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Prince Luna


Dedicated writer who loves to work and think of new ideas. I hope you like my fanfics - my readers are very precious to me!

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I hope to read this you give your time, for this story is almost entirely in rhyme.
I live in the forest of Everfree, there is nothing that is new to me.
But one day, I did something I should not, something that affected me quite a lot.
In and out the effects faded, it's my intelligence that the plant hated.
This is the story of how my clumsy action made things not to my satisfaction.

YouTube readings:
TheCaptainSand: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HrZJDkk1Dss
The Living Library: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCNPgaEhlXM

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Comments ( 35 )

Pretty good, but the ending...why did I not see it coming? xD

That was hysterical.
I was wondering what would happen if she ever stepped in poison joke.
I was thinking she would just stop rhyming but that was funny too X3
Well, funniER than my idea.

This was amazing. Original concept, good rhymes, hilarious.

Now, Zecora, what on Equestria would Lyra do with fingers? Silly pony. :rainbowlaugh: This was awesome! :pinkiehappy:

Good... good.... OMG ENDING :twilightoops:
Oh you clever bastard.

That was awesome.

I've always wanted to write a Zecora story but i just can't rhyme:pinkiegasp:Good story:derpyderp1:

Very well done! Thumbs up for you, good sir!

I don't what else to say but I LOVE THIS.
The way you wrote it made me think the way Zecora was thinking, and it was just...aasdfasddf.:yay:

Great concept! Very funny, and you've quite a way with poetry.

I'd say something, but everything I want to say has already been said.

I applaud you sir :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::yay:

Great story! I love the way you characterized the effects of Poison Joke. Very funny :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

Wish Poison Joke existed here. Would be fun to have...

Oh Zecora, at least now you know to watch where you step. :rainbowlaugh:

887847 "first posts" get a 24 hour ban now...

890804
I saw, I just got the message.
I'm deleting it :|

moral of the story, rhyming will make you smart:ajsmug: wait this isnt right, is it?... hmm pretty flower... so blue... i fell weard nou... OH NOES ITZ POSAN JACK!

Best rhymes ever!

hilarious and funny read.

I :fluttercry: for the tree cos she hurts it. LOL:rainbowlaugh:

Pull yourself together, Zecora! Geez...
Anyway, I enjoyed this story of yours, good job! :raritywink:

is good to know that :twilightsmile: was there to help

And Lotus and Aloe are jerks.

Where did you get the cover art?

Hey, that was a pretty awesome story to read! I was relieved that Zecora was cured of the Poison Joke...until I read the last part. :pinkiegasp:Oh boy. Zecora, you better find the real cures for the Poison Joke, or those symptoms are gonna come back. :pinkiecrazy:

Wonderful. Have a thumb.

Amazing story, wanting to do a reading myself!

This was neat. I enjoyed the story being told through Zecora's view in her unique rhyming way. Reading her thoughts as she dealt with the effects of the poison joke helped make the situation more immersive.

I found one typo.:twilightsheepish:

Now I now what it is,

I wonder if Pinkie has a drink that...goes fizz...

This was a fun read. Stay awesome.

Great story, have a mustache :moustache:

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