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The sensual dialogue and foreplay was enough to convey the love and lust they obviously feel for each other here (although the "I love you" helped tremendously too). I do think that if it would have been perhaps a bit longer with eventual penetrative sex, it would have been that much better in my opinion. Besides those previous things and some grammar errors, I thought this is a good job of a first story.
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Thank you my friend. I will keep the thought in mind for future stories. Which couple should I use next?
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*Inhales* Obviously I'm not a writing guru, but I'd say go with whatever pairing interests you the most. I've seen people do odd pairings and write them wonderfully well.
I'd also wager that popularity depends on the timing of the show and how well written the story is. For instance, "Glimmering Heat" (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/323028/glimmering-heat) was featured and "hot" for a good while because I think there was an episode where Spike and Starlight have some meaningful conversation and so the author expanded upon that new turn in their relationship and wrote a well-done clopfic featuring those two. It's the same thing with the Spike and Ember fics, but I digress most of this rambling is also just speculation.
Some people also take characters and put them in unique situations and build a story around that. There's just a ton of ways to go about it. *Exhales*
Sorry, but yeah go with whoever interests you most.
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Thank you again. This information will help for the next story. I appreciate it!
What's with the dislike ratio? It's a pretty good clop fic although it is short. I feel like the ending was thrown in there rather abruptly almost as if you didn't know how to end the story. But I think it kinda worked since it was mentioned earlier ithat Twilight was going to be busy.
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Forgot to mention that I enjoyed the fact that this was a snapshot of their relationship rather than an awkward confession of love followed by random sex. There should be more of this style out there.
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Thank you noticing that as well! I find it quite annoying that it is like it is.
But what can you?
It seems a little short which may or may not be why there are down votes, any other reason is stupid. Pretty good start. Like it. Fuck Spilight Haters.
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I think that is the problem as well.
But I am making a continuation of this.
(I know I could make another chapter, but I think it should be a sequel).
I appreciate the support!