• Published 12th Jul 2012
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Trapped. - Thunder.S.Strike



this is a story of some original characters me and daniel made so enjoy our first of many to come.

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An ur.. ur... ursa RUNNN!!!

while the other ponies were walking through the cave chatting thunder had already ran ahead and was waiting impatiently. when the ponies had stopped talking they met with thunder, thunder was completely still and the other ponies were confused lavender spoke

"uhh... thunder what are you doi.."

she was cut off by thunder's hoof in her face. lavender was mumbling with a hoof in her face when thunder said quietly

"quiet"

then the other ponies saw that right in front of them was a sleeping ursa minor. after a few minutes thunder spoke again quietly

"now ponies lets just back up nice an.."

she was interupted by a stone that had moved, thunder looked back and said angrily

"who was that"

no pony came forward

"i said be quiet. now lets go slowly backwards, easy, easy"

then suddenly a lavender sneezed a big sneeze which echoed through the whole cave.Thunder put her hoof to her face, then turned around and again angrily said

"i said BE QUIET".

right then all the ponies were cowering behind applejack, suddenly every pony said in a cowardly voice "lo.. lo.. look behind you. she slowly turned to see the ursa minor which had awakened, and with a yelp lavender shouted

"RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNN"

the ponie ran into different groups. scootaloo, thunder and applejack went one way sweetie bell, applebloom, lavender and rarity went the other.

then the cave went with a crashing and it was completely dark.
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"where are we"

a scared filli's voice said then suddenly the room eluminated the room the light was coming from thunders horn.

"were in a cave scootaloo. but dont worry im here"

then they heard a cry for help "anypony help me"thunder ran to the source of the noise

"it's applejack scootaloo"

said concerned

"stand next to me scootaloo be prepared for this"

"arrghh" thunder said in an powerful voice.

the light suddenly went off and thunder could feel the young filly grab her leg and with a gigle said

"dont worry",

appljack was lifted from the rocks then the light came back.

"thank ya kindly thunder"

applejack said laying next to them

"are you ok?"

to which applejack replied

"yes but i think another minute i woulda broken leg"

"well" said thunder "we better hurry and get outa here"

the other two nodded and followed thunder.

***

the room was completely dark the ponies could hear the ursa minor banging trying to get the ponies then a whiny voice cryed out

"HELP HELP IT'S GOT ME"

sweetie bell iluminated the room and lavender ran straight to rarity

"uhh rarity.."

but instead of letting lavender finish she burst out

"are you going to help or leave me oh help HELP"

then applbloom burst out laughing lavender tried to talk ocassionaly

"rar.."

"this is not a laughing matter little one it got me"

until lavender shouted

"RARITY"

"it's just a spider"

rarity replied in a snoody voice

"i.. i knew that i.. was acting.. yes acting of course"

"that right"

lavender replied shaking her head at the other ponies while they giggled.

"anyway" said lavender "we best be looking for a way out because if i know thunder she'll be doing a smart or stupid thing mostly smart in a situation like this but im not sure"

"lets go then"

sweetie bell said rushing down the cave with applebloom with lavender and rarity following closely behind.
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in the next few chapter's the characters will be known better so tune in over the next couple of days for the newer chapters

PS. if this goes well me and daniel will make more with these characters + we have friends who have made stories and they (who are also side characters) will appear in the series in things go well im nervous anyway stay tuned