Take Two

Queen Chrysalis invades Canterlot again with new tactics. These methods, however, are a bit unorthodox.

(Do not continue reading if you do not approve of hypnosis, mental regression, or diaper lover themes. If you do not like it or are under legal age, please do not keep reading.)

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Reddened Chaos

Reddened Chaos #1 · Oct 10th, 2016 · 5 · 1 ·

nice~ I wanna see a bonus chapter of Luna being converted :P

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Oct 10th, 2016 · · ·

Not bad.

ThatRobotGuy

ThatRobotGuy #3 · Oct 10th, 2016 · · ·

I remember seeing this picture on derpibooru, and thinking "Hey, this could make for a nice picture for a diapered fic."

And what do you know, a fic was made. Good job with this story, scribe. It looks like Cadence and Shining are in for some diapered fun.

BlankFlankedFoal

BlankFlankedFoal #4 · Oct 11th, 2016 · 6 · 2 ·

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Account3

Account3 #5 · Oct 11th, 2016 · · ·

A thoroughly enjoyable read, would love to see a sequel.

Mix-up

Mix-up #6 · Oct 11th, 2016 · 2 · ·

I think it was great to see an other story with mind control AB/DL withing Shining and Cadence, but I feel that the taking over of the Crystal Empire and turning the ponies in Foals has all ready being explored by Raistlin Majere in The Foal of an Empire.

spacecardswell

spacecardswell #7 · Oct 12th, 2016 · 2 · 2 ·

The ending is such sequelbate, please tell me Celestia and Luna will be joining them soon.

marinus18

marinus18 #8 · Oct 12th, 2016 · · ·

Nice but again the story is extremely rushed. I would really love to see a much larger story from you that plays out at a slower pace.

LuckyBass13

LuckyBass13 #9 · Oct 27th, 2016 · · ·

as much as i see some potential in this.. i sadly don't like Doomed stories (Where the bad guy wins, end of story). This story could use more work on not only how everything was played out.. but also be a little bit more real.

superfun