The Abyss
Joined 22nd Nov, 2012 ·
Offline
Sequels1
-
The Abyss · 9.4k words · 861 99 · 30k views
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- The Abyss · 9.4k words · 861 99 · 30k views
- Anonymous Pegasus · 26k words · 928 86 · 21k views
- Lunafan1k · 2.4k words · 950 110 · 35k views
- Pony Medley · 8.4k words · 660 32 · 16k views
- Shakespearicles · 10k words · 801 74 · 16k views
- Shakespearicles · 14k words · 1,533 97 · 36k views
- Pimapifi · 6.4k words · 1,820 104 · 66k views
Featured In74
Clopfics11,546 stories ·15,814 members
The Writers' Group56,394 stories ·9,291 members
One-Shots18,907 stories ·2,369 members
- Doubled Fun722 stories ·413 members
Alicorn Twilight2,144 stories ·2,854 members
- Twilight, Alicorns, and Awsome220 stories ·306 members
- Shining Armor832 stories ·446 members
- The Mane Six 362 stories ·143 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.277 seconds
Total duration
980 users online
51,308 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
...Those two are never gonna be able to play truth or dare again, at least not honestly
abyss...
good job.
*thumbs up*
4488240 There is no way that you read the entire story in under a minute...
4488250
who said i needed to read it?
Oh, wow. When you posted that blog, I wasn't expecting, uh, this. *blushes, shuffling awkwardly*
I'll try to forget what just happened.
Still, a very good, strange story. 
Nice one abyss!
Toppest of unfs~
Damn that's a lot of groups!
Good story btw.
Pretty great for something so short. If I had one complaint, it would be that it felt a bit emotionally empty. We mostly just have Twilight's POV, and from there, there's very little feeling in general. I expected lust, apprehension, something to speed up the heart-rate, but it felt like it was contractual from her perspective. At least, that's the tone i was getting. I suppose if that was your intention, then well played, i'm just spouting personal preference.
The rest was great, though! Which was surprising as you did it in relatively few words. To be honest, i think that was like, the longest description of an orgasm i've read.
Shamefully many fics breeze over the climax (literally) in a sentence, which seems crazy to me to do in a clopfic...
Oh my :3c
4488508
Exactly. Why write so many words to build up to the best part of the story, only to write a few lines about the climax? It makes no sense.
damn... that was HOT!
They're not really related, so it's okay. It's not creepy at all.
This happened because Twilight had knowledge that boners too hard for too long become dangerous boners
One, DAYUM that was hot!
Two, you know what'd be odd as fuck but you could probably make work? A clopfic involving sapient leeches.
That is how much faith I have in your writing. You could make an equinomorphic leech sexy.
...that was a joke. Well, the leeches part. You probably could do it, just, uh, don't do it. 'cause that'd be weird.
(NON-SEQUITURS FOR THE WIN!)
Edit: inb4 you actually write a clopfic about leeches, and/or write a non-clopfic about leeches that looks like a clopfic at first glance.
4488674 They could always make a fic INVOLVING leeches in some way... would that make your pants happy?
Nice, I really enjoyed this!
Twily! We're the Sparkles, not the Lannisters!
There can never be enough Sparklecest. Excellent work! ^_^
Why? I mean I think it was good, but what provoked you to write this?
Heh. 59 likes
*Upvote click*
65 likes
Stay classy fimfiction.
Particularly with more well written fics like this.
Lulz. Not even an attempt at deflection with that dat title. You're rather clear with what you're selling, aren't you? ;p
4489009
Arousal?
i.imgur.com/tfZQS.jpg
4489401 I'm actually thinking of writing a bonus chapter where they fuck the next morning.
4489408
4489382
4489009 Because I wanted to. Simple as that.
4489415
>Because I wanted to
I know that feeling.
....Not a fan of incest...so...not for me. But whatever rocks your bed, whatever wiggles your diggle, whatever lifts the leg...ect...
4489415
The simplest of answers to any 'why?'. Because I can.
4489408
Oh hell yes. That would be excellent.
4489431
It largely comes down to personal preference, but I think that the absolute simplest answer to "why" is "why not?" ^_^
4489752
Also a very good option.
This story "sucks"! Get it? Because Twilight... *hears the booing* Oh screw you!
Considering Twilight's most popular pairings tend to involve Spike (brother or son figure), Celestia (mother figure), I guess it seems that she just loves taking family bonding to the next level.
EDIT: Needs more love.
This gets my seal of approval.
Twilight proves she knows nothing about priapism.
4489408
That would be really nice.
you should write another story about Shiny sleep over with cadence and twilight.
man, i luv this one
4490449
What's priapism?
Is it bad that I was listening to B.B.B.F.F. during this?
4490932
yes it is
ITS INCEST
4490826 Persistent and painful erection of a man's part. That's what it is.
4490826 The answer is right here.
4488901
or are they?
Come on now, Abyss. If you are going to start out subtle, end subtle.
So, I'm going to help fix your description.
God, what am I even doing?
4491189
Being a marelester?
4491213
Nope, that place is taken. Pinkie Pie cannot be beat.
4491222
>party inside Pinkie?
4491248
That's a hell of a party. Unfortunately, she'll make it far too short to be enjoyable, if you know what I mean. She makes even the most skilled stallions topple in less than a minute.
. . .
God fucking dammit, Gary. What am I even saying right now? I don't even read clop.
cdn.niketalk.com/f/f8/f81003dc_3980093_5bfd02b15e33f036c93c6150092600cf.gif