"In the depths of the night, over the far away castle, a pinprick of light catches my eye."
My first fanfiction written. The original chapter has received minor changes. The prequel chapters are currently hidden, for I shall get around to reviewing and subsequently rewriting them. This could take a few days, a few weeks, several months, or never be finished. Only time will tell.
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You good sir have create something that falls under the heart griping catagory and has filled my heart with poetry once again and i thank you for that keep up the good work
First fic? This looks like something somepony would write on their fith fic, if a little short.
FTW!!!!!!
Very nice work, probably too rushed, it wouldn't have hurt to have a bit of interaction between Twilight and Celestia before their first kiss.
Still, that was adorable
Well, I spent the entire time after submission biting my nails....I agree that more interaction would have been better, but then again, it makes for a nice surprise. Mind you that I made this up as I went, only had a few previously thought of sentences. Thank you for your words so far!
Definitely good. And I like the useless details, keep them coming.
It reminds me of some stories written a while back nearer the beginning of the fandom, before every story had to have a huge plot with twists and turns on every page. It's simple, it's to the point, but in that it's beautiful.
2105457 I am sad to say (not really) that I doubt I'll be writing ever again. Not a fan of writing, reading is a different story, though. Then again, I totally doubted that I'd post a story, so you never truly know.
Ah well. It was good while it lasted then. With you on the reading though. It's not a real day if I haven't read 10 chapters of something on fimfiction
2105561 I'm getting hit by the possibilities of a prequel chapter, to add more of a development and reveal for Twi's feelings, and maybe a small bit with Celly. So maybe there will be more.
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Lol. I would respond with something relevant, but I fear you might change your mind again.
2105599 I may need a reminder eventually, I'd easily throw such a momentous occasion to the back to my conscious! But, knowing my jerk of a mind, I'd be forced to write more
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Don't you hate it when your mind forces you to do something?
2106024 Only when I'm trying to sleep
A good little oneshot. I enjoyed this little read.
I saw the AU tag and had some initial thoughts, but they were wrong. You probably don't even need it, honestly. Ah well, it's not a big deal.
I disagree, though I agree that you DO need to redo Twilight's prequel. It would be nice to see her progression as it is to see Celestia's.
2115547 Adding the progression to Twilight's would be a task. I refuse to do similar flashbacks. It would become repetitive. Perhaps a longing for her childhood? Indeed, this will be complicated, yet there is no reward without risks.
To all who have read the story, or the comments beforehand, expect Twilight's chapter to be removed, reworked, and replaced very soon.