- Member Since 9th Mar, 2014
- offline last seen Jun 20th, 2018
scribe-feather
A frequent pegasus who posts infrequent stories.
scribe-feather
Joined 9th Mar, 2014 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Pony Medley · 8.4k words · 661 32 · 16k views
- ScousePone · 3.4k words · 399 52 · 18k views
- Appleloosan Psychiatrist · 12k words · 594 59 · 21k views
- The Abyss · 5.4k words · 1,415 95 · 38k views
- Nostalgia Schmaltz · 3.1k words · 447 37 · 18k views
- scribe-feather · 2.5k words · 93 5 · 4.6k views
- Mare Macabre · 6.6k words · 311 8 · 11k views
Featured In16
Clopfics11,553 stories ·15,817 members
The Writers' Group56,438 stories ·9,296 members
Slice of Life8,160 stories ·1,463 members
Straight Shipping6,611 stories ·2,895 members
Incest is Wincest4,021 stories ·5,199 members
Everypony is the Best Pony6,498 stories ·1,051 members
Horny Pony Porn14,051 stories ·3,136 members
Celestia's Library3,174 stories ·1,083 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.246 seconds
Total duration
1,044 users online
1,604,402 hits today, 2,167,270 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
'Bout time someone did a clopfic based off that picture.
Oh fuck- TWILIGHT!! You have some explaining!
Looking at Cadence in that picture, she has a facial expression EXACTLY like Shining, aside from mouth position.
Twilight.....
What are you doing?
4270768
Twilight (dont) stawp?
Whelp...I...I mean...
...it was...
So this exists.
Congrats Twilight. Not only did you get to have some "fun" but you my have destroyed your brothers mind in the process.
Next time use a flashlight spell, Shining.
HA! ive seen this picture before didnt think it would get made into a fic theres also another one where nightlight and shining are playing a card game and twilight is under the table doing them both
Wow. That was... wow. You'd think he would at least turn the light on to see what was happening. Also, where is that cover picture from?
4272188
NSFW from Derpibooru.
She's giving him a hoof job under that table.
I know, cuz' I clopped to it. C:
4272407 actually if it's ponies from the show that we are talking about it would be xenophillia since they do have higher thought processes and are able to speak a language other than grunts and groans. So xenophobic much?
4272462 get slapped with logic
4272407
You have earned my respect for the day, sir.
+1 Respect for the day
4272930
I don't favorite it, but every now and then I'll end up on the page of one and I'll read it just for the different genre.
I don't clop or even get closed to aroused by this kind of stuff.
And yes, I'm fourteen.
Problem?
4272954
bro, believe it or not: your favorites list is public..... i saw alot of clopfiction.
and don't worry about it, dude. you have good taste in fanfiction anyways
.
4273009
So what? It's wrong now for me to enjoy reading specific genres of fanfiction, even if they're really fucked up? (Plus that was a while ago, gonna delete some of it anyways.)
4273059
dude, why are you getting so defensive?
never said that. hell, i just said you have great taste in fanfiction. please don't get defensive and be a hypocrite like:
only to turn around and say you enjoy certain fics
4273078
Alright, you've got a point. Sorry, just a little stressed. I have a bit of work to do today.
I do read clop, I just don't actually clop to it. I kinda stopped reading clop for now since a few weeks ago, and every so often I'll skip across one. Some of them are absolutely terrible (this story is not one of them), some of them are actually pretty good. I do think, however, think you kind of jumped to the conclusion of if I don't masturbate to it it means I automatically don't like it.
And thank you for the good taste in fanfiction part.
4272407 Hey join in on the fun, buddy! We all know you would be the first person to jump to the opportunity to fuck a pony!
Please do not get into arguments in my stories' comments. I'm sure there's a group that was built specifically for that or an instant messenger you can duke it out in without having everyone else see it.
In other news
4272226
4272188
The picture is given proper credit in the author's note. It's links to the original line art by the artist which was colored by someone else.
Dafaq?
The Troll God has stricken Shining more powerful than anyone else on the world! Fun short though.
~OreoKookie
Wow! Good story. I loved the ending of it.
I'm gonna read just for the picture.
I GAVE YOU MY HEART AND THEN YOU TURNED AROUND!!
love this!
This story isn't very good, but not in a hateful way like something written by Dreamscape.
It kinda reads like your planning notes of a story. As in, you keep telling yourself what you're going to write, but don't actually describe it.
Also
Even aside from the stretched-out-capslocking, well, to quote Mark Twain, "Every time you are tempted to use the word 'very,' substitute it for the word 'fucking'. That way your editor will delete it and your writing will be as it should."
4278916
Interesting, so would you say the story needs more detail or slower pacing to avoid this 'notes of a story' feel? What would you recommend to remedy the problem?
As for the drawn out capslock kind of thing. I see it as a dip into Shining Armor's thoughts during the arousing experience considering that the story is relatively third person limited.
Honestly, I think the last part would have been a thousand times better if you hadn't gone with the "He thinks it's Cadance but it's actually Twilight!" at the last minute. It felt incredibly out of place considering the part immediately before it. Twilight just about got him off under a table. He even notes how "Cadance" seems shorter when she went into the room. At that point, why bother with the secrecy? If Twilight wasn't obviously already doing things like this with him, then that would be one thing (you could say she felt the only time she would get the chance would be if he didn't know it was her). That she was completely obvious about it just makes all the secrecy pointless.
Pretty much this. I was planning on writing my own fic for that image. I still might.
|
|
V
4279171 Look at some of the more successful stories. Look at how they do their stuff, analyize them. There is a slight formula for making a good story, but I have no idea what it is.
Cadence didn't feel the icky shit under the covers? Does she have the touch sense?
Needs a Part 2.
4283572
4283232
You both make a very valid point.
4283572 she did when she gave that "aggravated sigh"
4272226 Any idea who the artist is? On a side note, you saying "I clopped to it" combined with your profile picture gave me horrendously disturbing mental image. Which should also be made into a clopfic.
how well written and wow didn't think twi was that way oh well i bet shing will like to speack to his sis after that.
HMMMM; me thinks thar be a sequal coming.
Not very well-written, I'm afraid.
There need more Momma's Boy's in Equestria.
My Equestrian Cousin, when Celstia attends the show next week an assassin will kill her.
She so silly.
Math turns Twilight on.
I was going to say Red Flag, but this is Equestria, home of Ponyville. Nothing unusual about shrinking anymore.
First she has feet, now she has hoofs???