(Currently in the process of being edited and revised for flow. Story content will not change)
Rainbow Dash gets accepted into the Wonderbolts just as she had always wanted. The fame ,wealth, success all achieved as imagined. She is living the life and after dealing with some trouble adjusting, she finally is enjoying it. Until one day during a show a letter arrives one that changes everything.
Will Rainbow Dash be able to live on as a Wonderbolt while knowing what her absence has caused and can she make things right? Or will her loyalty waver on the final hour?
I got permission to use the art that is now the cover. The guy who made it is named ~Skyline98
check his work out if you want.
Don't forget to leave a like or dislike and tell me why you liked or disliked it. I won't change the story but I can use your feed back to do better on my next series of stories I will be making. This story now has a sequel known as To be a Wonderbolt: Family and Friends
Link:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122653/to-be-a-wonderbolt-family-and-friends
Feel free to point out mistakes, with grammar, and over all the story.
Let me know if you like it's or decide you don't. I don't mind constructive criticism and as to what pairing this is of it will be revealed later.
Looks interesting, I might keep an eye on this.
2981043 Well glad you think so. I am currently working on another chapter. Though just a warning the tone of the story will get more... grim and I might have to add a Dark tag. Not sure if it's needed depending on how I play out some parts of the story.
The overwhelming sadness or the interesting story?
Because if you enjoy the emotional torment stay tuned shit gets real as it goes on.
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I thought it was two. Well I will edit it then Sorry about that.
Yeah Fluttershy I love her I honestly do. Trust me as I write this I feel sad for what is going on with Flutters. Next chapter is still being debated, while I have the over all story completed in my head the journey to that ending is still being altered by little bits here and there. The reason for it is because while one idea may work other ideas might not.
What about sexy fluttershy?
Read the next chapter it turns out sexy Fluttershy = trouble. XD
Guy btw
2987295 Alright will fix that.
Nice chapter!
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Why thank you
5/5
2989962 you are too kind. I still have some edits to do but I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had to plan this story carefully. I needed the story to be both interesting and full of feels. I read too many sappy fanfics where there is only one butthurt moment and everything is ok. So I made it the opposite from what it seems so far. Redemption is a powerful motivation for getting things done. My final chapter or two though will be the longest which is why these one's are coming up short. I have this huge finale planned out. So the most of my efforts are going to go to that moment. When the feels canon will be in full swing.
i bucking love this fic!
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Thanks for the kind words. I am glad people enjoy it. I been picturing this kind of story for ages. The show was being too much of a pussy for me to wait so I decided I will make it happen. Only now it needs to end soon. Though I am in the works of whipping up a sequel to this depending on how I make this end. I have two endings in mind but meh I like to go with the flow. Soon the next chapter is coming up and I will make it either really long or break it into two chapters. Then the Epilogue + sequel info. Though as I said the ending can take multiple chapters depending on how it goes so. Bah look at me rambling sorry.
2990405 i dont mind... then i have something to read while i wait... but if your rambling then your using your time at that and that means i have to wait even longer for the next chapter to come out and that means i have to find something to do and with me being all lazy and horse apples plus i can't even take a nap couse my brain won't allow me to do so and the-.. *realization* oh god i'll have to be social with my family...
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I am working on the next chapter :P but I want to make sure it comes out right this is a big moment in the series. I want to play it out right. Need to know if point a or point b.
I will get it done within like 2 hours max I think. anyways have fun till then :P
2990467 just don't rush it if you do so the chapter might not be as good as the others
2990476>>2990467Hmm can I read all of those capters in two hours. Probabl. Will I yeah.
2991155 They are? Let me fix that. lol
and then again now i'm happy
now i can rest a bit 
and i realy like this smiley 
2991167 lol I am working on the final chapter. I will be up at this probably for like hours. I want the epic conclusion before the epilogue though it will be confusing because the terms aren't meant to be taken literally but metaphorically because I will mention he being a Sky Goddess but she doesn't transform or anything. She just well ascends to a new level of awesomeness. In her heart of course and that isn't going to stay she isn't going to become Super Dash or anything it's all just metaphorical stuff.
2991187 you don't have to tell me it's metaphorical the story mentioned that she named herself the goddess of the sky
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Alright well today when I get back to work I will start working on the ending it's going to be a doozy. XD
2994327 now I'm even more excited!... And I'm on my phone right now so you have to imaging the Pinkie smiley's here's something to help you :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) i just got back on my pc so here they are
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Alright I have the ending mapped out all that is left to do is type it.
I hope you enjoy it and if it is being too wordy I might have to break the finale into chapters. I am hoping I don't but I won't rush the ending seeing as it will lead into an Epilogue or Sequel I am unsure at this point so away I go to make the finale of this dramatic tale. Time for the feels cannon.
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i know i'll enjoy it 
and as i told you i enjoyed this new chapter
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Glad you did lol. The last chapter of the series is up.
2995887 You know at the time that i can se the comment i already red the chapter and it did have a really good ending i'm looking forward to the sequel and this was actually one of the best fan fics I've red since i found this page and now imagine a thousand of these
(the comment that i deleted was this one but i just reuploaded couse it wasn't a reply) and the only things that i found in this story was some miss spelled words.
Great story I really enjoyed reading it!!!!
You mean hooves?
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Bah I did. I am such a foal
Thanks for catching that.
18 chapters!
You're lucky I like it.
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Glad you do. A Sequel is up too though it's incomplete as of now and it's going to be probably longer. I have so much head canon for this series while trying to stay someone true to the show's direction.
Keep up the great work, this was the best thing I've read in a long time. Though the ending could of been a little less, idk, but it felt different somehow. either I'm crazy or you know what I'm talking about, if not ignore this cause I have no idea what I saw different about it.
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It didn't end with a conclusive finale, I know it got weird around the Discord Chapters but you have to remember Discord has all these abilities canon and he is befriended by Fluttershy near the end of Season Three and since this fic is post season 3 I followed those two lines of thought to make Rainbow Dash be tested by Discord. Also the ends isn't conclusive because it has a follow up story. I couldn't make an epilogue with all the interwoven stories since there was too much stuff happening to just say . The End. So read the Sequel as I am currently getting back to working on it as we speak.
3002751 Why thank you. It was my first fic so I was bound to make some mistakes. Some of the spelling errors during Applejack's dialogue was meant to do an impression of her accent. Other than that I may have made some errors here and there. I appreciate you taking your time to read and review it.
So I decided I am going to do some editing. I don't like the way I did Applejack's dialogue and will be replacing any Ah with I as after reading some Dialogue I wrote with out intentionally replacing the I with Ah it sounded better and still Applejack like... if that makes any sense. So yeah it won't effect the story in anyway just going to make Applejack's dialogue easier to read and understand.
Well now I am planning on making more edits... initially it was just Applejack's dialogue and name to fix... though I will be cycling through and fixing some stuff. Again this will not change the story... just make it easier to read without the grammar and spelling errors and stuff.
Let me guess, the caretaker is Angel Bunny?
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As if Dash would take shit from Angel Bunny...
Yeah I forgot about Discords very existance
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Awesome story but the "ditzy" thing bugs me. Her name is Derpy and there's nothing wrong with it.
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I know it's derpy and I rather it be derpy but I used ditzy since it was my first fic and I wasn't sure if I could use Derpy and get away with it for a serious fic. Derpy seems to be the term used for comedy fics.
This is rare a story that hit's my hart so many times 1 maybe 2 story's hawe done this.
Relay good work on this be proud of your work and share it, i know i will share the hay out of it.
This story was just "so awesome"
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Glad you thought so this was my first fic and even with the many mistakes I worked my hardest making it.
I was not expecting that! I was not expecting such an emotional and fantastic story! Awesome!
I`m gonna read the sequel