Rainbow has known Fluttershy for a long time, almost longer than she can remember remembering things at all. Lately, though... things have been weird. Not like... super weird, but weird.
It's like... Shy is still Shy, but cooler? Not quite. It's complicated. Rainbow wasn't actually planning to do anything about it, though. Not until Applejack stuck her nose into Rainbow's business.
Still, maybe it will be okay. She just has to talk to Shy, right?
Delightfullt Adequate.
B+
Very enjoyable.
A great quick feel good story that lets you imagine about what happened before and after the confession without leaving you hanging.
Nice. The perspective switches at good times to keep the flow feeling natural.
This is nice.
D'awww adorable!
That cover picture.
So many feels
You might wanna go over your grammar, but a very touching read nonetheless.
This is so charmingly full of d'awws and
"Darling, it is absolutely vital that you don't let Rainbow Dash say she loves you while acting like herself! Her confessing feelings for you while being true to herself would be catastrophic!! Why, the poor dear might actually think you care about her! Just the way she is... on the inside!! No. You must make it very clear from the beginning that if she wants you to accept her feelings she has to change everything about herself, because that is true love."
Me reading this: "why didn't they make it power-p as in Pegasus?"
Three line later: "wait... Shit."
7811376 Indeed! It's almost as if it's sort of silly for Rarity to be giving advice on romance when she's never had a successful one
Fluffy and delightful. Sweet little read
And indeed, Shy, trust Rarity who has only an idea of romance but never truly lived it as long as we know
Dat cover art tho.
That's sweet.I ship them.Is there anything cuter in the show that can beat this in terms of those two?
A great cute and fluffy read. Grammar errors aside, this story gave me the warm fuzzies, and I enjoyed reading it all the way through. Nothing like a cute romantic story between two close friends to get you started for the day.
7811463 "Oh no no, Darling! I can assure you I'm only concerned for our friendships! How can we remain friends without common ground? If they find blissful love together how will they understand me, or I them, Darling? No! After their hearts are crushed and they have experienced the bitter heartache I have the three of us will have a powerful experience to bond over! I dare say we will soon be closer than ever! And I won't have to go back to spending solitary spa visits reflecting on my loneliness."
"Wait, what was that last part?"
"Oh dear, did I say that out loud?"
"Eeyup."
"OH OH! I'll love you Rarity!!
Solid fluffy nonsense. very nice.
well captures the weird mental loops the mind gets into when contemplating these kinda of confessions
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Well, that is the point after all - Rarity's "advice" is thoroughly naive and useless here. It provides a nice bit of conflict and gives some more room to play with the characters besides dancing around a discovery of their mutual affection, as is the typical routine for such stories.
Fluffy happy cuteness. I approve.
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Because everyone on this site is a dirty dirty pervert XD
Absolutely adorable.