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Nice chapter but you REALLY gotta work on your editting
Huh... ya know I would have tapped heart butt. But hey that's just me. Great chapter bud. Can't wait for more.
Hey moonking, don't listen to some of these comments, your doing a great job and I love everything you have written here, I love the story, I love the people you wrote and how you wrote them, I love the choices you made, and I love the main guy, I think what you've made is one of the best story's I've read, so who cares what others write, people write for three reasons, to give credit, to help give advice, or to be big dicks, I hope you read this and think it's worth it to keep writing, I wanna see the next chapter, I wanna see him turn armor into a bigger badass, I wanna see him get all the girls and win his fights, I wanna see him back a big badass dad and king, and I wanna see him distroy the Griffen royalty and all they stand for, I want you to know you have my support and many others there are 78 people (me included) who gave this a thumbs up, screw anyone else, if you write, write for the joy of it, for the fun of creating this universe, and for entertaining all of the 78 who liked this, even if there's only one who likes your story, then it's worth its continue ? so keep your head up and write when you can my friend, because you have my support
This is a bit of an unbelievable statement too far over the top if you get my drift. The problem is people who act like Blueblood here, don't think they're "destroying live's" or playing with mare's. They see it as either their right or the rightful order of the world so to speak. Very seldom will anyone demonize their actions. No matter how horrid our actions appear to other people to us they will be justified in some way.
I've already spoken to you about the honestly terrible portrayal of the hellsing series so I won't get into it here. But I just want you to know I still think you should remove the crossover tag. The only thing you've kept constant from the series are the names and abilities. And I'm questioning the abilities too. When Alucard drank the blood of his victims he gained everything they ever were. So he shouldn't need to learn the spells he would simply need to use the knowledge he gained from the sisters and whatever he could use from the guards and blueblood. Also the series revolved around the Bible, Alucard had no ties to Norse beliefs so the Valhalla bit is out of place.
It's been a week?
Not bad you really need a proofreader though it makes it hard to keep track of everything with all the errors I can only guess English isn't your primary language so maybe find someone who can translate better for you? Just a suggestion the story itself I love keep it up
Solo por este capítulo ya vale la historia vale la pena
The chapter is not bad, I liked the fight but he’s Alucard, he doesn’t need magic. It’s like giving Batman a weapon
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Not very necessary, but all kinds of awesome?
iM a BiCh
Im A lOvEr
Im A cHiLd
Im A mOtHeR
iM a SiNnEr
Im A sAiNt
I dO nOt FeEl AsHaMeD
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I couldn’t have said it any better I completely agree and also encourage the author to continue their awesome work. And for those who disliked this comment can kiss my ass. The thing is those who make stupid comments or dislike actual genuine comments like these are either a asshole or just so bored they feel like doing it or both.