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Night--Mist


Son of Princess Luna. A Bat Pony Alicorn who's small for his age.

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Sora has been on many adventures with his friends, after some heavy training to regain the abilities he lost from his keyblade, he is now tasked with a new mission. A mission that will test the light of his heart.
Will he succeed, or will the darkness win him over.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 16 )

The only thing that caught me off guard is Sora being an Alicorn. There are a few misspelling here and there but im sure you will fix them.

Keep it up you are in a good start i want to see what you are going to do with it.

Okay,
1. Why would Sora say so much, yeah he isn't the type that can realy keep a secret but not just blurt out everything because someone asked him to.
2 Why is Sora supposed to be younger than Twilight sure we don't realy kow how exacly aging works in mlp but in EG Twilight was in highschool age.

Comment posted by Night--Mist deleted Mar 26th, 2017

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1. Okay, well, I'll look into tweaking the chapter. Can't make any promises on how much will change.

2. So, this one was more based off the fact that when we see Sora as a Lion cub in the Pridelands, he looks only slightly bigger then Simba did as a cub, so it was reason to think that his figure would be somewhat dwarfed by Twilight Sparkle. He's not smaller than Spike if you are curious.

As for Equestria Girls, Yes, it is true everyone is in highschool. But look at it this way. In the EQGverse, the CMC appear to be in high school. Like say, freshmen. Where as, in the ponyverse, they seem to still be in grade school. Same breaths true for the Mane Six. In the EQGverse, they're all probably juniors or seniors. But in the ponyverse, all of them seem to be at like the ages of, say the 20-25 year age group. So they're full grown.

So we can't really base the ponies ages off of their Equestria Girl versions in the other world.

And remember, Sora's just gotten into his teen years, and let us not forget, he must have been a preteen in the first game, because he still was child tone in that one. So there's a chance he still is preteen if his voice changed from child tone in the original Kingdom Hearts, to man tone in Chain of Memories.

8052050 Okay. Chapter was changed up. Hope this seems a bit more reasonable.

Prince Sora? That's my Equestria Amino name!

Not a bad start you have my interest in this story

Sora as a Prince and adopted son of celestia you sir have really got me hooked

8063596 There's more that will be revealed in time. but I don't want give anything away.

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Yes, I just got back from some time out at sea, so I can relax my brain a little. Please be patient. The Navy can be a bit stressful and deplete me of energy to write sometimes. Don't worry, I haven't given up.

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