Even The Sun Needs A Break

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #1 · Mar 18th, 2014 · 2 · · The Only Chapter ·

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Another nice little story.

Sky Hooves

Sky Hooves #2 · Mar 18th, 2014 · 4 · · The Only Chapter ·

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There are not enough storys like that with Celestia.

Nightsoul

Nightsoul #3 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 2 · · The Only Chapter ·

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Heh vary cute

spacecardswell

spacecardswell #4 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 4 · · The Only Chapter ·

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Another cute story, and a good twist, a twist that needs a second chapter.

Autum Breeze

Autum Breeze #5 · Mar 19th, 2014 · · · The Only Chapter ·

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I'll give this a read later, so I'm favouriting for a easy find later

Dark-Gold-J

Dark-Gold-J #6 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 2 · · The Only Chapter ·

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Luna did it

iamli3

iamli3 #7 · Mar 19th, 2014 · 7 · · The Only Chapter ·

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that's....not where you end a story.....

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Flutterpony

Flutterpony #9 · Mar 20th, 2014 · 1 · · The Only Chapter ·

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An adorable story and soothing read.
Celestia is best pony in my book. She deserves to feel cozy, safe, and cared for.

This fic is actually a bit stronger than Quiet and Empty Nights in my Opinion. You only deal with a single character in this one so it may have been simpler to manage.

Again, your character choice was what drew me to this one, and I wasn't disappointed. I feel the emotion better in this one than I do in other similar stories, maybe because I relate to Celestia better personally, and solo diaper play with a mystery caretaker at the end is just less awkward to me than a non-sexual couple of any kind. (Jury is still out on sexual since I've only read diaper fics without sex so far.)

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #10 · Mar 20th, 2014 · · · The Only Chapter ·

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4104752 Most likely. Celestia did tell the guards not to bother her, but she never said anything about Luna.

Dark-Gold-J

Dark-Gold-J #11 · Mar 20th, 2014 · 1 · · The Only Chapter ·

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4108490 THat why i said it was LUNA

Sunset-Chan

Sunset-Chan #12 · May 4th, 2014 · 1 · · The Only Chapter ·

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Celestia quickly closed the large door, locking it with it's large metal locks. She leaned against the wood and let out a deep deep sigh. "Finally," she mumbled out loud. "Alone at last!"
Suddenly becoming paranoid and cautious, the princess listens at the door for a bit. She hears the guard's hoofsteps echoing off the hallway walls as the sound faded. She waited a couple more minutes for any other sign of life...The wing was silent.

The sudden tense shift killed it for me, you should fix that.

This is a decent story, setting out to do its thing and doing it, but it left me underwhelmed. It might have been the formatting, which is unusual to me, said tense shift that just left me not giving a damn about this story anymore, or both. There's some spelling errors as well. For example:

... was told they were the plushest, softest, and most absorbent diapers around and they DEFIANTLY looked the part!

That and the ending was bad. There's no other way to tell you this, but that's how it is. The story just starts to move and then decides to stop, you could have had more age-play stuff in front of it, or given the last question more weight by introducing a few more characters in the opening act who might haver done it. As it stands, it just comes out of nowhere.

There's one good thing in here too, however, and that's Celestia. She isn't the obvious choice for ageplay, being a rather distant, almost god-like figure in the show, but you did a fine enough job with her, as in, I bought that she'd be into this. So, good job.