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Stay tuned for the second chapter, and a little something that features Smartypants.
Hmmm. I want to see were this goes. I'm tracking it.
This was beautiful you loveable shipper you.
Sexual Tension.
6757896 I... I am looking forwards to seeing you do that, the first chapter was rather delicious though i must say.
O.O
Quite fascinating, always wondered what the pony version of kismesissitude looked like.
This concept entertains me to no end.
And also for the record this isn't me spread the wonders of Homestuck, just commenting on some similarities that i see.
Neat
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You win the entire internet
Stop whatever it is that you're doing and write more of this now.
This was hilarious. :3
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~Skeeter The Lurker
This was hot as fuck.
Also, thank you for actually having the ponies swear instead of using the word "buck". Christ that's been getting on my nerves a bit lately.
This was pretty damn hot. Thanks for the orgasm!
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I so very second that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Have a fucking good day, sir.
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TwiDash wasn't and still isn't my thing, but I can see the appeal now that I have this story pretty much done. In fact, I may have discovered why Rainbow is shipped with others so much more frequently than the other cast. I don't have any other ship for them in the foreseeable future, but I'm going all out on this one while it lasts. Next chapter's currently standing at 8k and i expect it to reach at least 10k. Writing Fluttershy was more difficult than their dialogue together.
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Already have 8k in the bank. Don't worry, this is currently at the top of my priorities, just as soon as I make PIzor eat his words.
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I'll have a commentary up hopefully by tomorrow explaining a lot of what went into this story, and more specifically this chapter. Wanton angry sex fascinates me to no end. I believe I am the first to write it with them still as ponies and not human or anthro. A lot of things new things to take into account.
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To one and all, I write a clop for every Christmas. Good tidings, maybe some good strokings, but have good feelings. This is the season for crass commercialism, fishmen, and many other things, but for me it's about flipping my boss the bird and doing what I want. That, and crying that my iPod died not even four hours ago and won't wake up.
Goodnight, Sweet Prince.
Let angry sex between cartoon ponies teach you that friendship stands the test of time for some profound reason I haven't thought of just yet. Good tidings to all, and good night, my fans.
Goodnight.
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6759391 Was I supposed to have the melody of Fresh Prince of Bel air going in my head as I read that?
6762392 Ok just making sure i wasn't going crazy.
This is fucking hot. I love seeing Twilight act like a total bitch. The two of them could never be sweet and tender all the time.
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It's not healthy to keep all those issues bottled up. I imagine Dash to be the one to beat around the bush and just give ponies a general "fuck you" if someone pisses her off. Twilight feels like she'd be far more direct, but also much less likely to admit she's wrong. I like her being a little more bitchy than normal.
She still doesn't know how to swear properly.
6759553 Bill cipher! How are you doing? Would you like a biscuit? ( holds out a plate of biscuits.)
Fluttershy needs to broaden her definition of how good relationships should go. This definitely doesn't qualify, but it looks like she's over-idealized love and sex.
Interesting, but disturbing. I can get BDSM relationships and sadomasochism, but I never understood the eroticizing of... demeaning one another, of real humiliation and genuine insult. Probably the only reason I added this to a library was because of the proof that they still cared for each other in the gentler post-Twidom.
Although it looks like the problems between them are very real. Aside from the sheer, rather shocking harshness of the exchange between them, the angry friction has been carrying over into the outer world. Her fears about everyponies' friendships falling apart is understandable, though (but wrong... at least some of that anger, in hindsight, was faked, but too much wasn't). Hatesex happens, and won't destroy a relationship... but healthy love can't rely on it, nor be built upon it.
Not entirely sure what the problem prompting this argument was, but it looks like it was Dash's fault (probably deliberately, considering that this has been going on for a while).
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I was wondering when someone would bring this up.
The one thing I wanted out of Flutters was her own narrow definition of a... I don't want to say happy--stable seems to be the best word--relationship. The reason why she's causing fuss isn't solely because she doesn't like what she sees, as a part of her is clearly disgusted, but she simply doesn't know any better. Her language is that of someone clearly ignorant of the more common BDSM intricacies.
I researched BDSM as far as I could when making this story. I pre-selected their kinks, why they acted the way they did, and carefully crafted their dialogue for each situation. The point of demeaning partners varies widely and deserves something all on it's own, but for those that do practice it to some extent, the two questions that must be asked are why does it occur, and when does it stop? I write commentaries on everything I do. Here's part (unfinished as of this post) of it:
In that story, the physical act of being able to stop torment was strong to make the entire experience worthwhile. To her, and other stories I researched, having that control was akin to a religious experience. Again, the why is far more important.
I give a contextual hint in this chapter, but the full story isn't explained until the next chapter, but you can see, even if Fluttershy doesn't, that Dash and Twilight have clear boundaries they are obeying. This is of critical importance because the number one rule in BDSM circles is crystal clear communication; blind experimentation is how people get hurt. Google 50 Shades of Grey sex injuries and you'll see why. Even Flutters noticed some clues, even if she didn't recognize their meaning: Twilight didn't use her magic as much as she could have, Dash would win in a straight fight, and the mood suddenly shifts when the sex starts.
Notice at the end that their issues with each other evaporate once their attention focuses on Fluttershy? That Rainbow Dash bothered to put on a show rather than keep her intimacy away from Fluttershy? Why is that? Because their relationship with Fluttershy was more important than any beef with each other. She kept the sex going because it was part of the ritual, and Dash didn't mind being watched.
Thus is the price of reading a half finished story. No doubt there are others that have made the snap decision that the two hate each other through and through. I already have 8,000 words of the next chapter typed up, including the entire explanation for why this is occurring. The fact you're displaying similar shock signs of Fluttershy means I accomplished what I set out to do with this chapter. You'll be surprised why this is happening.
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WHY THANK YOU!
*takes your arm with the plate of cookies*
6771026 If I didn't read this comment, I probably wouldn't have this on my RIL shelf. This sounds like it will be interesting and I look forward to reading it
Well that was fun. Good portrayal of angry sex.
And its time for my favorite game "Out of Context"
Today's out of context line is:
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I couldn't find a way to include the line "Racist squeaking". Believe me; I tried.
That was a great read, really great. Angry sex is hot
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I can see this as both Twi and Dash are in a secret relationship they are hiding from everypony, and that they are going though a book on kinks and fetishes. they just happen to be on the subjet of hate sex and fighting all the time, and the reason why they havnt gone to the other chapter is that they now have a way to express some negatives about their love in a way that it not as hurtful if they just said it out any other time that may make their love feel like they might be breaking up, and also that angry sex can be so much fun
Why does angry sex exist?
On the plus side of all my research, I'm really into erotic massages now.
7165848 Because it's a real thing and because anger is just one of many feelings that occurs in a relationship, no matter how good that relationship is, so some may end up finding that sex is good way to relieve that anger.
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Suddenly so am I.
~Skeeter The Lurker
That was a really nice ending. Very sweet how Flutters didn't fall for Dash with one kiss, but apparently Dash did. Dash having feelings for Flutters adds a bit more to the story and the actions Dash does throughout. Maybe I am seeing things that aren't there though.
The clop was good, very descriptive, and not dull as many attempts can be. Well done and I am happy to have read through this.
Too many 'was's?
delete this 'to'
She might be timid but I believe her heart to be one of the strongest.
'petals' or full throttle?
Great chapter, loved it, now you have 3 more mares to win over.
Barrage of likes I would give to this story.
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I just can't see this type of prompt working with Twilight and Rainbow Dash.
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I've never even contemplated having sexy massages before, so research was in order. Not to corrupt minors (it's not Thursday), but Pornhub has several videos to select from to get it all right and proper. There was something almost mesmerizing with the no dialog and light music.
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I imagine Flutters falling for her in one kiss would be a little dishonest. I imagine their relationship as something platonic, almost sisterly, with how long they've known each other. Dash's romps would undoubtedly change things with Twilight, as they've known each other for less time. But I can't rightly comment on what Dash feels as this story is from Fluttershy's perspective. Can't give away everything, after all.
But I'm glad you liked it. I like scenery and worldbuilding; it's about setting a mood, and setting a mood is critical for erotica. It translates over very well. Always a pleasure to see my work appreciated.
I have no plans on doing it anytime soon, but an idea that planted itself in my brain for a possible sequel still exists. I have thought about Twily and Dash inviting Fluttershy to Canterlot with them in order to visit a dungeon.
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I could swear I fixed that pedal one. Huh. I knew about it.
Yes, Fluttershy is tough when she needs to be, to the point where she can be considered Crouching Moron Hidden Badass.
She's a tough girl who had friends that wanted to show her a little love. Nothing wrong with some casual sex. I'm glad you liked it, and may the upvotes be ever in my favor.
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I can!
7561447 This was all the proof I ever needed.
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Research in to wing massages must have been interesting?
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I may or may not know what videos you speak of.
...They may or may not be rather good.
Honestly though, you could give Norm de Plume a run for the money with this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Very cute and pleasant ending. I liked this quite a bit and it ended on a very good note. I thought I'd be disappointed at it ending here but surprisingly I'm not, instead it feels good where it is.
Anyway, the descriptions were very well done and made me realize I need to look up a few things myself to make sure I'm writing them properly. Awesome stuff man.
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The ending was tough, second only to the transition from the massage to sexy times. I didn't feel like Fluttershy would be into what they were giving right off the bat. Didn't feel all that honest and more like a cheap plot hook. I was going for a more conservative Fluttershy and her embracing their lifestyle so soon didn't feel like something anyone should do. You have to ease into these things. That's why Twilight was in full friendship mode when she got caught.
I'm glad you liked it. I put a lot of TLC in this one., as I often do in my Christmas Clops (I do one every year). I'm glad I helped out the next generation in some respect, editing or not.
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Very much so. I tried to go more for sensitive rather than erogenous because i mentally can't picture it. Real life winged mammals have hollow bones and wing bones are easy to break. Due to the many points of contact, especially with feathers, however, they're packed with nerves. The general rule of thumb I found for wingplay is have it be foreplay for a pegasus; it can be very appealing, but tough to get off on it.
That's why one of her friends give her wins a lick. Fluttershy not only has zero experience with such things, it was used as both a means to test Fluttershy's receptiveness and get her motor running for the main event.
On a slight tangent, that's why I used Spartypants rather than a safe word. For one, Fluttershy, due to her unfamiliarity, might have some trouble understanding the uses and intricacies that come with it. Just having her hold or put down a toy is a lot easier to wrap her head around. Plus, the BDSM community values creativity. Safe words are a little too common and I wanted to mix it up.
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Makes sense for Flutters anyway. She's not the most verbal pony at any time, so giving her a clear means of communicating consent without requiring her to speak out while in such a new situation is good thinking.
To borrow from this title......I should've stopped reading....but I couldn't.
Twilight was stroking her back gently. Rainbow was busy cleaning off her muzzle. Upon noticing that she had roused, the pegasus knickered and licked her cheek.
I honestly expected it to be Rainbow holding her and Twilight going to town.
Jesus fucking christ that was hot.
um...that was honestly pretty good
I used to know this married couple that would say horrible things to each other. Vicious, bile-filled things. Often in public, in front of their kids even. They swore up and down that it was just how they were and how they showed affection.
This fic makes me wonder... if that's how they acted in public, what the hell do they do behind closed doors!?