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Shuffle Suite, an outspoken boy is about to enroll in Canterlot High. His life will soon be turned upside down when he meets a certain stage magician then things really get turned up for the teen. Shenanigans will ensue
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All right! A POME story with Trixie! This ought to be good!
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What's a POME story?
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It's a group of stories all intertwined in some way
Here's a link for the entire set
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/208931/pome-library
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POME stands for the story that started the whole group: The Pie of My Eye!
One word: Trixella!
Something tells me Shuffle and Zero are gonna be good friends.... We'll see as the story continues.
Hehe Trixtella
Love the cover art!
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Thanks ragga muffin suprised me with it and I was blown away myself
I guess I have to thank you twice now. One is for the 'shout out' for me editing your story (first time I tried I hope I did well.) Secondly for the small mention of my OC.
As for the chapter itself, things are getting interesting. A star wars lightsaber?! Awesome! And it seems that Shuffle and Trixie are finally going to meet each other! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh boy! Now things are getting interestiing!
Oh boy, there's gonna be major confusion and a misunderstanding.
Well shit. If thats not an upcoming conflict I dont know what is.
WAIT A MINUTE.
Now it begins
Im waiting for the confrontation. Shuffle gonna be mad, Sunset gonna be confused, everybody gonna be confused.
Whoa, now things are getting interesting.
typos
"today I was verbal. attacked by him."
"D8nalky"
"ty8ng"
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I looked for the ty8ng error can you point it out, please,
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"The entire class was stunned into silence, Sunset was the captain of the Canterlot High Fencing Team, so her ty8ng with this random kid was something no one expected."
is the full sentence
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Ok thanks dude
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np
I sure hope things get better
Oh come on! Just when they're about talk things out you have to stop there. Still good chapter there dragon. Looking forward to the next.
dem typos doe
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OH COME ON I COMBED THIS 7 TIMES what did I miss?
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ninja typos m8
not bad but ya still need an editor.
There is a group all about looking for editors if ya didn't know
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Honestly I didn't
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He put it mildly, for the record, because you're in dire need of an editor. But the idea of the story is alright, even if Shuffle's getting real close to cutting himself on all that edge.
I dislike Trixie's mother.
I WONDER WHY
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and then shuffle gonna be super confused when learning about equestria
wat?
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thanx for the catch, apparently Grammarly says that's a real card
It was good, especially the Halloween prank, but the ending seemed rushed. Other than that, whoa.
Nice chapter, and Shuffle is actually starting to become likeable.
Nice update
What an update!
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Thanks, I appreciating your continuous support of my work.
Great update. And wooooow that jab......
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Jab?
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Sorry, insult.
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Ah, ok
Anyway, when’s he ever going to apologize for being rude in the first place? I take it never? Either way, keep going!!
Good chapter
You should link to Ragga_Muffin's profile. Please respond to this comment.
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Why? Beyond early edits (which i gave credit for) and the story pic (which has his name on it) he hasn't do e anything for the story.
Whoa.......
Keep going!!!
Umm, isn’t Trixie short for Beatrix or in some cases Patricia?
Who’s talking here? From context I think the father but the last part of the paragraph throws me off. He says that Trixie needs to learn to let go of the magic but then he’s defending it.