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MadMaxtheBlack
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Not even surprised. Good job.
U fuckin' wot m8?!
7946998 Fireball: the best editor booze can find!
7947002 I'm more of a whiskey person
7947014 That's risky, cause you can spill it on your pants.
Pusspuss and Mad Max... I ship it.
On a more serious note, great first chapter.
dont worry folks! i already pointed out some word errors to max! hes on the case!
Will read when it's a bit more complete, so I can finish around the same time the story finishes.
if you know what I mean...
pinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw10469-1386580974328.gif
Ok I always loved shy luna so cute keep it up. Gtg and bookmark bye
Might wanna tag it with alternate universe, other than that, off to a great start.
Nerd
Nice work, Space Cowboy
Good lord, adorkable goth Luna... I just found my kryptonite
You do realize that if this story causes me to go into a diabetic coma from all the sweetness, you'll be the one to blame? (Pusspuss isn't innocent, either; that cover image is too cute for mortal eyes, you maniac! 
)
Great start so far! I'm looking forward to seeing how this will play out!
To the top!
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Goddamn it, Max, another story for me to read!
The title of this fiction reminds me of this.
My reaction when I finished this chapter.
Happy valentine's 7947002 (Maxie) and happy valentine's 7947164 (pussy) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Well this is lookin' to be a good tale, cute goth Luna?
You spoil us Max, hohoho!
Nicely done man, nicely done!
And don't worry, I'm in the same shape XD Hahahah... except I'm failing at it, hehehe! XD
Nice work man, looking forward to more.
Erm, if lulu and tia are in this school and are both still ponies... then who the fuck is running the country? Have I missed something?
Cover-art is amazing, and I've never seen a Luna either 'moon spots' before. That being said, couldn't finish the chapter. There's something about the setting that causes me no small amount of rage. Nothing against you, my HS memories aren't the best, and I tend to get angry when the memories are poked at. I think that's my reaction to deep embarrassment as a whole, actually.
And Aim for the Starts! Let me fly the distance of the Jupiter from mars.Let me Sing forever more, You are all i long for worship and adore, in another words. Please be TRUUUUUUUUUUUEEE! In Another words, In anothers words,Iiiiiii Love you
*with a Smoth Jaz playing on the background*
My cabbages!
Ah, neigh school, such a quaint Time. High school was bullshit.
She gave him a bemused look over the rim of her glasses. “Yes, I do, Mr. Copperwell. I’m well aware of what’s happening this weekend… just as I am well aware of the fact that you are, at the moment, single. So, that’s an extra day of studying for you. I expect you to do well on the test.”
The colt’s mouth turned into a wicked smirk and says,
"Yes you are quite correct Mrs. Tenure, but just as you are aware of what my relationship status is I am also aware that yours is the same as mine. Now if you would like to accompany me to the fare tomorrow we can both rectify this."
The entire class stares in shock, Mrs. Tenure sits in her seat slack jawed blushing up a storm, whether its from being flustered or angry she is undecided.
After a minute of silence the 'colt' continues,
"Still undecided? I'll be over at five thirty tomorrow, try to have come up with a response by then."
The the 'colt' trots out of the room like he owns the place.
(As It turns out this 'colt' had a maxed out charisma, for some reason.)
Cute goth luna being all awkward and stuff
lookingforward to more
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This is clearly a pony America AU. Assume everything is the same as it is in America just with all the usual ponies in power actually being ordinary my citizens instead. Or just ignore it all because frankly the setting doesn't matter. Or assume that this is actually a clone Luna or something, you can go wherever you want with this, the point being is that it really doesn't matter.
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is this a platonic or romantic v day gift to pusspuss because i can imagine nothing more romantic than gifting someone you like with well written clop of their OTP.
So damn cute! Can't wait for more!
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If having Max chained up in my basement is romantic, then yes.
That picture oh my god
7948245 you need to whip him more, we need more YHaY ASAP :P
(jk, you write at your own speed, this will count as my fix)
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Is... is this a reference to whiskey dick?
Well. I am sitting at home filled with pain medication up to my eyebrows and readind pony romance.
Atleast you were productive.
7948780 Care to share?...
Edit: Your medication I mean..
Only 3 chapters? Dude, this has potential to become a much more developed story!
I already love the way you portrayed the sisters, I'll be sad when this one is over
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I second this, I could read this for ages lol
Bummer it's only a 3 chapter
Source of that Luna draw please?
7949397 http://zheddel.deviantart.com/art/Goth-Luna-660361171.
Here is is
7949440 Thanks dude
Shoot for the moon! Even if you miss, you'll... something something, Stars!
7948245 Pics or it didn't happen.
This seems pretty good so far. Nice work.
Good as always, so far. Can't wait for the rest.
This gives me warm feelings
I like this story. A lot. And the cover art looks gorgeous.
Seriously, am I the only one who gets the Avatar reference about the cabbages being trashed? good job.
Oh god that photo, it would have been 11/10 if she had lettuce stuck in her braces
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exceptional Profile art