ScatMan2001
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Meh heh heh heh
I don't have anything against clop, nor have I read this before commenting, but I just don't like the concept of basing an incest clopfic off of something tragic like Hijo de la Luna of all things.
Yey I guess this is the Luna story you said you would write like a year ago right?
BOW TO YOUR STARCHY OVERLORD!
Awww. I think it's cute. And it's not like they are related. Looking forward to reading and possibly having an adorable heart attack.
Oh I know how this feels.
The misanthropic undertones are annoying, but the comedic tone to everything else kept me interested. Ill favorite
The main thing bothering me is you referring to ponies as women. Man and women are terms that specifically refer to humans, much as stallion and mare specifically refers to equines and bull and cow specifically refers to bovines. Seeing ponies refer to other ponies in strictly human terms when we've seen them use strictly pony terms on the show is... Jarring, to say the least.
I love love LOVE the story so far,but the only thing I dislike about it is that you say the baby doesn't like what's going on too much. I think it's repetitive.
Luna has absolutely no idea what she has gotten herself into. Fun start so far, definitely looking forward for more
I'm finding this story delightfully entertaining thus far. I look forward to seeing how things develop from here on in.
I like that babies perspective, very amusing!
I really find it annoying that Luna as the younger sister has to bow down to the older, they are supposed to be equals in every way.
okay I'm pretty much interessted right now.
Oh I hope they act kind of bitter sweet, I'm not sure how to describe it, but I woud prefer the sweet Luna instead of the more bossy one here and that the Human maybe isn't completely normal/useless.
The only other thing I would wish for, is that I hope you make their relationship look really good and not overdo it with the sex, but you already mentioned something like this and it sounded like you wanted to write a more meaningfull story with clop in it, instead of clop with story in it.
luna is one of the characters that i really like but that I have scene can be messed up pretty bad in a story. I guess that is because she is one of the more powerfull characters and they can be done wrong easiert than others, or it is just my taste.
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...Just kidding
7979407 I am willing to give a pass for how it seemed Celestia was much more understanding of the humans actions, as its clear Luna has a personal grudge. I do hope we get an explanation of what exactly happened. Maybe something of the order of humans were being pushed out by gryphon expansion and so attempted to create a buffer zone using pony territory and but ended up starting another front, sealing their fate.
7978417 *Cheesy Russian accent* But head look like potato.
I started reading this with no expectations, and while I am not yet sure what to think in the long run it's not important right now. Let's save what comes later for later. I will say that I have started to have my own similar idea, I don't know if anything will come of it. The premise is interesting though.
Inspiration comes at you from anywhere at any time. That's all there is too it really.
I hope that their relationship becomes and remains that of a mother and child, Scatman. Though the cover art, tags and your description lead me to believe otherwise.
7980551 Trust me, when your older brother tells you to do something, its rather you follow it or you die. I learned from experience. It sucked.
7983250 Sage advice from the grave
7983250 I suppose so growing up together mentally speaking. In reality their both the same power wise.
I love this Fic great job!
Very Unique fic I'm interested to see what it will bring!
"It looks like a potato"
Had a good loud chuckle at this. Love this so far
Ahh...Moonbutt, your actions never fail to surprise me.
While i have more important stuff to think about, this is something I dont like from Celestia.
It is a unique situation but I hate it if she use her power against Luna like that, but I guess you need a reason for it to happen.
It seems she had a reason, but I hate it if Celestia tries to force stuff upon her sister.
I always tried to image if she maybe just thinks she has to act like a mother or something because Luna spent 1.000 years on the moon and basicly doesn't knows anything about that time, but I never liked it if she acted like she would need to well act like this.
I just think controlling her life that much, is a bit to much even if that strategy could work, she should have tried to get Luna to agree in a way and not manipulate/force her.
This isn't a reason for me to stop, I just say how I see Celestia till now.
Flurry Heart: "...Rrrriiiight."
Next when?
When will you get back to this story? This seems like it will be even more amazing in the future.
I hope the next chapter is coming out soon
Ok so a lifetime of friendship and careing what happens when he dies, She sure didn't plan ahead on that kind of action...
DAMN STRAIGHT
Almost 6 months
Good thus far! Tracking.
8374615 I tracked a story for 2 years before it got updated again. Someare just worth the wait, even if it seems like a dead train. But only time will tell.
Im a mother fucking attack helicopter. PEW PEW jk liking the story so keep going
8374615
I once tracked a story for ten years, waiting months is fucking nothing to me any more.
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And I’m a oven
Eagerly awaiting further developments.
Oh man bro, that shit is funny!
AHAHAHAHA!!!!!
At first I thought based on the description that this was going to be a satirical plagiarization of my story.
I was pleasantly surprised to find that it was not.
i imagined the baby with a M2 Browning kiling everything XD
Would it be fair to assume that this story is dead?
This is why I never give a thumbs up right away, even if the story starts out good. A bad/no ending always kills it for me.
It’s a shame that the story died, it was promising.
What a reassuring thing to see in a description. Let's see if it's true.
Wow, if this is not your "I hate humans" fic, I'd hate to see what you consider one. I don't know what you were gonna do to fix it, but right now this is just your typical misanthropic garbage fic and I'm glad it's dead.