i love MLP FIM and i love to imagine ponies also i like to role play as ponies and make fics
Ponyville has a storm brewing and everyone is hiding but when ponies run into a cave its kinda hard to escape. 7 ponies Trapped in a cave system will they find there way out or meet certain doom what trials will they face on the way find out in this funny and compelling story.
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Well, I hate to say this but...
Grammar is meh
Storyline is so-so
The sentences don't flow that well
Maybe you could get a proofreader or something?
But you show some promise. Maybe make the story more engaging and get a proofreader?
*Racial obscenity against black people*
where?