This is a great story so far. I like how emotion is expressed and that it's very well written. I can't wait to read future chapters.

Looks inspired by Why Am I Pinkie Pie?

Still it's good because the idea is not overused yet.

Keep it coming!

Hm....

Sounds like "Rarity" is suffering from a case of mindfuck.

It can only escalate from here.....

I want to go mud diving with Sweetie Belle.

>>934774934774 don't everybody

nice chapter.. it really builds up anticipation for the next one..

btw.. i laughed hard at I really hope that my use of "some pony" is just a sign of me turning into a brony and not a sign of turning into Rarity.

still laughing about that line

Lucky guy. . . I wish I were turning into Rarity.

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Our main character's case of mindfuck is now severe.

>>972269972269 Heh, yeah. That was pretty funny.

>>972275972275 Careful what you wish for. It may come back to bite you in the butt... and not the good kind of bite.

>>972482972482 That's what my reaction would be like to that situation in a nutshell.

>>973936973936 Indeed.

It seems like Twilight should've bought Not-Rarity dinner before MIND EFFING her!

Enjoying the story so far. Keep up the good work!

For those of you who are going to ask, yes. I did get inspiration for not-Rarity's 'name' from another story.  Please feel free to go read his work called "Death Note: Equestria".  Or don't if you're not into that sort of thing.

Murder cases aren't for everyone. *shrugs*

Another chapter.  

Huzzah!

Hmm... Generally I really dislike it when a story has Pinkie so blatantly break the fourth wall, because she doesn't really actually do that. Although in a story like this, I guess it's at least a little bit less out of place.

Anyway, that's pretty much my one mild gripe, so other than that, [insert generic positive message here].

>>991864991864

Okay, I altered it slightly. How's it look now?

>>992354992354

I'm actually kinda surprised you changed it. The facial expression thing is amusing in a bizarrely Pinkie That-Makes-No-Sense Pie kind of way though.

What the heck am I doing?

This was very silly.

Jeez, enough nightmares for ya, pal?

inception

If you'r gonna tell a linear story TELL a linear story!

Famous words of the Nostalgia critic.

But seriously i had no idea what was going on.

So many nightmares!

I sometimes wonder if I got high in a past life or something.

An interesting twist in the "Why am I X?" stories.

Uh, it's more of a North Eastern American Atlantic accent.

Sorta posh, a false dialect if you will.

... I would simply DIE if I were in his position...

The awkward embarrassment would be too much for me to handle.

Or just faint, whatever comes first.

Yes! This story has updated again!

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