A story between a foul-mouthed, runaway griffon and a friendly dragon who bond in the stormy mountains.
An old story request I finally had the time to finish writing for a friend. I hope this was worth the wait...because YOU asked for this. Thank you for commissioning me BTW!
This is great i knew you would warm up to the idea of the ship sooner or later man.
The writing is good and solid. Characters need some work. Spike is a little too dorky. Gilda wanted the town to be nice, yet she is quite mean. It seems a little backwards. Also the story was all over the place.
Well this needs more