The last night of a life...
Passing surrounded by your friends, and smiling as you fade.
A life ends, but not before some wise words are given.
Third thing I ever wrote. Was an experiment, and a attempt at writing something thoughtful. Helpful criticism is always welcome, and I would love to hear anyone's thoughts on a better song.
so sad good job
Well I found another song, but it wouldn't work for this chapter... so I have half a mind to go and make another chapter for this. Unfortunately I fear that it may not be the best plan of action. I like where this one ended and how it ended, so making a second chapter would be a difficult venture.
Take a listen.
I want to know what you think, that is if anyone ever feels like responding to this comment...
As always, thanks for reading... or listening as 'twere.
loved it. have you read Archmage