• Member Since 24th Jun, 2012
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ThePizzaDeliveryPony


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The last night of a life...
Passing surrounded by your friends, and smiling as you fade.
A life ends, but not before some wise words are given.


Third thing I ever wrote. Was an experiment, and a attempt at writing something thoughtful. Helpful criticism is always welcome, and I would love to hear anyone's thoughts on a better song.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

so sad :fluttercry: good job :twilightsmile:

Well I found another song, but it wouldn't work for this chapter... so I have half a mind to go and make another chapter for this. Unfortunately I fear that it may not be the best plan of action. I like where this one ended and how it ended, so making a second chapter would be a difficult venture.
Take a listen.
I want to know what you think, that is if anyone ever feels like responding to this comment...

As always, thanks for reading... or listening as 'twere. :raritywink:

:fluttercry: loved it. have you read Archmage

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