• Member Since 3rd Aug, 2012
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Togashi


Just a worn out writer from a bygone age. Don't mind me, I'm just passing through.

Comments ( 27 )

Do you know what I don't get? Why doesn't the victim ever bite down, hard. If they're lucky the perp has his dick bitten off, giving the victim time to dole out some much need justice. Or in Twi's case, goring the fucker with her horn.
Just a thought.
The story was ok, 3/5

8082881 Yah, in this case the stallion made it clear he was pretty sure his darts would kill Spike if he were hit. So that threat more or less keeps Twi under control.

8082950 I still forget how ignorant ponies are. Spike is a dragon. He maybe a baby, but dragons have the toughest hides and strongest scales in that universe. Unless the stallion has used the dart to penetrate a dragon's skin, he bluffed his way to victory.
On that note, Spike is a moron for forgetting that information.

8082634 You, sir... You know what's up.

8083516 We'll see, this fic is getting railed a bit right now. Not sure if it's the delicious Alicorn rape or the writing.

I have a filly Vinyl Scratch story to release too. I'll give this one a few days and see if people are digging it at all.

8082979 Even if there was a slight chance of Spike getting hurt I'm sure Twi would be willing to suck a little dick. Just my thoughts on it.

Well you've made a neutral story

I love happy endings :trollestia:

The intruder should've been roasted alive at the halfway point.

Wow, very nice read there, worth it. But I think this deserves a sequel...

I kinda want more of this.

I'm not really into Non Con stories, but I liked this. It feels well written and flows well. Good job

8082596 Have you attempted closing and restarting the program?

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Agreed. I... kinda want to see the stallion come back and make it even more humiliating for Twilight.

8086441 I think it would be interesting to have him return and hold the images over her head to make her obey him. Also how Spike would react in the days following the incident.

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He could do some very hurtful things. Like forcing her to call herself degrading names in front of Spike, teaching Spike to use them as well, and touch her whenever he feels like it. The more Twilight allows this to happen, the more material the stallion has to blackmail her with since it'll look like Twilight is just a perv.

this was a really good story

Hot. Though I would have liked it more if you didn't add that blowjob and just made it between Spike and Twilight. That would actually be even more embarrassing for Twilight I think and she's bombarded with conflicting emotions.

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I wanted to see the stallion try to push Spike away and go for his turn just to have Spike greed grow and kick his ass before finishing with Twilight. Fictional rape can be arousing but it always feels better when the rapist gets his karma at the end. Good story though.

would be a funny plot twist: it was just Celestia wanting some twi-lewds. XD it would be funny though like a few days later celestia conveniently shows up with all her missing jewels saying she "caught" someone trying to sell them.

That was so hot thank you

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