I have a quick writing tip for you, if you permit me!

Common conventions put a comma before the name when characters address one another in dialogue. That's done to avoid ambiguities. Here's an example why:

"I want to come inside Rainbow Dash!"

Versus

"I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!"

As you can see, that does change the meaning quite a bit. It'll make things much easier on your readers!

So glad to see this story return, sorry you couldn't get around to your xmas story though.
Anyways, as for this chapter. Fluttershy and Anon continue to share a like-able chemistry and his one with Sunset does make for some interesting conflict . Anon still struggling with being vampire is quite intriguing and would be great if it's further explored. I also love how we got to spend more time with the mane 5 in this chapter, they were a lot of fun and would really like to see more of them interacting casually.
Overall, it's a nice return to a calmer form and I'm excited to see the story progress

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Thank you that really helps.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it it's good to be back.

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Don't mention it! Good luck with your writing!