I write about small pastel-colored ponies and do bad things to them. Ask me about anything, I love talking about my stories even more than writing them.
Sweetie Belle, unable to cope with recent events that have happened, wanders through the night, and remembers a dear friend of hers who is now gone forever. Now re-edited to be more in-line with my current style and skill.
The epilogue gives a bit more closure if you want it, but is optional if you don't. There is a sequel in the works, as well.
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It is done.
I cried. A lot.
I hope you will, too. In a good way, mind you. Remember, from tragedy can come blessings, as well.
That last line brought it all home.
Thank you.
H-Here's a challenge f-for you....
I want you to read this chapter,
while listening to this song:
IT will destroy your feels T^T
Great story.
I love sad stories... for some r-reason.
~Rosalynn~
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Holy... wow. Amazing ending, great story. I'm so glad you shared this with me!
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Thank you so much! You were such an inspiration for this, it means a lot to me that you like it.
*sniff*
Where could I find this fic?
I can see a sequel to this tale with Rainbow Dash dealing with her guilt.
Nice tale overall...do keep up he good work when it comes to future stories.
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That is what I am currently writing, precisely what i t's about.
I just released an unrelated Rainbow Dash fic as well that is quite a bit longer just less than an hour ago.
The sequel to this one, "Soar, Now, Higher Now" will not be ready for a while. It's going to cover an awful lot of RD's life. The basic plot for it used to be in the epilogue chapter, here, but I have removed it since I am writing it fully.
Thanks for reading.
Excellent!
Wow, just wow.
This is one of the saddest fics I've read. Masterful work.
I didn't read the epilogue, but I think this is fine by itself.
1067400 MY Feels! They are saddened and broken by your chalange!
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Ah! Gomen!
~Rosalynn~
Do you have any idea how hard it is to make me cry
Death of great grandmother silent
Dog hit by car nothing
Told i cant get into collage nothing
Parents divorce nothing
Sad at the time just not crying
Fall 20 feet from the top of a tree slam back on lowest and thickest branch nothing broken but still awake not a tear was shed
Foot run over but brother in car a scream but no tears
Person i trust suddenly attacking me nothing
Read this story you got a tear a single tear
Congrats you have won you have one of the few storys that can make me cry
And this has been happening more and more since i became a brony and for every tear i am closer to breaking down the cement wall between me and my emotions thank you sir thank you
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A single tear.
I'll take it.
I love this story.
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it makes me cry sometimes
To make this more emotional, try adding a strong final motivational statement to Scoot's gravestone.
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Here lies Scootaloo
The greatest faller in all of Equestria
Curse you for hooking me into this depressing tale!
now I need to search for said sequel
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It's not currently up anywhere, pending revisions. It WAS on my DeviantArt, but I took all my fanfic down from there.
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Eventually. There's a lot pulling for my attention, including The Conquering of Love, Broken Hearts and Busy Hooves, and my real life stuff. The sequel to this is only 2,000 words currently, and by my estimate would end up at least 20,000. A long way to go, and I'd feel silly finishing it before I even work on Broken Hearts and Busy Hooves more. Let alone that I've been taking a month per chapter on The Conquering of Love.
My biggest obstacle is finding the time to write and then not getting distracted by other things like TF2 or Berrytube.
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Im a terrible person
I didn't shed 1 tear
I never even got choked up on bit
Defiantly how they would react, well done
Hng my heart! Waa!
