"I don't know how it happened, but apparently I am in my favorite character's body!" 
"I wouldn't mind being in my own pony turned body,"
"BUT REALLY!?"
"WHY DID I HAVE TO BE IN FLUTTERSHY'S BODY!?"
"no offense flutters..."
It's okay...
Note: Rated T for gender swap.
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Hmmm... Neat.
7051526 what was the funniest part do you think?
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Sorry, haven't read it yet. I'm just saying that the concept is neat, and has earned my like.
7051539 oh...
Well, this story's human is based on me, so I am basing his choices on what I would do.
How exactly does gender swap equal teen rating?
7051698 There is frequent mention of it. Do I even need to explain?
LB & NS: Human in a pony body sharing a mind with the pony?
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this seems like a fun story, im hoping to see it update soon.
Neat tricks.
Ahh okay, finally I noticed this story too.
Well I already want to ask if there is a story like this, Human as the main six, but the one that turned Pony is really acting out of character, maybe like an agressive Fluttershy or a shy Rainbow Dash, stuff like this.
I start with this story in a short while, but I already wanted to take my change.
edit: I just noticed the really short chapters, and well I would like it if your suggestions for other storys would be longer.
....
I already feel like everything that was written till now is probably one chapter material. In a way it is nice to read, but nothing special this short.
Please make your chapters longer, and you shouldn't rush a story that much, that you even don´t write a scene that is supposed to be there.
In a way I have fun with it, but I can´t stop thinking about how good this maybe could be.
While I liked a certain story with a Floyd guy being in Pinkie, I kind of hoped this wouldn´t happen.
Not a bad thing, but I kind of miss the Humans that sort of try to hide what they are for a while.
half of the time when this happens I always expect them to get a trauma. Sometimes it actually sounds like someone would say they aren´t real.
At least the chapter was a little bit longer this time
That´s more or less what I need, I mean around this amount of words.
The only thing I have to say about this chapter....I guess maybe I expected Angle to worry about where the real Fluttershy would be.
edit: I forgot to answer your question,....I think I´m happy with this chapter.
While it was a bit to short again, I more or less didn´t expected more, but well it was alright I guess.
Sometimes it is a bit weird if everything went´s to perfect, but at least he had some sort of an own personality as far as I can notice.
So not bad for a.... first try maybe?
7080404
I read that story too! but what do you mean you hoped this wouldn't happen?
For one Flutters isn't Pinkie.
Not me! I don't want them to think I'm someone i'm not! "Tell the truth and hope for the best!"
You forget! Twilight asks if I was from Canterlot High, and I said no!
7079254 what tricks?
7091555 hey, does you or anyone know of stories like this that happened with applejack and/or rarity? I found good similar stories for everypony but them.
7116329 No... I don't.
The reason I picked Fluttershy is because she is like me.
I'm not saying I'm shy, but I do find it hard to think of what to say (or type)
And I like animals too. I'm not as responsible, but If I were trapped on an Island
with nothing to eat except one deer. I would rather eat the grass.
7203885 Sorry about that... My friend Swords was screwing around on my account I should have logged off..
Yea the intro can get annoying time to time
I like it. So this way a good read.
I really like this with FlutterShy
. I hope you can make more chapters. plz
I don't want to rush you. Just do your best, and that will be so great.
7313241 Thanks for the support!
Sorry if you're getting impatient I'm just lazy...
7314049 it's okay
. Don't push yourself too hard. It will come out ok.
Hope that light bulb for great....... Wait
where was I going with this........ 
oh well
So.... hope you have a wonderful night.
7080387 Lazily written but I added a short little part there.
edit:Okay maybe not that bad!
That's what you get for skipping the intro!
7419352 I don't know what it's called!
The lake near ponyville.
Skipping the intro? I like you already
1999 hooray my year!! :/ Making Kevin age 17 like I am but younger of seven month of my age.Your story idea is nice and all but at least make a chapter at least 1k till 2k or more per new chapter and make paragraph look more neatly and nice so it look interested to a reader so if you can heed to my advice it will make the story a lot of interesting . So Keep on going with your idea and make a new path that the reader would be interest on a new writer of the current generation for their new ideas in fiction.
If the lightning is blue you are going to the future! (back to the future™)
7497142 This is a self insert, and the beginning takes place a month or so from now (unless its already been September 27th by now) Thank you for the constructive criticism!
7497763 Did you REALLY have to make a reference?
7059887 They have done this with the Pony Earth Universe (where humans awake to find they are sharing their mind with a canon mlp or oc character (or one of the various recurring characters like the cmc or the school children).
They r PERFECT how they already are.just hopes he can leave her body as his human self in the future.either that or him leave as a Pegasus.and future chapters.
I like sotries like this to bad a lot of them are cancelled or might as well be sine they havnt been updated in for ever
7419348
Well... I skip the intro all the time... Except on the season premiere
7497763
*Hums BTTF theme*
7080404
Perhaps I could add in the little detail of them nearly losing it, that is when I start writing again. Even so, I have no clue if anyone actually cares for my story an ymore. It's been a few years or so.
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I wish I could tell you something else but I got kind of bored or annoyed with some stories more or less repeating the same habits, the same way characters react or whatever else I might not like about certain characters in the fanfictions here like how Celestia is written half of the time or in romance stories.
What I mean is I would maybe not exactly continue reading this but I could image reading a rewrite.
Not sure what I disliked about it, but it sounds as if this was a chase of two characters sharing a body again right?
I think maybe make Fluttershy a rare character appearing in her dreams once in a while not everytime or have her appear at a later time in the story. I mean I often pray for the human either getting his own pony body or the same, so that both of them exist.....
Maybe you know what I mean, not sure if I describe it good tonight.
edit: I just thought in a possible rewrite I would enjoy her acting differently than from what they used to like being rude or brave too, or maybe make her live somewhere else or going home to Fluttershys parents after finding a clue.
I could image enjoying the fact that the main six try to find their friend for the first chapters of the story.
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I have some plans for either a rewrite on how interaction is or continuing the story or both. I just have other plans and things in the way. However it's on my bucket list. This is only the beginning of the story anyways. Hopefully you may come back to finish when it does get back on it's feet. I apologise for the delays.
Oh wow people still read this? I should update.
Wow so much attention here... Do people want this story to continue?
yes do more chapters
next chapter?
10589189
not sure. right now im writing something else that will blow your socks off. maybe.