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Happy winter solstice and good chapter, but this leads to my question to be answered.
What's going on with twilight and the age changing spell? (answer probably will be in the next chapter.)
Also, filly Rainbow Dash:encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn%3AANd9GcRqLS2f6gxb9oUmKqJNeIBKFOQCKbdw2KT0GQoXnAp4sN3Vfmhf
*SEES NEW CHAPTER*
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IT LIVES! AHAHAHAHAHHA
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Okay. I'll admit. That was fun. Go Alucard!
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Praise Jebus!
SLOW down! Start working on one problem area at a time. Start off with slowing down, you had the black patch resolved in minutes, slow down and let the suspense build for a few chapters until we get a reveal of what happened. More dialogue is something that you need to take seriously, one of the best ways to build a character is to have a lot of dialogue, after all. Now...
Actually, scratch that, just focus on making your writing more detailed. Get your character to sit down and think about what he is doing. Self-reflection is vital to any story. If you have so much crazy in this story you might as well add the random tag.
Also, grammar! Missing words! misspelled words! Slowing down will help you catch those mistakes. Have you ever considered to re-read a chapter to edit it?
Ha!!!!!
God damn I've been waiting so long for u to finally add more to this story... THANK YOU.
But seriously I love this story.
I love this story! When is the next chapter?
Did u catch writers block
Is the new chapter almost finished
When is the next chapter
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More?
Is the next chapter almost done
have roy make his on royal guard of Vampire's or something
More?
Mmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee please
Is this getting an update?
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Hmmm. I've been keeping an eye on this story since the last update 2 years ago. It's safe to say that it's probably not getting any attention for at least another few months. But hey I have been proven wrong before.
IS THIS HISTORY DEAD??