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strange, pleasant, and something else I can't quite put my finger on... it was a good read for what it turned out to be, and even though it didn't have what I came to read, it still had enough to make it a pleasant experience... though one has to wonder about those spells
Im gonna find that book...... id love to learn about teleportation
A new Sparkle-cest?
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Welp. That was interesting.
Not bad, but...interesting.
Why there is a teleportation spell in the same book of an orgasming inducing one again?
Pretty sure they are not in the same category, oh well
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Easy cleanup, duh
Damn. Just... Damn. I need a smoke and a shower. And another chapter.
4372415 I'm sure your right hand wants to forget the experience just as much as you do.
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For the adulterer's quick getaway.
I just finished the story. Very nice! I like it, and I wouldn't mind a sequel or two.
Anyone else thinking that Twilight may have just destroyed Shining's "normal" sex life.
Cadance: "Let's have sex Shining"
Shining: "Nah, now that I got this spell. I don't need you anymore. But I'm sure you'll make somepony else happy."
Twilight's desire to learn about sex reminds me of her in a couple other stories. She wouldn't take no for an answer in those either.
4372599 You may have forgotten one.
*shamelessly self-promotes*
For a first-time clopfic, this is god-like.
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I'll be watching your writing career with great interest.
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Well I was referring to the pestering of Shining for more information. Unless there's a part of that story I forgot about. Speaking of....
Twilight's initial reaction to Shining's... stallionhood reminded me of this:
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Anyways, great fic, really liked how you wrote the characters, and I really, really appreciate how you didn't decide to throw in the whole "Incest Guilt" thing on the end, I was getting so tired of that.
Great story!
I enjoyed it. Perhaps you would consider continuing it?
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It dominates the third chapter.
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Guess I should have been more clear. That's why I end up editing my posts all the time.
For your first clopfic that was pretty good. Really good, actually.
Aww, I was hoping we'd get to see that.
So for the sequel, she teaches him the spell, and then he gets some sexy turnabout on her!
Don't make me do it.
Should you write more clop? Hellz yeah! You just have to write a version with Twilight and Shining fucking, but first shining watching Twilight masturbate with that spell in her point of view;) sooo good!
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His story guys. Let's have him decide how to continue it, or not.
Still this was pretty good and very well written. If you want to write more I say go for it.
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4371894 Thanks very much! If you don't mind my asking, what type of story were you looking for?
4376275 if you want me to answer, the only one I can give is one that includes penetration...
4376290 Ah, I should have guessed.
Maybe something for a future story, perhaps...
4372156 The book was entitled "Strange and Exotic Spells," which I imagined to be a smorgasbord of obscure, difficult, or long-forgotten magic with only a single chapter dedicated to sexual things.
4372599 The thought had occurred to me, but wouldn't it be more fun for him to surprise Cadance with the female version of that spell?
4373277 God-like?
Why, thank you, sir! I'll be sure to check out some of your stories as well.
4373486 Thank you!
I must admit, I haven't noticed that pattern with incest fics, but I like to wrap things up pretty quickly after the fun is over.
4373846 Thanks! Don't know for certain if there will be a sequel. Depends on if my brain wants it to happen.
4374322 Glad you enjoyed it!
We'll see. Maybe someday...
Very well done, especially for your very first clopfic.
The descriptions are good, giving an easy picture of what's happening without going overboard, thereby maintaining the tone of the overall story.
What a tone it was; it's not often that you see something like this where it really feels like a learning experience rather than something overtly sexual. You managed to keep things erotic but never delved too deeply into the tactile experience, instead having the characters break it up with lots of more cerebral experiences and tangential thoughts on what was happening. While in most other stories that wouldn't have worked, the way that you've framed the story upto that point makes it work beautifully. Also, that last section from Twilight's perspective was so endearing to see it from her viewpoint and the desire to give Shining the best experience possible coming before her own needs.
I'll be very interested to see what you do in the future, and how you handle something with a bit more romance and feeling, where you'll need more sense description and emotion to really pull the reader in and immerse them in the experience just as much as your characters.
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Not to take away from those, but you two seem to have glossed over two of the very best in the same vein.
I really, REALLY liked the way you handled the dialogue, especially right from the beginning when Twilight first walks in on Shining and when she actually starts to look at his junk. I like how Shining almost plays this off as it's just a really weird thing (...which it is), but is reluctantly choosing to go along with it anyway, just to see where it goes out of morbid curiosity. Plus the casual back-and-forths when they're really getting into feel good, too.
I just really like that kind of dialogue as opposed to the more 'traditional' (I guess you can call it) response of extreme shock and awkwardness like this kind of situation would warrant in real life. I just like how they're so... casual about it all.
There can never be enough Sparklecest!
It'd be really cool to see what direction this narrative could take. Like others have said, I could imagine that after experiencing Twilight's magicjob, nothing else could possibly satisfy Shining. As a result, he'd have to go to Twilight anytime he wanted to get off. She'd also teach him the female pleasure variant so that he could return the favor.
This... could actually be pretty cool. The siblings would take turns magicjob-ing each other, thus toeing the line without actually crossing into full-blown incest (at least, not at first...), all while making sure nopony else finds out. During all of this, of course, Cadance would no doubt notice that her sex life with Shining had ground to a halt basically overnight. Naturally, she'd be very confused and more than a little suspicious. There could be clop and plot! Er, that is to say, clop and story.
*Spends a few more moments processing all of the awesome story potential, and then abruptly bursts into tears*
Pleeeeaaaase make a sequel! Please! T_T
4376783 I very much appreciate your critique! I do my best to form a chemistry between the narrative and the characters while still keeping both tightly controlled.
Unfortunately, that romantic feeling and organic flair you're talking about is where I often struggle. Admittedly, my writing can be a bit stilted at times, so I have to bend things a little to make them fit. Hopefully, I can learn to bend a little myself in the future.
4376826 For me, dialogue is where many stories lose my interest. I see it a lot. So I thought the best remedy was to write something of my own and do pony dialogue the way I thought it should be done. And I'm stoked at how positive the response has been!
4376856 The ideas! They burn!
Though I had pictured several aftermath scenarios in my head, I hadn't considered trying for a sequel. I actually have another unrelated clopfic in the works already, but you people are starting to persuade me!
P.S. The painfully low number of good stories involving this pairing is what prompted me to write this in the first place.
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As a diehard fan of sparklecest, I can say that your contribution is much appreciated. I've read loads of good(/passable) sparklecest fics, but there can simply never be enough. ^_^
This is your first clopfic? Really?
Because it reads like it was written by a pro.
Seriously, excellent job.
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YES. THIS. I can see entire chapters centering around this.
i swear i've already read a fic about this as well...
pretty sure tow peas in a pod has the same scenario.....
Fuck yes. I'm following you in the hopes that you do.
Pretty good. Would like more. Its well written.
Cadance's gonna be pissed if Shiny can't be satisfied with her. Or he teach her the "Ultra-Orgasm" spell too.
Twilight would indeed be the master of the magic of "friendship". Everyone's your friend with Ultra-Orgasm
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That spell would be usefull for many non-sex scenarios too..
Wanna immobilize someone that's running away? Ultra-Orgasm.
Wanna play a prank? Ultra-Orgasm (try it on nobles and royalty at public events for extra points).
Interrogate someone non-violently? Ultra-Orgasm.
Wanna take revenge on someone? Ultra-Orgasm.
Abbiamo visto tutti il prossimo quando hanno introdotto Shining.