UPDATE:
Well I remembered my password. Odds are that I will continue this on my new account as a rewrite. I'm gonna fix this sad excuse for writing.
This is my new account
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Lucky+Star+33094
That way in the event I do rewrite it, it doesn't look like sompony stealing the fic.
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After waking up in Canterlot as the fictional character
Twilight Sparkle, I am whisked away to ponyville where I meet the main cast.
Is this all a dream? Or am I some how living out my greatest dream come true?
Only time and magic can tell as I set forward through the story, with only one question on my mind:
"what the buck am I going to do if I can't use magic?"
written by Lucky star of MLP forums
A special thanks to Super2379 of MLP forums for editing chapter one and two.
another special thanks to Ezn's guide, with it's help I will be doing my own editing from now on.
chapter two is coming soon
Interesting, I like.
5143115 thank you
I really appreciate it.
Hmm... I will be honest, the pacing seems too fast, and the fact there was no mention of the original Twilight has be curious as to where she is. This story (like all the other Becoming stories i have read before) has potential to become an awesome story. Now while i could say your MC is being too accepting of suddenly being Twilight, for now I am willing to chalk it up to them just being totally and utterly confused as to whats going on, and that when everything finally sinks in they will have a Twilight style break down
Hope to see an update soon
5143455 I really appreciate the feed back
yes I know the pacing is a bit fast, its kinda something I'v had a problem with it when it comes to non pony stories that I've written in the past.
so I'll be working on that.
maybe I'm too used to short stories.
My mc is pretty committed to the whole
This-Is-A-Dream thing.
thanks again for the feed back
5143631 Quite welcome!
So where is the Equestrian Twilight? Surely shes still around and will run into her new Doppelganger and have a
moment.
On a side note I just now recalled which other "becoming" stories i have read, one was "Becoming Sweetie Belle" and one was "An Apple Far from the Tree" (in which the MC becomes an Apple Bloom look alike) both are great stories and if you haven't read yet I would Highly recommend em
5143874 so far the only becoming story I'v read has been about Vynal scratch.
so I'll check those ones out.
but I will say this before you get too excited...
its not going to be a doppelganger story, the mc has literally become Twilight.
I really don't want to expose to much of the upcoming plot though, I hope you understand.
5143893 ooooh I see
I dont suppose you could throw me a linky to the Becoming Vinylscratch story could you?
5143914 I guess I could
here you go! its really good by the way.
I hope you like it too.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/221483/1/how-i-became-vinyl-scratch/how-i-became-vinyl-scratch#page/2
5143934 Thanks!
I like this kind of story, following the trail of original. The only problem is almost nome of them complete the story and stop in the middle. So I hope this one would not. I don't really care about the story goes hasty since we know the background. this kind of fiction become hard when you start to make your original plot. If you dont prepare your original plot really elaborately from the intro to the end, you will put "on hitaus" tag your own fiction and never come back. That is a tragedy to both side, a writer and readers.
5144874 don't worry too much about the plot after I start moving away from the original.
this story had been bouncing around in my brain like a herd of Pinkie Pie for a few months. 
thank you for the feed back
Just a small detail, we already know you wrote it, or you wouldn't have published it here, right?
Could you put just a bit more into the summary?
You need to number the Chapters?
Otherwise, the story seems fine, his far.
5176344
sorry for the late reply.
the summary is short on purpose.
thats all you need to know for now.
yes I felt it was necessary to number the chapter.
5177445 I have no problem with the Summary being short, it is commonly more catchy and snappy if it is short.
Long winded Summaries are commonly thowned upon here, by the looks.
Maybe focus and paragraphs is the next step?
You could use the "Chapter Counter" to number the chapters, without taking up half the line, spelling it out in such depthly detail, when it adds nothing to the story, unless there is a deeper meaning and purpose that is not explained yet?
5177891 oh, so short summaries are easier on the eyes? well forget the summary... on the chapter numbering...
I had no Idea fim fiction had anything like a chapter counter
I'll fix it when I get the next chapter up.
5183457 You could refrase the Summary with paragraphs included, without actually adding more information. The problem is just that it feels like a brick.
Well, when you spell it out "Chapter on:" in the begining, you could have spelled it "%i%, on the end and giving all you need, with minimal effort. You could even swap order on the chapters without the name telling.
This is the first chapter, so I have a problem seeing you as taking it over mid-story, it is automatically stated in the title that it is yours, you did notice, right?
On the final note, capitalize the name of the chapter instead of the chapter count?
two noticing there.
While I was looking forward your next chapter, there is nothing much to say. Pretty much the same flow with original. I hoped a few change honestly, like enjoying lunch with Apples or more friendly encounter with RD.
5217537
things should start happening in the next chapter.
5262232 thank you!
I'm really glad you like it so far. 
should have read this first, its great
cant wait to see this story develop and grow.
i also cant wait to see how our little protagonist will fair seeing as how she has solid evidence of future events
lets hope to a wonderful story you've earned a tracking favorite and an up-vote, keep it up
5287539 thank you for the kind words
I really needed it!
hehe comments feed my writing machine.
I'm actually almost done with the next chapter!
still a bit confusing to read two similar storys, or at least they both are Human turned Twilight, but it starts ro look like i could like this story for his own pace, and because how it is written. Right now i somehow like it that every Pony get her own chapter.
5291276
everypony gets one.
tell em spidey
i.imgur.com/nooAgxr.jpg
5291276
what's the other one if I may ask?
She need to teleport in front of NMM and teleportation spell is usually depicted as high level spell. I doubt the spell would be in the basic books.
5309376 What does NMM mean? I've already tried to google it.
no answer was found!
we'll be getting to teleportation in a bit.
and yes, it would not be in a basic level spell book.
5313404 it meant Nightmare Moon. Sorry about confusion. :)
5314479 Oh! xD that makes sense!
I'm sure I can write around it, I mean I can't have the mc teleporting when she can barely levitate yet. don't worry!
if there is a will there is a way!
Sweetie for the Save
Hot sauce,
There the facehoof has been DOUBLED!
I have read it a bit to fast, because it looked like it would be 90% of the episode, and not to much changes in the story.
Like i said i already read a similar story with a more or less bold Twilight, and i don´t remember your other chapters that much right now, but i did not like that chapter as much as the others i think.
Long story short, i don´t like this chapter that much, because it looks like it is the same as in the episode, but i guess you can´t change this eposode that much.
Ezn's guide to editing the galaxy?
I very curious of what happened to twilight, maybe she botched a spell in the future?
So she did not meet Pinkie Pie in the exact same way that the cartoon, bravo!
Well,, this meetings went a lot like the show.
I applaud you for not making this a carbon copy of the first episode.
Hahaha.
Well levitation has to be quite easy, as every adult unicorn can do it.
You did well, have a moon pie!
5433657 a bit late, but now i understand it, i didn´t translated closet right, but know i understand it, and
does this story continue?
Lucky stars abandoned this... offline for 22 weeks.. well.. I haven't even read the story yet, but it is pointless to read something given up on.
6078530 I got a new account. O-O I didn't think the story was good enough and wanted to start fresh. How did it get so many dang upvotes? Whoa.
5786935
Thanks even though I kinda stopped writing this story.
need ta figure out my old password,
Seeing it with fifty upvotes makes me think it might be worth doing a re-write
5786805
can't beleive I thought that was okay. Meh, I'll fix it in the rewrite. 
As I'm re-reading this I keep thinking of all the stuf I could have done.
6560923 Well I remembered my password. Odds are that I will continue this on my new account as a rewrite. I'm gonna fix this sad excuse for writing.
6078530 You're right about that, it would be pointless.