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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
Wandering Pigeon
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Great story! An unexpected pairing but a great one.
8134054 Thanks!
And yeah, Glimmershy is kind of under the radar. I honestly wish more of it existed.
Not a huge clop fan. But I still enjoyed it.
8134077 Glad you liked it. I know clop isn't everyone's thing so I'm always a little nervous when I post a story about it.
Good, high quality smut including my favorite kinks.
What's not to love?
I loved this! It was so hot! We need more stories of Starlight in diapers!
8134232 Always happy to hear I've nailed someone's fetishes besides just my own.
8134240 Agreed, where's all the padded Glimglam?
8134280 And where's all the Great and Padded Trixie?
8134661 Crap, there are so many ponies to write about. *Cracks knuckles, boots up gdocs* Guess I'll be busy for a while.
Pretty good
8135481 Thanks
Huh.
Looks like Starlight's lust might have become her undoing.
I am amused that the ending cliffhanger was Fluttershy preparing to soil her diaper.
I wouldn't mind a followup with a lot less (As in absolutely no
) poop taking place when they meet again.
8135584 You are indeed correct.
8135801 Can't fault ya for not having the same kinks as me. Maybe some day I'll get around to another story in the vein, though I can't make any promises.
8134074
I definitely don't see much of Glimmershy anywhere, so it's nice to see something outside of the norm for once.
Come to think of it, it's been a while since I've seen any CheeriMac stories either.
8136380 It has been a while since Cheerimac was a thing huh? I think most people traded it in for Marblemac a while back, which is a shame.
8136381
While MarbleMac is really sweet and all, there is a chance that they're related and that pushes the envelope too far for me.
I smell a sequel if u know what I mean
When she said that I thought that perhaps the entire incontinent thing was a trap. That it isn't true at all and if the pony uses the diaper Starlight would know they were faking. After all if they believed themselves incontinent they wouldn't bother using it. That on top of Starlight's diaper fetish.
8136994 There's definitely potential there, that's for sure.
8137277 Either way, I think it's a pretty clever way to filter our the fakers. One thing that kind of bothered me in the show was that Starlight seemed to take Fluttershy's word a little too easily. If she just had a test of sorts to prove somepony had been brainwashed, her downfall may have been avoided.
8137403
That kind of confused me. What do you mean with that?
But also here Starlight doesn't seem bothered by Fluttershy's lie at all. Wouldn't she be upset about it?
8137407 Sorry, I mean either way as in, whether or not the incontinence part was a trap, it still served to show who was faking and who wasn't.
As for the lie, I like to think Starlight wasn't that upset because she had so easily gotten Fluttershy to admit it which made the whole thing feel less threatening to her over all. That, and her lust was a pretty big distraction at the time.
8137705
She would still be very angry. She would know that she can't let any lies go unpunished if she wants to maintain her control. The fact that she could convince Fluttershy so easily would be an indication for her to straight up try to blackmail or intimidate her.
With a little reworking of this one that could also serve as a sequel. Her trying to leverage Fluttershy to fully embrace it using the diaper fetish.
8137734 That's interesting, but I'm not sure. This was really just a clop without a plot type of story. If I ever did make a continuation, I would probably want to keep it relatively unambitious. But who knows how I'll feel in the future.
8137935
You don't have many strongly plot driven stories so why not try that now?
8137959
I could, but the issue there is I'm not very good at keeping a narrative going, so a plot driven story is going to be a taxing effort right from the start. That's part of the reason why I still haven't done a Living Nightmare follow up. It was far easier to write something like Suri's Modeling Gig or Stupid, Stupid Dress, because their plots were so simple that making them just felt like writing an extended one-shot.
8137992
The way I do it is to identify the plotpoints and just work from point to point, keeping track of the amount of words between each point. That could be a way for you as well.
8138014 That's the logical way to do it and all, but not really my problem. My issue stems more from the weariness that comes with continually writing for the same thing. I lose interest too fast, unfortunately. My fleeting spurts of inspiration are normally only good for very short projects in the long run.
8138022
Then try splitting it up into several sections so that you can do them one at a time.
8138024 It's not that easy for me. I can't just muster up the motivation to write out a designated slice of a fic. Once the will to write leaves then its basically gone for a while. I can force myself to try and write something, but it always ends up terrible. I've started over a dozen fics just trying to power through, but they all suck in one way or another.
I try not to wait around for inspiration to strike me or anything; I'm always trying to explore concepts and ideas that get me wanting to write solely because I know once I've found something I love I won't stop writing it until it's done. Forcing an idea or even just part of a story onto the page almost guarantees that I'll drop it out of disinterest. I don't know why I can't find a more efficient way to write, but I do know that everything I've tried to try and get me to write more has just fallen flat.
That's why I never promise sequels to stories, no matter how popular they get. If I can't bring myself to follow through, I'd rather not get anyone's hopes up or disappoint people with some unfinished, poorly written follow up. More complex plots with a lot more going on than one of my average stories are hard to write for that reason. It's exhausting, it's time consuming, and it's rarely ever any good.
8138055
I see. That's too bad
On an unrelated note: I really like that you are so responsive. Most people don't reply but you answer almost every question I ask.
8138063
Thanks. When I first started writing, I rarely engaged with my audience, but I really do enjoy discussing with people about my stories so I've been making an effort recently to talk to as many commenters as possible.
8138069
But I meant what I said before. I think Starlight took Fluttershy lying to her far too well. Not only are lies like that a threat to her power but as Starlight is such an idealist she would actually take it quite personally.
8138081 I hear you loud and clear. Pretty much the worst Starlight did in retaliation was threaten to stop touching Fluttershy 'down there' after all. In a more realistic scenario, it would've gone a lot worse for poor Flutters. For the most part I wrote it the way I did to keep the fic hurtling towards the climax, so to speak.
8138087
I get that but you should still try to keep the characters in character as much as possible. Perhaps Starlight starts growing suspicious which forces Fluttershy to keep things moving so as to distract Starlight. It could be very hot as well that she has to pretend that she's liking it but isn't entirely sure it's pretend.
8138098 Sounds good. I'll try and keep that in mind next time around.
8138175
Good, that was the main thing that made your previous work so high level. All the characters were in character.
I loved this a lot. It was hot enough to fap to.
I SIP IT
8202459 Ship
I really liked it! Maybe a sequal, I think Glimmershy would be extremely cute, especially with diapers!
You are wrong. Starlight Glimmer is cute and nothing will ever change that.