It's hard to try new things, especially in front of a live audience. This leaves Octavia Melody nervous about performing a new song she co-wrote with Vinyl Scratch. It's something she has never done before. However, since she is a veteran performer, Octavia decides to lose herself and let the music do the talking.
Edited by tommal
Cover Art by: MetaDragonArt
Based upon the song "Applause" by Lady Gaga
Featured in the "Reviewer's Cafe"
This was a really good short story! Other than a few minor grammatical and spelling issues there isn't to much I can point out that was off about the story.
I especially enjoyed the last paragraph and quote.
This is my favorite one so far. I love Octavia and Vinyl Scratch. Especially the way you described her playing the music was awesome. You painted a beautiful picture of that performance.
Awesome.
Nice little nugget of a one shot. The descriptions were nice to set the tone.
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Greetings. I hope you don't mind, but I did a reading of your story, which can be found below. I hope you enjoy.