe even some background information about Anon.
If this is the case I would also like to see if you are going to include the anon a miss Drama into it. Just saying it's completley up to you.
this was a really suspenseful and dramatic chapter
as for where to go with it, the continuation Into the other movies idea sounds cool
you could also skip years later to graduation or maybe continue the story between films one and two
also, i would love it if you delve more into the vampire element, perhaps how their lives go, if the other girls find out, does it effect/alter the other movies?
its up to you, i'm sure it'll be awesome no matter what you choose
i would love to see this continue into the other stories
I liek da story duh story iz gud
i like the different tone this chapter takes and how it takes a break from the events of the first movie, almost feeling like a Gothic action story at some points (also, nice way of incorporating the flutterbat name)
i look forward to seeing the relationship continue and how anon adapts or struggles to adapt to his new form
can't wait for next time
Hymn.... sorta conflicted..... I wanna say I like it but having them rip out throats sorta kills my image of fluttershy being the element of kindness. Her using the stare and hynotizing her victims into submitting to her and anon being the one to beat them into submission so she can use the stare woulda felt better in my opinion that way they could safely feed then have them turn themselves in with no memory of why they did it. Turning them both into murderers is sorta off putting. How would her friends react to them being murderers if they find out. It's your story so whatever just not my tastes.
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Actually now that I'm thinking about it actually like that way of doing it more thanks I think I might redo this one just the whole killing part thanks.
wow that ending
I've been reading quiet a few Halloween stories lately and this one is my favorite (makes more wonder if there will be more seasonal chapters)
i'm expecting to see some sort of love triangle and it's clear you're really trying to make flash out to be the biggest jerk
a simply can not wait for next time
Fffffffffffuuuuuuuuuudge. Here's hoping shy is as understanding as anon is.
ok, a few things
1. that ending was quite unexpected
2. anon seems to have chemistry with pinkie, are they gonna get togther as well. before long, he'll end up dating all the mane 7
3. The Power Girls: Age of Maneiac should be a spinoff fic you could do one day
4. as for a villain (apart from the already exisitng EQG villains), i'm thinking either another vampire (who could be either fluttershy's ex, a fellow canterlot high student or even a family member) or perhaps another type of classic monster (like a werewolf or something) or maybe even a villain from Equestria. I would more like to see the first idea personally but i'm sure i'll enjoy whatever you choose
5. what will happen to sunset?
looking forward till next time
I don't care for the pairing, fluttershy doesn;t feel the same about Sunset and can't forma herd withher and Anon.
then they should never slept withe ach other, it's wrong o me.
He jsut two timingher even if she knows about it.
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Or it could be a vampire hunter. Or better yet the leader of a group of vampire hunters. Also I take it the herd idea was from sunny' s brain.
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Yeah
That's a cool idea
I could see the character being somewhat similar to L from Death Note
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I've never read sunny's brain
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No I'm not having Anon date all of the main six, pinkie is gonna be his closest friend just friend. And I like the idea of vampire Hunters as the bad guys
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Ahh. Okay. Perhaps I explained that wrong. I meant did she come up with that idea?
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Don't worry that's not the last you'll hear of this. Fluttershy will make comments about his betrayal.
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Oh lol no it was from Fluttershy so she could make it easier to cope with or to make it less awkward.
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You don't get it. He still dating Sunset, and even if Fluttershy can't see her as a lover as well.
If all three were together yes, but it not that way at all.
So it two timing and betrayal, for the both of them even if they know about i, friendship can only go so far in this traingle.
See it crashing and burning bad.
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Well you'll have to have to wait and see if their relationship crashes and burns
i like how this was a return to the more laid back chapters from the beginning of the story
though, i did notice there were much more typos than usual. i know this probably can't be helped but it was kinda distracting and some of the sentences didn't make sense. i might suggest a quick proofread if you can find the time
but still, it's a good chapter
also
there are others?, will we see them soon?
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I Have edited the story and thanks for the heads up and I also added a bit more to the story also
would they be the other vampires?
WIll we see them next chapter?
what a great note to end on. i can't wait for this to come back (though i'm sure the xmas story will be good)
i love how you dived more into the vampire elements at the end (marble pie being one was brilliant)
all around a really good chapter, now here's hoping to a great comeback
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any chance of this coming back, make for cute one-shot spin-off
(Ps. thanks for the shout out)
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I hope to dive into even more detail about vampire world soon and we'll Marble was just such an under used character. So I thought why not it would be much more interesting. And I don't plan to make spin off sorry, if there's a call for it then I will consider it. And no problem I hope your story goes well.
his baby blue eyes turd blood shot red and two sharp teeth grew at the front of his mouth
Heh, turd
Oh wow love king it so far I usually stay away if I see gore but I am glad I looked at it
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Thanks for that I edited it
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Thank you for looking at it and don't worry the gore was basically about the vampire bites. I won't going into real details when it comes to that sort of thing. Also I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I have a quick writing tip for you, if you permit me!
Common conventions put a comma before the name when characters address one another in dialogue. That's done to avoid ambiguities. Here's an example why:
Versus
As you can see, that does change the meaning quite a bit. It'll make things much easier on your readers!
So glad to see this story return, sorry you couldn't get around to your xmas story though.
Anyways, as for this chapter. Fluttershy and Anon continue to share a like-able chemistry and his one with Sunset does make for some interesting conflict . Anon still struggling with being vampire is quite intriguing and would be great if it's further explored. I also love how we got to spend more time with the mane 5 in this chapter, they were a lot of fun and would really like to see more of them interacting casually.
Overall, it's a nice return to a calmer form and I'm excited to see the story progress
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Thank you that really helps.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it it's good to be back.
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Don't mention it! Good luck with your writing!