Supernova
And now my time has come.
I, Twilight Sparkle, last holder of the Element of Magic will soon join my friends and family in the White Plane.
I can only hope that they are proud of me, for what I have done in my life by following their advice.
I hope I've changed the world...
I apologize for the shortness of this story; I kind of rushed through it because it was too sad for me. :c
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Putting this on my read later. I'd read it now, but I'm not in the mood for a sadfic
A short sadfic? *clicks Read Later*
Oh look, its a comment, woopie fucking do, stop reading this.
I'm talking about the comment I'm making, the storys Fucking great, READ IT AND NOT THIS.
This made me cry, AND I'M THE GOD-DAMN AUDITOR!
Got bored, loved the story, wrote a 3rd person end. Do you like?
Within the dark winding hours of the night, Twilight watched as Spikes eyes fluttered closed. His breathing slowed, and the movement of his chest began to halt.
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There was a spell that could give unicorns wings. The same one, as a matter of fact, that Twilight used on Rarity. Twilight's days where winding down, and there was one last place she wanted to adventure to. One last subject she wanted to learn. Twilight wanted to fly. Her older age made the magic hard to accumulate, but after minutes of concentration, it worked. Outside of the library, and in the bright sun that Luna rose, stood Twilight. With a flap of the wings and calm mind, she took to the skies. First passing over Sugarcube Corner, over Rarity's Boutique, over the trees of Sweet Apple Acres, past the Everfree forest and the old cottage that was placed near it, and lastly over the cloud home Rainbow once lived in.
Twilight wanted one more thing, aside from learning about flying. Aside from taking to the skies Rainbow always loved to be in. Twilight wanted to go out with a bang. She flew higher, getting closer to the top of the sky, closer to the sun. The suns heat began to radiant over the wings, causing them to decompose. With a smile, she felt herself fall, and closed her eyes. It was only time, before she would finally.....
Want to cry? Read this story while listening to Linkin Park - In My Remains "Like an army, falling, one by one by one"
It is complytely understandable that a short ending was in place.
this has to be one of the factor even if the plot was used. I will look forward to see more from you.
This was really good an emotional. I wish I hadn't read it, but in a good way because it made me feel so much.
After I read this, I listened to Smile, Smile, Smile, and all I could think about was the first chapter. Amazing job.
Contains pony deaths, don't wanna read, because it makes me feel bad feels.
I'm guessing Pinkie dies from snorting too much sugar.
896322 That was the best add-on to any fic ever in the history of fic writing ಥ﹏ಥ
897259 Thanks, I guess. The story flow wouldn't support this though. I am glad that someone liked it
896291 Some of these I actually based on pictures.
896898 I don't understand why one WOULDN'T leave dangerous products on hard-to-reach places, and it wasn't in the kitchen; Pinkie simply brought it in there after taking it from Pound Cake. And as for Applejack, I believe a feeling of unaccomplishment/realizing she encountered a huge obstacle would be enough drive for her to try at least. And believe it or not, but warlords in Africa have been and still are doing things like this for quite some time. I set it up with the thought that Rarity's shop gave hope to the zebras and the warlord began slowly faltering from power.
896916 I did not give a clear reason, but I left tiny hints that Dash was rather brash, reckless and a bit of a rebel.
896924 I left very few indicators of the chronological orders of their deaths because I myself could not come to an agreement on who should pass first.
896940 Princess Luna is a lot younger than Celestia, and in my head canon a life freeze spell was put on her so she could learn from her mistakes.
897900 Well done. Fav and like for this
OH and another thing. I think i saw this on featured I don't know but page refreshed when i'm pretty sure I saw this story.
898874
CAN IT REALLY BE TRUE? DID I FINALLY MEET MY GOAL? (Foxi demands proof!)
898942 Lol I swear I saw it cause I clicked it and I got brought here
Before the picture loaded though
This was an amazing fic!
However, I think that Moonshine and Sunshine were very unnecessary. Moonshine didn't even have a similar flow to the rest of the story, and in my headcannon, neither princess can mate and, what ruined Sunshine for me, both are immortal.
This was otherwise a very good story. It was touching, and it contained some VERY good life lessons. Although I very much wish that you could have made it longer!
Keep writing!
>>superpinkbrony12 Agreed...
900089 I never really got the chronological order in my head right, but yes, they're all canon.
920635 Everyone has to die eventually.
*Hugs*
924249 img.ponibooru.org/_images/d4c54199371d1461308aa11a3ebb3b60/85222%20-%20rainbow_dash_pinkamina_diane_pie_hugs_crying.png
weird, short, cool = me gusta fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/270/f/6/me_gusta_icon_by_projectendo-d2zlsqe.jpg
what happened to spike during this?
960770 It's non cannonicle. He's doing whatever the fuck he wants.
960776 alright, sorry for asking
960788 I didn't mean to sound rude, sorry Dx
960855 its fine...i'm just trying to read as many funeral stories as i can, as i want to write my own story like that
out of all the chapters the Rarity one got me the most what a terrible way to go ouch
So..this appeared in my 'new chapters'-list again. I know the word count isn't high at all, but.. any change-log?
1187778 Nope; just a few spelling errors and punctuation, sorry. I didn't think it would alert anyone D:
1187910
Well, obviously it does inform users who faved it. We're stalking you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png
And yea, thanks for the information! Would have read it again any ways, but you know.. Guild Wars 2 and stuff.. okay only Guild Wars 2. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png
1187983 xD
Read this while listening to Dead Reckoning and if you didn't cry doing this, you're a bigger man than me.
And there is it again as an unread chapter. Changelog?
And this time I will read it again for sure!
1391783 Yes. Sorry. x.x
As my life continues I become more acquainted with the English language and correct my mistakes.
1391787
I know that feel, bro.
Wouldn't a bar wait for me, I would read it now. But alas, wenches and meat!
Ah, and where did that second notification come from? Not sure why I deserve this..
1391810 I have no idea what you just said
1391845
Chocolatemilkrain
Yea, this story is as beautiful as I remembered it. When I gave the first read-through to it twelve weeks ago, grammar wasn't something that I worried to much about, but today I can say that it's quiet neat. Also, It's incredible colorful written for the shortage. I'll say it again: A great piece of art.
Also, have a tiny grammar-lesson (useful or not
)
First:
-Ch. 1
I think there should be a dash (no, not Rainbow) instead of a semi-colon here, since a semi-colon is used to connect two sentences which are both able to stand for their own. However, the second part (not even [...]) can't do that because the verb is missing.
I would say that you want to show an addition here, that is rather unsuspected (right?). To connect such an element with a main clause the dash (--) is the weapon of choise.
Second:
-Rarity to Sweetie Belle in Ch. 3
Here I think that it should be "yourself and me". There is some fancy grammar about that out there, but you can also just simply decide wether it's I or me by splitting it up.
"Well, then you can help yourself.." Yup, that works.
"Well, then you can help I.." Nah.
"Well, then you can help me.."
Just wanted to point those two points out (hussa!) because they lead to mistakes quiet often.
Also there are still some typos here and there, like a missing ed or something.
As you can see, this is complaining on an advanced level, so yea. Great job, once more.
1395715 XD Thank you very much! Have you ever thought about joining the Prereader's Group?
1395729
Actually, I am in a proofreader-group already, what is kinda the same. However, I am only there for the skilled ones to proofread my own stuff.
Since English isn't my native tongue, I never would dare to take such a position. (Unless I am directly asked to do so, at least.)
A person who speaks it by nature surely is way more useful for such a thing.
And now I have to click through all the chapters again to get it out of the unread-list. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
1395824 I would have to politely disagree with you. You seem to have a better grasp of the English than I, who is a native speaker, and my mother is an English major and she taught me.
Upset about unread list?
Just you wait.
1395948 Imagine forcing yourself to write this
1396041 Sovenguarde offers no sanctuary to me, as the dark lord Sithis opens his ethereal arms welcomingly for me.
Well said good sir. ALL HALE THE VICTORIOUS DEAD!