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Diablomuerte2


The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.

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Warning: If you haven't read the first two stories of this series you won't be able to follow along. I urge you to be able to read this with an open mind to read the previous installments so you can enjoy this one.

Rainbow Dash's journey has took her to the edge of insanity and to the brink of death itself. This final chapter of her saga as a Wonderbolt will put her at the very limits. Survival against an adversary of this caliber isn't guaranteed.

Equestria has been called into war against Draconia. The two nations pitted against each other by fate, and only one will survive. With no hope for peace, and fear running rampant, two sides attack one another with ferocity. No matter the outcome Equestria will never be the same.

This, final fic of the saga, will finally answer all the questions that haven't been answered while ending the story once and for all.

Art used with permission.

Artist: shokka-chan at Deviant Art.
Proof Reader and Editor: kiheerSEDMAN

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 144 )

It's here!!! :pinkiecrazy:
Now I just have to read the other two of them!!

3133752 Yes do so also I am going to be writing the next chapter of that story that is busting guts. People loved the last one and the next one is going to bring them to the edge so I hope you can spare time to edit for me my sweet, sweet.... ahem editor :raritywink:

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Yes, I'll be able to put aside some time to edit. I do hope your editor for this story is proficient. You should have him edit the story description too. :twilightsheepish:

3133769 He is efficient so far. As for the other thing I psychically figured you wanted to tell me I don't let anyone edit my descriptions. >.> those are MINE :pinkiecrazy:

i love it and i got a question is this the sequel to your story Why Did I Marry Her?

3133788 No... this is the continuation of To be a Wonderbolt and To be a Wonderbolt: Family and Friends.

The first two stories I ever wrote on Fimfiction. I told you I was backed up with stories and won't be writing a sequel to one you keep mentioning for a while. Be patient I can only write out so much stories. Especially if you want it edited and made clean....

3133799 ok and i am so sorry for keep bring the sequel up

3133808 I get you are excited for a sequel for a story I did, but when that sequel is out it will say so in the description of the story.

3133811 yeah i am and ok

Seems as if the story's received good feedback so far, can't wait to see the rest.:pinkiehappy:

this story is going to be awsome :rainbowkiss:

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Glad you are excited :)

3134070 Lets hope so :raritywink:

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Oh yes, the chance to edit your work is very gratifying.:pinkiehappy:

3134208 Oh come on now you flatterer, it was equally pleasureful for me to have you edit while I watch :raritywink::pinkiecrazy:

Hey oh Sage of Muerte. This is excellent so far, and can't wait to read more. I like the way you condensed the events of the previous two for those who hadn't read either, but did it in the form of memories. I'm looking forward to this and hope it's as great as the others. :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

3134317 I hope it's as great as the others as well.

Well, with the work being yours I'm positive it will be. After all, you're a very talented pony. Also, just out of curiosity, which story that is "busting guts" are you working on a sequel to?

3134334 No I was writing a new chapter to my fluttershy story the new one... the rated m one with her on the phone doing things.... ahem :pinkiehappy:

I needs to know two things about this story.

1: is it FlutterDash?
2: What is the title to this piece?
3: on an unrelated to the story note, when are you going to, if ever, create a prequel to Be The Stallion, in which we see Rainbow try to hit ol' Flutters with two in the pink, one in the stink?

3134371 it's a comedy fic primarily no romance tag yet and not sure if adding it.

It has flutterdash content but its for humorous purpose.

It's called Fluttershy The Phone Sex Operator.

While this is most interesting, I'm primarily interested in stories containing FlutterDash as a ship throughout, even if it doesn't have the romance tag, as long as the coupling is there. You say the ship is used for comedic purposes, but is it a like one chapter thing, and then another ship for ol Flutters is used, (the ships being used in the same comedic fashion, even if there is no serious romance and it's purely to add to the humor and zaniness) or is FlutterDash the primary, or at least more focused on one? Given the situation of Fluttershy being a phone sex operator and using the fact that the way you write Dash as well... you know how you write Dashie, would be great chance for some comedic gold.

Also, on an unrelated note, I posted a short introductory (sorta) chapter for the first fic I've ever published to this site, it's titled Madness, thy name is high school

3134443 Just read it I think you will enjoy it. I know you are primarily FlutterDash but this story has just some crazy situations no actual sex between Fluttershy and other ponies occur besides Rainbow and Flutters. But some phone sex scenarios happen between Flutters and others. It's a comedy fic. and we are done speaking about it on this comment section if you wish to know more please pm me this comment section should be about this story. :moustache:

This is true, and sorry for spamming your comment section. Off to read and interrogate you on the comment section for THAT story instead :pinkiehappy:

3134458 don't apologize I am not upset. I just don't think it was fair of us to 'circle jerk' while others want to appreciate or hate on my latest fic.

3136969 The war sequences... lots of blood... lots of dead warriors...

New chapter almost done being written I will post up once I finish and have it edited.

Really sorry, my internet died mysteriously. It all began when Pandora stopped playing, then the Google Doc lost connection then my internet crashed. It was the WORST THING EVER.:raritydespair:

3153300 yeah um whoops sorry for that (oddly nervous smile)

Just kidding... but don't we all hate it when that happens

New chapter should be done being written either tonight or tomorrow. I will have it edited as soon as it's done being written. I am sorry for the wait but with the other stories done I will have more time to focus on this one. Just a warning ponies will die so I hope you aren't too attached to any particular pony because I can't guarantee they will survive :pinkiesad2::pinkiegasp:

3176937 If dash dies. I will rip off you're testicles and shove them down your throat.:rainbowdetermined2:

3194603 That's not very nice to say XD

3194691 Threats won't affect my decision to kill off whoever I decide would fit right dying. I won't reveal who dies but know if Rainbow Dash were to die it would be at the very end anyways. So you wouldn't find out till the story ended :P

3194712 Maybe, maybe not. I have been reading you're story for the past 2 weeks both to be a wonderbolts. And RD goes through alot of shit.

3194719 Yeah she does... it's kinda why the sad and tragedy tags are there. Notice they are still there ;0

3194751 I am working on the next chapter ... need to focus though :P

3194754 Keep on working on it. I will be waiting for this to be finished. This has caught my attention except for some of your horrible grammar mistakes. Other then that its great.

3194757 Yeah well TBAW and TBAW:FAF are my first two stories. I had no editor back then and just posted once I finished. I am currently in the process of editing the first story and then the second one to fix the grammar :P

3194762 Good, good. But still when this is finished. I suggest you too maybe go back and fix the mistakes in your stories

3194765 Reread my earlier reply... I am already doing that :P that is why the delay on chapters of this story are happening.

NO DISCORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYY :raritycry: :raritydespair: :fluttercry: great story so far look forward to seeing more

Seriously this fanfict is just to awesome.

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