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Horizon Spark


Writing My Little Pony stories for you so I can one day become an amazing author! Please comment and tell me what you think.

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A story between a foul-mouthed, runaway griffon and a friendly dragon who bond in the stormy mountains.

An old story request I finally had the time to finish writing for a friend. I hope this was worth the wait...because YOU asked for this. Thank you for commissioning me BTW!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

This is great i knew you would warm up to the idea of the ship sooner or later man.

The writing is good and solid. Characters need some work. Spike is a little too dorky. Gilda wanted the town to be nice, yet she is quite mean. It seems a little backwards. Also the story was all over the place.

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