Spike comes to visit Ember only to hide away in a pile of gold. What he sees afterward will change his relationship with her, and its something Spike would never expect from Ember. its Something that needs to be hidden and what would happen if its something the dragons would laugh at her.
Read here to find out.
Meh, it's okay I suppose. I'm not a fan of Ember having a girly side, frankly because of how weird it simply is for her character, but then again as we know so little about her given that she's only had one episode so far with her as a lead, who knows?
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that is fine
I liked it
How does Yandere Ember sounds like?
Nice job!
Even though I don't ship Ember x Spike, this was still a cute little one-shot!
However, the grammar could still use some work. It's not bad. It's still very readable! But grammar is still an important factor in telling a captivating story.
Oh hi mark
This was a really great story, but you do need an editor.
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yeah i do lol
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I'd be glad to take a look if you want me to.
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ok
I honestly thought she was going to be an Otaku, but when I first read this, it was before smolder was even a thing. So yeah eerie.