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I wake up and for not appropriately explained reason, I have turned into Rarity.
Only problem is that I think Rarity is worst pony.
In fact, I hate her, just to be more obvious.
(Story was gonna be a part of a group but that's not happening anymore)
This story will update whenever I have the need to continue it, mostly due to a block.
Don't take it seriously, I wrote this on a whim.
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Well i'm going to fav this, just to see where you take it in the future (if you even do)
Not bad, imo.
1508477 I wrote it in 30 minutes, my mind just kind of wondered...
Wow. I may have to compare the other Rarity submission to this when it's out. This is extremely well-written.
I am a sucker for fics like these.
but I have to say, pretty good so far!
1508489 Thank you, I appreciate the praise, even though I think it's a mess.
1508493 Thank you! I expected to receive more hate than praise though...
Rarity is best pony, fool.
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Dat epic avatar. Edd was awesome
1508531 I will give you a moustache for sharing your opinion.
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I'll add it to my mustache collection!
Hmm not bad not bad at all but need to be a bit more longer plzz :D
1508671 This was more of a "pilot" sort of thing, if I- no, whenever I get back to writing this I will make sure to make longer chapters.
Well, I'm not going to dislike it, but...
You've got competition as this particular concept has been submitted already.
Twice in fact.
Nothing personal.
>Rarity is worst pony
>I hate her.
K, I've heard enough ill mannered words about my waifu. I bid you good day.
1509187 I apologize for hurting your feelings by insulting your waifu.
Perhaps we could establish an agreement my good sir.
1509034 It was? I honestly didn't know. That would explain the amount of bipolar votes I'm getting.
Faved, just to see where it goes. Kinda interesting...
Now, being the manly man I was, I did the only reasonable thing that any other man would have done if he were stuck in my own position.
I passed out.
If he did it the same way Rarity does it, that will be so ironic.
Still, good job so far, can't wait to read more.
oh my gosh did you just break one of the laws of the ponyverse! i hope your thumbs down wont catch up with your thumbs up!
1586881 Indeed I did, well, as far as I know, real life ponies CAN eat meat, but it is not good for them to do it on a regular basis.
As I said, i have no idea where I am going with this, so I went with my gut o this one.
May Celestia have mercy on my soul.
It's okay. This seems like a story that would do well with an aimless direction.
The silliness factor creeps in here...keep going.
OH NOAZ!!!i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/293/590/6f6.gif
1588791 Here I thought it would be widely disliked.
In that case, you got it .
"Human becomes a pony without leaving Earth" is a theme that really needs to be used more often.
1595451 Actually, it has been done quite a bit.
There is a group called Pony Earthverse doing these kind of stories, except they opted for a more serious tone.
Mine is just full blown pointless silliness.
1595643 Silliness... That's how I like it!
And that's how I plan to keep it
This keeps getting more absurd with each chapter .. keep going!
This chapter I like it!i29.photobucket.com/albums/c296/feydulac/ThorAnother.gif
1598096 Ah' sure will.
1600075 Maaaaaybe I will give you another, I can't decide.
i fail at making fics but this i will try, this gave me the idea.
~Derp (don't ask why my bff is pumpkin queen, i didn't want to piss her off.)
Favorite outburst?
But... Rarity has a boatload of individual outbursts.
There's no way your protagonist can possibly know which one is Jacquelynn's favorite.
This chapter was a pain in the ass, I had to rewrite it over and over because I hated how it turned out, not my favorite but I hope you guys enjoy it somewhat.
I wish I had come across this story later. That way I could read chapter after chapter without having to wait for updates between each one. The hilarity could build up and I'd be unable to breathe from the combined comedic value of all the chapters.
Longer chapters would drastically improve this story, but past experience has taught me that I should probably file that recommendation under the "wishful thinking" category.
1619042 Trust me, I wish I could update this more often, but writing a story based on randomness is difficult, since I use things that just randomly get in my head at some point..
1619083 It's not too difficult for me. But then, I'm not exactly right in the head. I actually have too much randomness. I'd let you borrow some of mine if I could.
That last line... It can't be that simple. It's never, ever that simple.
Yeah, Sombra's more of a force rather than an actual villain. No less threatening, but much less character to flesh out.
As for the last line:
1635316 This helps a lot.
Cool, like the new background picture
I thought Rarity would freak out at the sight of another version of her...
1639562 On any other occasion she would, except this time she knows what's going on.
1640160 oops...looking forward to more.
I like the direction this is going. Looking forward to more. Interesting concept of the two of you sharing the same body -- my Twilight story doesn't take that angle...
This chapter turned out dreadful.
My focus kept going back to Professor Layton, and seeing as I couldn't come up with anything better, here you go.
I'm starting to regret this story.
I still want to see where this goes...
At least you don't have more than three stories you regret.
(There are some things I've submitted that I'm not proud of.)
1697952 Don't be so down on yourself. This story was begun on a whim, I am more of a writer by impulse, I found out that I actually enjoy it sure, but you have written 11 stories and you are still here, who knows how much I'll write and how long I'll stay!
Maybe the rest of my stories will suck even more.
1769517 May I ask what's so funny?
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