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The fuck? Seriously 2 things is something i dislike about this chapter, 1: Roy is to forgiving and 2: you still need to fix your grammar problem, jeez man i mean english is not my birth language so i do not know much about proper english grammar but even i know enough english to know that much. Don't you have an editor something to help you out?
good job
Well, that was interesting and loved the fight.
KO awesome chapter, looks like Cadance got herself a growth spurt from Roy and getting some hate-sex punishment from Luna despite being a vampire I don't think he'll be walking for a day or two after that.
Wasn't my favorite chapter, but loved the fight and the Grammer is ok. It could of been much worse if you think about it lol
THE DEAD WILL DANCE AND ALL HELL SHALL SING!!!
Where was the hound in all of this? I thought it was supposed to be protecting nightmare. I'm not complaining just wondering.
The fight was good, but kind of lackluster. I thought it would be more drawn out, because of the buildup in the earlier chapters.
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“I am the bird of Hermes " The bird of Hermes is my name eating my wings to make me tame!”