Sonic and co. with the Rainbooms decide to head out for dinner with the Dazzlings in order to give them a chance by the request of Sonata. Everything actually seems to be going fine until Sonata ends up trapping herself inside the restaurants freezer. It's not just any old freezer, which Sonata and the others find out the hard way when she ends up getting everyone else trapped in with her as well.
*Based on the story Freezer Burned by sonicfan05 and written with his approval:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/275818/freezer-burned*
I liked it! It's very funny and the dialogue flowed very well. I'm interested to see how the rest of the story goes.
A very good start! I'll be tracking this!
Seems like a good start. I liked the original story and good job putting in the new characters. But I wonder what happened to Flash? He was with the group in the original but not here.
7702377 You'll see him next chapter.
Easy way to get out of a freezer: Don't get stuck in the freezer in the first place, or just kick it open from the inside.
Good work, anyways.
Not as good as Trapped In The Closet. Then again, not everyone can capture the essence of R. Kelly.
Well you know what they say hehe. What can possibly go wrong.
Jeeze guys did you forget that Spike was a dog. When food hits the floor it's yours to eat.
Man Filthy Rich in this universe is a jerk. Which is kind of strange since he seemed rather. Ice in Equestria.
I-I-" Filthy Rich stuttered. "It's just for advertisement! You can't use that to get a free meal!"
Well then you get in trouble for false advertising.
I just feel sorry for Trixie here. She didn't really do anything too bad. Makes sense why she wouldn't want to serve the sirens.
And Sonata is in the freezer. Hope she can hold it.
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Did you see LOE? He was a villain in that one
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Oh trust me I did. I'm not just talking about Filthy here I'm also talking about him in EG in general. I'm actually fine with it a little since it proves that the humans in EG aren't just carbon copies of the ponies. It's the reason I like Sci Twi she isn't a carbon copy of pony Twilight she actually a little bit different from her. Though I do definitely like Filthy more as a pony than a human. Makes m wonder what happened with this Filthy to make him bad. Maybe something happened between him and Spoiled Rich.
Someone really needs to watch the door so it doesn't get shut when people come looking for them. So Manic and Lyra used to date. Figures Manic would mess that up.
Thought the fact that Manic's power is t working makes it seems like something suspicious is happening here.
*Sighs* ok come on guys!!! It's simple. Just get someone posted at the door that way it someone opens it they can hold it open and everyon can get out.
Spike is gonna be the one to save the day isn't he.
Well this was a very ship teasing chapter.
Gotta say I think Sonata was a little too stupid in this chapter.
"Wouldn't you be warmer if you were back to huddling with your bro and the rest of the crusaders?" Manic brought up."
I didn't know Sweetie had a brother.
"No, but it will make us feel better! Now can it, needle mouse!" Filthy Rich said"
That insult doesn't quite work now that Sonic isn't a hedgehog.
Everybody got out and horribly trampled. Poor guy fandom hates him, his girlfriend is in another dimension, and now he gets trampled.
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Whoops, I must have mixed up Sweetie and Apple Bloom
Eh,for Sonic, his hair looks like a hedgehog's though is what I had in mind.
Oh cool Celestia apologized. I did think she was a little too harsh siding with the angry mob.
And the moral of the story is if anyone wants to go out to eat you stay home and order pizza instead..... I approve of this moral.
2000 years later....
I really enjoy your stories. The conversations between both Team Sonic and the Rainbooms is so real and convincing, like that's how these characters would react to each other if these were real. You also do a great job of making each story seem like a Sonic X or a Sonic Boom episode (that's a compliment). Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapters.
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Hey, thanks man. I appreciate it. How much have you read so far?
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I've read your Sonic and Equestria Girls short stories, and the Friendship Games story. I want to read the other ones, but before I do, I gotta ask, Is there like a timeline, or any preferred order of stories to this universe you've created?
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Before FG is Journey into dreams, After FG, is LOE, then Fiendship, then Total Eclipse, then Main attraction, then Forces.
Did you read all of the short stories in Sonic and EQG by the way?
Also, how as FG?
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I stopped around the Holiday Special, wanted to read FG before going any further with it. But I plan to continue afterwards.
That's poetic justice if I've ever seen it.
Who is she Patrick?
...The only thing missing now is Squidward banging his head against the register
... This is based on That Kenan &Kel episode isn't It?
...Well...She did everything she could
Silver...YOU'RE WAY PAST THE POINT WHERE TO FREAK OUT!!!
For once I agree with Shadow...It does sound like a good excuse to me
Didn't they make a joke like this in the show?
Nice reference to Adventure
Well as Tv tropes would say...BECAUSE YOU'RE ALL HOLDING THE DAMN IDIOT BALL!!!
PFFFT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA It's been years since I heard this
Yay good for you Manic
...Forget It he's still a moron
A talking dog and even if It was equestria's Spike he did save them like that before
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And there was so much shipping in this chapter that I'll just point that out and save my joke for another time
Well that's a wrap compared to most of the other histories this was quite relaxing well as relaxing as It can get while being trapped in a freezer like that episode of Kenan & Kel also could you tell me the timeline of this series??? I am a little confused