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SonicAKG


Someone facing his guilty pleasure

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Sonic and co. with the Rainbooms decide to head out for dinner with the Dazzlings in order to give them a chance by the request of Sonata. Everything actually seems to be going fine until Sonata ends up trapping herself inside the restaurants freezer. It's not just any old freezer, which Sonata and the others find out the hard way when she ends up getting everyone else trapped in with her as well.

*Based on the story Freezer Burned by sonicfan05 and written with his approval:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/275818/freezer-burned*

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 28 )

I liked it! It's very funny and the dialogue flowed very well. I'm interested to see how the rest of the story goes.

A very good start! I'll be tracking this! :twilightsmile:

Seems like a good start. I liked the original story and good job putting in the new characters. But I wonder what happened to Flash? He was with the group in the original but not here.

7702377 You'll see him next chapter.

Easy way to get out of a freezer: Don't get stuck in the freezer in the first place, or just kick it open from the inside. :rainbowwild:

Good work, anyways. :twilightsmile:

Not as good as Trapped In The Closet. Then again, not everyone can capture the essence of R. Kelly.

Well you know what they say hehe. What can possibly go wrong.

Jeeze guys did you forget that Spike was a dog. When food hits the floor it's yours to eat.

Man Filthy Rich in this universe is a jerk. Which is kind of strange since he seemed rather. Ice in Equestria.

I-I-" Filthy Rich stuttered. "It's just for advertisement! You can't use that to get a free meal!"

Well then you get in trouble for false advertising.

I just feel sorry for Trixie here. She didn't really do anything too bad. Makes sense why she wouldn't want to serve the sirens.

And Sonata is in the freezer. Hope she can hold it.

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Did you see LOE? He was a villain in that one

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Oh trust me I did. I'm not just talking about Filthy here I'm also talking about him in EG in general. I'm actually fine with it a little since it proves that the humans in EG aren't just carbon copies of the ponies. It's the reason I like Sci Twi she isn't a carbon copy of pony Twilight she actually a little bit different from her. Though I do definitely like Filthy more as a pony than a human. Makes m wonder what happened with this Filthy to make him bad. Maybe something happened between him and Spoiled Rich.

Someone really needs to watch the door so it doesn't get shut when people come looking for them. So Manic and Lyra used to date. Figures Manic would mess that up.

Thought the fact that Manic's power is t working makes it seems like something suspicious is happening here.

*Sighs* ok come on guys!!! It's simple. Just get someone posted at the door that way it someone opens it they can hold it open and everyon can get out.

Spike is gonna be the one to save the day isn't he.

Well this was a very ship teasing chapter.

Gotta say I think Sonata was a little too stupid in this chapter.

"Wouldn't you be warmer if you were back to huddling with your bro and the rest of the crusaders?" Manic brought up."

I didn't know Sweetie had a brother.

"No, but it will make us feel better! Now can it, needle mouse!" Filthy Rich said"

That insult doesn't quite work now that Sonic isn't a hedgehog.

Everybody got out and horribly trampled. Poor guy fandom hates him, his girlfriend is in another dimension, and now he gets trampled.

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Whoops, I must have mixed up Sweetie and Apple Bloom

Eh,for Sonic, his hair looks like a hedgehog's though is what I had in mind.

Oh cool Celestia apologized. I did think she was a little too harsh siding with the angry mob.

And the moral of the story is if anyone wants to go out to eat you stay home and order pizza instead..... I approve of this moral.

2000 years later....

I really enjoy your stories. The conversations between both Team Sonic and the Rainbooms is so real and convincing, like that's how these characters would react to each other if these were real. You also do a great job of making each story seem like a Sonic X or a Sonic Boom episode (that's a compliment). Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapters.

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Hey, thanks man. I appreciate it. How much have you read so far?

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I've read your Sonic and Equestria Girls short stories, and the Friendship Games story. I want to read the other ones, but before I do, I gotta ask, Is there like a timeline, or any preferred order of stories to this universe you've created?

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Before FG is Journey into dreams, After FG, is LOE, then Fiendship, then Total Eclipse, then Main attraction, then Forces.

Did you read all of the short stories in Sonic and EQG by the way?
Also, how as FG?

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I stopped around the Holiday Special, wanted to read FG before going any further with it. But I plan to continue afterwards.

"So this is where that chair was! Who in the right mind would put it here?!" She said in an annoyed tone as she removed the chair from the door, making it begin to close as she walked away. There was a loud slam and Filthy Rich's face sunk as he heard the noise and turned around to see that he was locked inside....again.

That's poetic justice if I've ever seen it.

"Ok! I want a...uuh......." Sonata said as she inspected the menu.

Who is she Patrick?:rainbowhuh:

Sonata continued to think about what she wanted to eat. It was taking.....a while to say so for the least. Sonic was tapping his fingers against the table rapidly. He had enough of waiting for one night. He wasn't the only one getting impatient. The rest of the group looked like they wanted to urge Sonata to choose.

"How about some tacos?" Manic suggested.

"I know! I'll pick some tacos!" Sonata said suddenly with even acknowledging Manic. He put his head on the table.

"Finally!" Trixie said with relief. "Now, what kind?"

"Oh....let me think..." Sonata said, making everyone else complain out loud. Trixie tried not to rip up her notepad while Sonic was sitting in his seat, quite agitated.

...The only thing missing now is Squidward banging his head against the register :rainbowlaugh:

"Why are you guys in here? You're not having some kind of party are you?" She added as she came up in Manic's face with a suspicious look.

"Yes, we've decided to lock ourselves in a freezer even though we have meals outside waiting for us." He sarcastically answered.

"You did? I thought you were in here because I switched the signs." Sonata said confused. Trixie looked as if she wanted to rip her face off and she leaned against the wall.

:facehoof: ... This is based on That Kenan &Kel episode isn't It? :facehoof:

"Open Sesame!" She yelled as she stuck her hands out towards the door. Everyone looked at Sonata in complete disbelief at what she had done and Sunset and Manic slowly exchanged looks. Sonata looked down at her hands and then at the door, slightly disappointed.

...Well...She did everything she could :pinkiesmile:

"Ok, now you can freak out." He said, sinking everyone's hopes as he began to clutch himself for warmth.

Silver...YOU'RE WAY PAST THE POINT WHERE TO FREAK OUT!!!:facehoof:

"Next time you ask me why I don't hang out with you people, this is my excuse." Shadow just said.

For once I agree with Shadow...It does sound like a good excuse to me :eeyup:

"So...everyone's been stuck in this freezer because the arrow sign to the bathroom got mixed up and the door handles been broken. Also, super powers can't bust us out of here and every time someone new comes in, they end up shutting the door behind them, leaving us to maybe freeze if someone doesn't save us?" AppleJack said in a deadpan tone, summing everything up.

"Eeyup." Big Mac just answered nonchalantly.

Didn't they make a joke like this in the show? :rainbowhuh:

"Ohhh....is he a giant talking Egg?" Sonata asked, making Aria slap her forehead as Adagio pinched her nose.

Nice reference to Adventure :ajsmug:

"I still don't understand how no one was able to stop the door from closing!" Rarity shrieked at the top of her lungs, while she was met with sighs from everyone else in the room.

Well as Tv tropes would say...BECAUSE YOU'RE ALL HOLDING THE DAMN IDIOT BALL!!! :flutterrage:

"THIS. IS. THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!!!!" Rarity cried out loud in a very dramatic manner along with a dramatic pose as she then began to weep as she buried her face in her arms.

PFFFT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA It's been years since I heard this :rainbowlaugh:

"I know. I know it won't change what I did, but I still want to let you know how sorry I am, ok?! I'm sorry our first date wasn't great and I'm sorry that I let you down and it was all my fault as I was stupid enough to go after some dumb drum set instead of the amazing girl who actually took the time out of her day to hang out with me! I'm sorry that I wasted your time! Someone like you deserves way better! You deserved to be treated in a way that is as great as you and I'm sorry that I wasn't able to do that to you." Manic blurted out as he then sighed.

Lyra looked at Manic and she saw the sincerity on his face. His words had really meant a lot to her actually and she really didn't know what to say as she blushed a little.

"Y-you, really mean that?!" She began. "Oh, Manic. I've been too hard on you! You deserve another chance!" Lyra added as she pulled up Manic's face to look into his eyes. Both of them flashed smiles towards each other before Lyra began to lean in for a kiss.

Yay good for you Manic :yay: :twilightsmile:

"Uh, what are you doing?!" Manic yelled as he jumped back from her. "Don't kiss me, you're all gross and sweaty!"

...Forget It he's still a moron :twilightoops: :facehoof:

"Oh, no! Spike! He must be all alone at our seats!" She cried as both Sonic and Sunset turned to see her.

"Wait, maybe Spike could somehow get us out of here." Sonic said as both Twilight and Sunset looked at him strangely as if he was crazy.

"He's a dog." Twilight said.

A talking dog and even if It was equestria's Spike he did save them like that before :ajsmug:

"I got!" Sonata said as she stopped the door from closing.

The entire crowd cheered out loud. Finally, they could leave this horrid freezer.

"Now, let's get out of here, everyone!" Sonic instructed.

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As people began to head to the door, the door suddenly slammed shut, stopping everyone in their tracks as they all formed looks of disbelief.

"What just happened?!" Tails cried out loud.

"She locked us in?!" The Flim Flam brothers said in unison.

"Why would she do that?!" Luna exclaimed.

The crowd started to panic again, but this time, Sonic kicked the metal door with much force, making a loud noise throughout the room. Everyone turned around to see him next to Sunset.

"Ok, I admit that I don't know why Sonata just left us in here, but I am certain that when she comes back, she'll open the door and get us all out!" Sunset explained to all the residents.

As she finished talking, the door swung open again to reveal Sonata, with a happy face as she sighed in relief. Immediately, the door slammed shut behind her, making everyone's faces sink.

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And there was so much shipping in this chapter that I'll just point that out and save my joke for another time :rainbowkiss:

Well that's a wrap :twilightsmile: compared to most of the other histories this was quite relaxing :ajsmug: well as relaxing as It can get while being trapped in a freezer like that episode of Kenan & Kel :twilightblush: also could you tell me the timeline of this series??? I am a little confused :applejackconfused:

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