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Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? (He/Him)

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When Rainbow Dash tries to do thoughtful things for other ponies, it generally turns out pear-shaped. Which, of course, is what happens when a pony as unthoughtful as her tries to do such things.

But, hey, what's a bit of a mess when it comes to making food for one's friend? It shouldn't be that much of a bother, right?

Right?



My heartfelt thanks to Door Belle and Garnot, without whom the story would not have been legible (much less enjoyable).

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:moustache: wait wait wait
:raritycry: Ice cream! Spikey NOW!
:moustache: left side freezer behind the soup
:duck: wait wait wait "Are you having waffles?
:moustache: yeah...
:raritywink::moustache: wait wait wait
:pinkiegasp: Waffles in the toaster!
:moustache::duck: wut?
:pinkiehappy: Buns in the oven? better!
:raritystarry::moustache::facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

That was both adorable and hilarious.

The anger, instead of being externalized or internalized, folded in on itself and turned into passive-aggressiveness. :rainbowlaugh:

this needs the random tag :rainbowlaugh:

Nice.
Cute little Slice-of-Life :rainbowlaugh:Awesome!:rainbowlaugh:

--Spade

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That was good, although I think it would have worked better if it was set shortly after Luna Eclipsed in early season 2. Not only would the recent holiday have provided an easy infection vector and clearly put this in the middle of flu season, but it would have also put Twilight's massive breakdown in Lesson Zero in Rainbow's recent memory and helped explain why she felt the need to help Twilight out in a very un-Rainbow like way.

all i hav to say is lol

This was a light-hearted and whimsical little read with a cute, subdued sort of humor. Poor Spike though. Ahh, but at least he has waffles. :pinkiehappy: Personally I'm of the opinion that sugary foods are really a no-no for the immune system, especially when sick, but I know not everyone thinks that way. :rainbowderp: Anyways, this was a fun story. Thanks for sharing! :twilightsmile:

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