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Born with the power of dragons, Spike Draco is the chosen hero destined to save the worlds of his home, New York, and Equestria, with the aid of his adopted mother and uncle, his best friends, and seven several blasts from his past.


Cover image is only temporary, until I could manage the development of my own cover.

First Published
11th Jan 2017
Last Modified
13th Feb 2017

Awesome, liking where this is going.

This looks very promising. I love how you added my fave Owl City song to it.

This has potential to be a good fic, though I saw a few spelling mistakes, overall this story is well written.

Some will say your story seems cliche, but as long as you know what your writing, some readers (including me) will overlook the cliches as long as the story is rich and well written.

I really like the idea of adopted/humanized Spike, just don't rush character development and relationship development. I.E: Two characters fall in love instantly for no good reason and rut like pigs soon after.

Before posting a chapter read it over once out loud. Trust me from one fanfic author to another it really helps.

quite the prologue. just curious is this gonna be a spike harem fic?

>>7859441 I see Is it gonna be the mane 6 ( and beyond) or are u gonna mix it up a little?

This is definitely something to keep an eye on...one thing though,  I see the Human and Anthro tags here in this.   From what I've read from it,  I get that Spike's a hybrid--he's a human boy, but he can turn into a dragon.   The way it first described Princess Celestia,  I have to assume that she's canon pony.   My question is this:  I can belive that Spike has an Anthro form when he changes from his human form, but is he the only one with everypony else being canon forms, or are the citizens of Equestria anthro?

A slight bit of confusion there,  it would be appreciated to clear this up.

>>7864427 Um, Scorpan can also change from gargoyle to human. Doesn't that count for the anthro tag?

I mean, no, Spike and Scorpan aren't the only ones. You'll see what I mean.

Born with the power of shapeshifting into a ferocious dragon to the cutest puppy,
Do you mean from a ferocious dragon to the cutest puppy?

Great job, so far some great characters have appeared, and Flintheart is definitely a great character even if he's fictional in Equestria. Unless that Hearthwarming Eve story was real.

>>7865691 Indeed he is as Severus Snape reborn.

I just hope I can keep it up with the others coming along.

>>7865629 Well Spike isn't really born a dragon, just with dragon powers, so I just assumed it mean he can change from a human into various forms ranging from a dragon to a puppy.

Good chapter...and another question are other characters such as Ember, Trixie, Sunset, Starlight, the Dazzlings, and the Shadowbolts going to make an appearance?

This was awesome, and hilarious with Snips and Snails getting the full dodge ball hits. I can't wait to see next time.

Next we'll have Rarity and Pinkie Pie. Wait, you said 7 blasts from his past. Who's the 7th?

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My guesses,  Ember and/or Sunset Shimmer.    Ember because one dragon just isn't enough,  Sunset because she would complete the rainbow.

Of course there gonna be some surprises that we probably didn't think of...

Oh, Spike your popularity keeps on increasing every second.

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>>7870827

Lets not forget this could also mean that it may be starlight as well.

Just finish reading all of this story chapter, and I'm liking so far.:moustache: keep it up.

Awesome fights, and I loved the scene with Flintheart referring to Zephyr as a repeater, and Somnambula another classic gen 1 villain. I really hope she gets a FIM makeover.

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I really hope she gets a FIM makeover.

How do you prefer her to look? Bellatrix Lestrange? Maleficent? Or just stick with the Mother Gothel look?

>>7883855 I'd prefer the Bellatrix look, though in Equestria she might not look so human.

This is so exating i whant more now!!

Yo draco here this fic is killer cant wait for more

:flutterrage:MMMMOOOOAAAARRR

I love how you write fight scene. This was a good chapter

Hmmmm...... Spike and Celestia's mother and son relationship is portrayed realistically, emotional and touching moments, great jokes, and overall brilliant. I'll continue to read.

excellent job and now I'm looking forward to Spike getting ready to face the dangers that lie ahead.

I Love all this love Spike gets.

Can not wait to see reach the next level of his training.

*Trollish Smile* UNLEASH THE DRAGON

Hey, it was said and this song is stuck in my head...I haven't played overwatch yet but this song alone makes want to take a look at it.

I'd like to see more of this. It has really got me interested. I patiently await for the next chapter.

Loved the shouts out to the other forms of training used in Karate Kid and Jake Long.

Yep. It's good to see the things Spike does in a different light, rather than how some other fiction writers perceive as slave labor.

Am I the only one who went "WTF" when Spike's reflex to "Clean the Toilet" was to stick out his dragon tongue?

>>7922539  that was crazy weird. Loved the american dragon reference,nostalgia

We need more fuzzy and Cuddel moments thos are the best. Great chapter do.

So beautiful, and I loved the training montage and Fluttershy training Spike as a dog. And the opening. Nothing's better than waking up to a bevy of beauties in bed with you.

So, when do you figure that Spike discovers that he's a prince in a different dimension from the one they are now,  and that the ruler of Equestria (well one of them anyway) is his mom that he keeps having memories with and can't really understand why he has these memories?

Was there a retcon that I'm unaware of? Because I remember Spike being an infant when the events of the first chapter occurred. Or did I just misunderstand?

>>7941558 If you're referring to the dreams Spike had with Celestia, then those are just to give more depth to his childhood and the bond he had with her.

>>7942053 Speaking of who, when will Celestia reunite with her son?

>>7943707 That's for me to know, and for you to wait and see.

Awesome work once again. I can't wait to see how they get themselves out of this one.

Chpter is the most creative one you got ......

And i luv it please write more

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