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good job
You should had some more comma's I had to re-read some parts and pause to under stand.
Good story though not trying to be mean or anything
Couldn't our main man just drink Twilignts blood to get a greater magic boost? I mean she is the element of magic after all? And are we just gonna forget the whole Cadence fiasco? Great chapter though. Even though you placed that cliff we have to hang off of at the end here.
AbrĂa estado bien una imagen para describir la armadura