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    Project Update: 07-15-13

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  • 93w, 3d
    Project Update: 01-08-13

    I'm back after a lengthy Holiday sabbatical! Traveling and having the flu, I finally got back to what's important: writing horrific stories about pastel ponies.

    Well, Elegie is finally finished! It came out exactly like I wanted it to. The end came out in a flurry of writing. I almost didn't want to sleep last night because I wanted to finish it! The last chapter, Encore, is of course a repeat from way back in at the start of Chapter 1. Rather than telling you to go back and read it, it's simply there out of completeness. It's exactly where the tale starts and ends.

    Next on my plate is continuing Faithful. This will be my full focus now. I have a lot of great ideas and I assure you the next chapter will be something special.

    Also expect a new Smoldering Scales this weekend. I have the next episode in my head, I just need to get it on the screen.

    Happy new year all you dirty perverts.

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  • 104w, 1d
    Project Update: 10-25-12

    Just giving a heads up about my current projects.

    Faithful is still on hold. I have not forgotten it and fully intend on completing it no matter how many chapters that may take.

    Elegie will still be my main focus. There will be two more chapters, one that is currently nearing completion and a conclusion afterwards. Spoiler: There is no happy ending.

    I have opened a request section here. Anyone is welcome to submit requests. Don't be shy, there is literally nothing that would disgust me, but outlandish situations will likely be rejected since it's too hard to make a plotline. I usually am doing one or two a month. These are one shot short stories, but I do make sure they're quality.

    A current side project has been started, Smoldering Scales. I will be working on this in my off time, and is more just a fun clop about a lustful Sweetie and the extremes she goes to in order to fuck Spike's brains out. So enjoy that.

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#1 · 90w, 1d ago · 1 · 57 ·

first

#2 · 90w, 1d ago · 9 · ·
#3 · 90w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

And thus it begins.

Canon appeasing Twicorn fics are a go.

#4 · 90w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

Commence read.

Feathers everywhere.

Fluttershy might make a good bath attendant, doubt Dash would.

tgb
#5 · 90w, 1d ago · · 37 ·

>>2056585

you can not stop my #YOLOSWAG

tgb
#7 · 90w, 1d ago · 1 · 28 ·

>>2056624

Thanks for subscribing to me :heart:

#8 · 90w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2056637

Just one of over 3,000.

#9 · 90w, 1d ago · · ·

She cared for her friend’s wings like a mother for its foal

While I applaud the proper usage of its, something seems very wrong and/or right with this line.

#10 · 90w, 22h ago · · ·

I've eagerly been awaiting the influx of Alicorn-Twilight clopfics. Whohoo!

This was very hot, successfully appeased my silly little pony wing fetish. :pinkiehappy:

#11 · 90w, 14h ago · · ·

Molestia's legacy lives on! :trollestia:

This was a fun little one-shot, though the speed from which Celestia went from mentor to shameless hedonist was a bit jarring. Even so I enjoyed the descriptions of how new wings would feel from Twilight's point of view.

#12 · 90w, 10h ago · · ·

>>2058133

Agreed, this mostly happened because this was going to be a spinoff from my other story, Faithful, where Celestia was already portrayed this way. However I simply cannot fit it in there because of a number of reasons.

#13 · 90w, 7h ago · 3 · ·

a white hoof polishing the royal clitoris

:rainbowlaugh:

#14 · 90w, 2h ago · 3 · ·

I never understood the wing arousal deal. Aviforme integument is free of FNE's, and the superficial layering of the epidermis is actually vey thin and is more sensitive to pain than to pleasure. On a side note, it is not uncommon for the manis claw to be free of integument upon the phalanges. Although, it is mucho rd common is palaeognathae than neognathae and likely would not be an evolutionary feature native to aveequines. Though, if it were, I'd love to see the look on Twilight's face when she accidentally swats Rainbow and cuts her. :rainbowlaugh:

#15 · 89w, 6d ago · · 2 ·

your ponies are out of persona, ponies dont have fucking breast!! sick. but your writing is good.

#16 · 89w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>2062512 They do though. They have what is lovingly named by some ''Crotch tits'' meaning that they have their breasts near their genitalia, just as real horses/ponies. >>2058909 This can't be a one-shot! Please, expand! You do not want to hear me whining! :raritydespair:

#17 · 89w, 6d ago · · 6 ·

>>2062859 and i find them to be desgusting because these are not real ponies and crotch tits are a turn OFF

#18 · 89w, 6d ago · 3 · ·

>>2062867 So? Even if you find them disgusting doesn't make it so that others are not allowed to like it. Calm down will you, everything is going to be fine.

#19 · 89w, 6d ago · 4 · 1 ·

There was only one line with ponytits and I didn't even call them crotchtits! Take it easy guys.

#20 · 89w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

>>2062512 Well, the whole crotchboob thing is up to debate. At the very least they would have nipples, and said nipples would be near their crotches. Actually boobs would be unlikely however, as most mammals do not have swollen breasts unless they have given birth.

#21 · 89w, 4d ago · · 2 ·

>>2072906 i dont mind the nipples but boobs? thats just wierd

#22 · 89w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>2073135 Again, in your opinion. Some people like me like it. Like for example, have you seen Milkmare?

#23 · 89w, 4d ago · 1 · 1 ·

>>2073163>>2073135 milkmare is supposed to be about a mare who has foaled at least once and allows herself to be milked. Twilight has never foaled. So her teats would be flat.

#24 · 89w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>2073188 That's not what i was talking about. I was talking about how he found breasts on ponies disgusting, while i don't. I was talking about how it was just his opinion and that others should be able to have breasts on their ponies in their liking. :facehoof:

#25 · 89w, 4d ago · · ·

Wow....:yay:

That was a great story, somehow I really liked the "bath attendants", good idea! Well written too, and I can only say.....more of this!

#26 · 89w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

>>2061179 I must say, I have a good grasp of science and.... I haven't a bucking clue what you just said. I can't say your logic is flawed, as I can't find it. However, pegasi and alicorn wings are typically shown as being sensitive, though I can't tell you why. Though, as birds, as far as I know, do use them to detect air currents and the like, they would have to be sensitive. This is also the first time Twilight's wings have ever been touched, which means all the stimulation is completely new to her, and as it is not exactly painful, and she is already enjoying herself, it would become very arousing and enjoyable. And if not, and there is no other reasonable explination, then I simply must say, it's not your story. It's Togashi's. If they want to write it that way, they can.

And to tez author, wonderful read, if short. I would have liked more, though I will say what is here was a wonderful read.

#27 · 89w, 13h ago · · 1 ·

The grammar was mostly error free, the narration was wordy, the characters were loosely in character, and the sensory details were vivid. All in all, the story was worthy of a like but nothing to write home about.

#28 · 88w, 14h ago · · 1 ·

:trollestia::trollestia: that's all I have to say

P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

#29 · 87w, 3d ago · · ·

Hope you write more! (maybe some M/F vaginal? Hardly any M/F twilight clopfics, much less with her having wings now)

#30 · 87w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

>>2149378

Actually that gave me a wonderfully devilish idea.

#31 · 87w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2150832 Woot! Can't wait! *hopes for more nipple play*

#32 · 86w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2073163

Milkmare is the most retarded thing in the whole fandom. I have nothing against crotchboobs, but Milkmare is retarded.

#33 · 86w, 4d ago · · ·
#34 · 86w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2179036

How isn't it retarded? It's a character based entirely around having boobs that need to be constantly milked, it's even more retarded than wing arousal.

#35 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2179583 How is wing arousal retarded? It occurs in real life with several different birds. Also, each one to their own i guess when it's about Milkmare.

#36 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2182408

ORLY? Do have any sources for wing arousal happening with several different birds? Also, orgasm being brought about just by having her feather's preened? Really?

#37 · 86w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2182435 I can mention one of them, being the cowbird. They raise their wings when aroused. The orgasm brought on by preening might be a bit excessive, but them feeling pleasure from it would be no weird thing.

#38 · 86w, 3d ago · 3 · ·

>Not being able to give a pegasus a crashing orgasm from preening.

Step up your game.

#39 · 86w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

>>2183284

There is a big difference between raising ones wings when aroused and actually getting arousal from the stimulation of the wing.

#40 · 85w, 2d ago · 1 · 2 ·

flip everyone's gender and this becomes a horror story, I'm tellin' ya. :unsuresweetie:

#41 · 83w, 5d ago · · ·

>>AegisShield

How would prince celestia pleasure herself

I could see how it would be awkward but there would be some minor modifications needed

#42 · 83w, 5d ago · · ·

>>2282057 'prince' and 'herself' dont really go together.......

#43 · 83w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2282643

Don't use your fancy logic on me

#45 · 82w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2299428

Grrrrrrrrrrrr don't u no logic and derpy are nemesises i can't believe u man girl other otherothergender

#46 · 79w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

I know you wrote this as a oneshot but more more more PLEASE MORE -- :twilightoops: -- I mean, I do hope you might reconsider that decision and write something more involving Twilight's new wings. :twilightsheepish:

#47 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·

i am taking so many notes for my twilicorn fic.... hawt

#48 · 66w, 2d ago · 1 · 10 ·

oookay... that was different and interesting.

still obliged to say this though

Y'ALL ARE SICK

#49 · 13w, 5d ago · · ·

1. Was celestia doing what I think she was?

2.  Twilgiht now has friends with additional things ;)

#50 · 13w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2086807 I get that it's the author's story, but I'm pretty sure when something is 'sensitive' it's about pain. I can't think of an instance where something was sensitive to pleasure.

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